Us ladki ka dard...........

by poppoetry on July 08, 2009, 06:37:54 PM
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Barso baad aaj aankhe uski is kadar bhar aayi hai
Jaise badlon ne barsaat ki jhadi lgayi hai

Har roj maangi dua na de wo kisi ko koi dard-takleef
Na jaane kyu dua  bhi uska sath na nibha payi hai

Jisse rishte ki aas me jee rahi thi wo zindagi
Chhod gya duniya ko wo,har taraf sirf udasi chayi hai

Dil ne kha usko khatam kar de wo apni zindagi ko
Khudkhushi paap hai,yahi sochkar badhte kadmo ko piche layi hai

Tanha rehne ki shayad ab aadat si ho gayi hai use
Mehfil se bhi pyari lagne lagi use tanhayi hai

Ki koshishe bahut khud ko badalne ki usne
Par haar k siwa khuch bhi haasil na kar payi hai

Khuch apno ne hi chhode hai teer kadwi baaton k
Chalni hua hai dil uska....
shayad isliye aaj uski aankhe is kadar bhar aayi hai
Jaise badlon ne barsaat ki jhadi lagayi hai
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2009, 11:13:46 PM »
Waah Waah boho khoob pops ji...  Applause  Applause
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Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2009, 11:18:11 PM »
Popat

Very touching ... i could feel the emotions sad5
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2009, 11:21:21 PM »
wah kay abaat hai, bahoot khoob poppoetry ji!!
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2009, 12:31:12 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause  Applause

Bohot khoob Pops dear...bohot khoob
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2009, 02:23:06 PM »
Wow.. Great Words Pooja... Bahut Bahut Bahut Touching Lafz Likhe hain Dear.... Ek ek Lafz se Dard aur Gam chalak raha hai.. Alfaazon Ko Behad Khubsoorati se sajaaya hai.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob Dear... Applause Applause


Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2009, 06:22:54 PM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on July 08, 2009, 11:13:46 PM
Waah Waah boho khoob pops ji...  Applause  Applause
shukriya sayyid ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2009, 06:25:02 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on July 08, 2009, 11:21:21 PM
wah kay abaat hai, bahoot khoob poppoetry ji!!
Quote from: Celmira on July 09, 2009, 12:31:12 PM
Applause Applause Applause  Applause

Bohot khoob Pops dear...bohot khoob
bahut bahut shukriya pooja di
bahut bahut shukriya celmira ji....khushi hui aap dono ko pasand aaya
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2009, 06:26:30 PM »
Quote from: Rajbir on July 08, 2009, 11:18:11 PM
Popat

Very touching ... i could feel the emotions sad5
thanx a lot Raj ji....
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2009, 06:28:58 PM »
Quote from: Mann on July 09, 2009, 02:23:06 PM
Wow.. Great Words Pooja... Bahut Bahut Bahut Touching Lafz Likhe hain Dear.... Ek ek Lafz se Dard aur Gam chalak raha hai.. Alfaazon Ko Behad Khubsoorati se sajaaya hai.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob Dear... Applause Applause


Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
bahut bahut shukriya Mann ji....itne pyare lafjo k liye teh dil se shukriya
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2009, 06:35:13 PM »
Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoooob Pooja...

Padhe Waqt Iss Baat Ka Ehsaas Ho raha Tha Ke Aapne Apne Dil mein Bahut Dard Chupa Rakha Hai...Har Lafz Kuch keh raha Tha..

Pooja, Aapne Baakhoobi Apne Jazbaato Ko Lafzo mein Dhaala Hai..

Bahut khooooob Mere Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2009, 07:01:21 PM »
Bahut dard hai aapke iss Kavita mein Pooja ji,excellent vry beautiful creation.
 icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: July 10, 2009, 05:44:02 AM »
bahut achche puja dear last four lines

mere aashiane main aa kar dekh har taraf tu hi tu hai
phir kyun na maanu main ki tu mujhme shaamil nahin
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«Reply #13 on: July 10, 2009, 10:41:57 AM »
Quote from: @kaash on July 09, 2009, 02:25:58 PM
Applause Applause Applause
waah bahot khoob likha hai aapne Pop ji
bahot hi achi aur dard bhari kavita
shukriya kaash ji
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«Reply #14 on: July 10, 2009, 10:44:39 AM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja ji.. bahoot hi dard bara aake iss qalam mea. Very well expressed.
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