Us ka Wisaal ab Mere kahan Mukadaar main tha:Shayri-E-Dard

Farhan Sohail

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Us ka Wisaal ab mere kahan mukadaar main tha
Wohi se pher muntazir saya mere ghar main tha

Ajab shab manzar meri iss nazar ney dekha hai
Jab main na tha tu soya kon mere bistar main tha

La ilm tha agr tu meri muhabbat sey to
Raat pher bata kyun main tere har zikar main tha

Pochtay hain pata mujh se makeen wahin ke hi
Halankay ajnaabi main usi ke shehar main tha

Yaran e sahil mera alwidaa hi samjhay
Ishara madad ka jo kiya main nay bhanwar main tha

FARHAN SOHAIL


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Re: Us ka Wisaal ab Mere kahan Mukadaar main tha

«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2013, 08:03:32 PM »

Quote from: Farhan Sohail on April 03, 2013, 07:44:38 PM

achcha likha hai per mere khyaal se qafia zikr aur shahr hoga is lehaaz se ham-qafia nahin hua . aap check kar lein Applause


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Us ka Wisaal ab Mere kahan Mukadaar main tha

«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2013, 08:34:24 PM »

Farhan Sahaab Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab, bade hi umdaa khayaalaat ko khoob lafzoN meiN dhala hai aapne... Badi achchi kalaam rahi..

Humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
HaaN bechain sahaab ki baat gaur talab hai zaroor amal kareN...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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Farhan Sohail

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Re: Us ka Wisaal ab Mere kahan Mukadaar main tha

«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2013, 09:04:44 PM »

Parwaaz and Adil Saheb......!

Qafia darust hai, pher b main ne kafi ghoor kiya hai,

agr aap koi islah samjhain tu mujhay apni raye se zaror agah kijeye ga,

thanks


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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Re: Us ka Wisaal ab Mere kahan Mukadaar main tha

«Reply #4 on: April 04, 2013, 02:10:07 AM »

Bahut Khoob.


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shubham goyal

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Re: Us ka Wisaal ab Mere kahan Mukadaar main tha

«Reply #5 on: April 04, 2013, 01:51:32 PM »


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