Us khushi ko vida kar diya.... Mann

by mann.mann on April 05, 2012, 08:51:21 AM
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Us khushi ko vida kar diya.
Mere ghar jo bani paahuni thi.

Raag ruthe rahe bewajah hi,
Muh firaye rahi raagini thi.

Sabne ik sath chhoda hamen,
Chhand gum chhup gayi chandni thi.

Sukh ke tane aur baane bune,
Odhani rah gayi adhabuni thi.

Gham lage poos ke jaade se,
Uski thapki magar gunguni thi.

Geet mahfil main gata raha ”mann”
Baat uski magar ansuni thi.


Mann
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«Reply #1 on: April 05, 2012, 09:00:23 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on April 05, 2012, 08:51:21 AM
Us khushi ko vida kar diya.
Mere ghara jo bani paahuni thi.

Raag ruthe bewajah hi,
Muh firaye rahi raagini thi.

Sabne ik sath chhoda hamen,
Chhand gum chhup gayi chandni thi.

Sukh ke tane aur baane bune,
Odhani rah gayi adhabuni thi.

Gham lage poos ke jaade se,
Uski thapki magar gunguni thi.

Geet mahfil main gata raha ”mann”
Baat uski magar ansuni thi.


Mann



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«Reply #2 on: April 05, 2012, 09:06:28 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya qalbji
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«Reply #3 on: April 05, 2012, 09:17:02 AM »
khub kaha hai mann sahab
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«Reply #4 on: April 05, 2012, 09:20:47 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya saahilji
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«Reply #5 on: April 05, 2012, 09:37:23 AM »
Mann Jee Aadaab!



Janab achchi kalaam ko anjaam dene ki khoob koshish rahi
aapki ... khayaal behad khoob rahe ... aur ashaaroN meiN
bhi achche se dhala aapne.... Usual Smile

Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez,,, Usual Smile


Quote from: mann.mann on April 05, 2012, 08:51:21 AM
Us khushi ko vida kar diya.
Mere ghara jo bani paahuni thi.

Kia kahne janab bahut khoob achcha khayaal hai... par janab
Khushi ko koi khud se bidaa nahi kar sakta...  Is it SO!
Aur haaN shaayad aap maharashtrian hai jo aapne ghar ko ghara aur paahuni"
lafz ka istemal kiya hai... Paahuni" achcha laga sunkar pahdkar jyada tar
hum log toH pahunaa hi use karte hai masculine word ke taur par... Usual Smile
Isliye " aapka Paahuni word use karna achcha laga .... daad daad daad Usual Smile

Raag ruthe bewajah hi,
Muh firaye rahi raagini thi.

Achcha hai janab daad Usual Smile

Sabne ik sath chhoda hamen,
Chhand gum chhup gayi chandni thi.

bahut khoob aik humara purana ashaar yaad aa gaya ...
Aur haaN dusri line meiN chhup gayi ke bajaay chhupi kar dijiye.. gayi ki
zaroorat nahi raheNgi... Usual Smile


Teri hi moujudgi se mujhe, Lagta tha khushgawar har mousam
Ab bin tere yeh chand, tare, zameen o aasman GumsuM GumsuM


Sukh ke tane aur baane bune,
Odhani rah gayi adhabuni thi.

Achcha hai ...

Gham lage poos ke jaade se,
Uski thapki magar gunguni thi.

Bahut khoob daad Usual Smile

Geet mahfil main gata raha ”mann”
Baat uski magar ansuni thi.


WaaH bahut khoob jee daad Usual Smile

Mann
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«Reply #6 on: April 05, 2012, 09:37:50 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: April 05, 2012, 09:42:12 AM »
bahut khub ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 05, 2012, 10:57:43 AM »
bohat khoob vikki :D
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«Reply #9 on: April 05, 2012, 11:09:48 AM »
parwaazji bahut bahut shukriya aapka... sach kahu to aapse aise hi reply ki ummid rahti hai... jahan ek ek sher ko tatola gaya ho...

ji marastriyan nahin hun main.... ghara main typing mistake hai... jab ise likhne baithe to pahuni shabd hi dimag main tha... usike ird gird ye tana bana buna gaya....


aise hi sath bane rahiyega....
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«Reply #10 on: April 05, 2012, 11:16:12 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad janab sainiji
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«Reply #11 on: April 05, 2012, 11:17:44 AM »
bahut shukriya soudagarji
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«Reply #12 on: April 05, 2012, 11:18:25 AM »


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shabd nahi mere paas ki tarif karu
likha hai itna pyara aap ney kya
main aap sey tarif karu,
taliyaa baja key sirf yehi kehna hai
mann saheb shabd kam hai, kya tareef karu


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«Reply #13 on: April 05, 2012, 11:24:05 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad nidhiji...

yun hi sath banaye rakhiyega.
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«Reply #14 on: April 05, 2012, 11:25:53 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad jasbirji...

aapki taliyan anmol hain mere lie ummid hai aap yun hi sath bane rahenge...
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