Use apna banane ka irada chodd diya...Raaj

by Sunil Malhotra on November 30, 2012, 03:08:34 PM
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Usne har mushkil ghari me mera sath chodd diya hai,
Hamne bhi use yaad aana chodd diya hai.

Usne jamane bhar ke saamne meri mahobbat ko ruswa kiya hai,
Humne tanhai me bhi uska naam lena chodd diya hai.

Bhale hi usse wafa kar ke mujhe kuch hasil nahi hua hai,
fir bhi main bas usi ka hi hoon.

Itna toot kar bhi us par itna hak rakha hai maine,
Basaya hai use apni rooh me par use apna banane ka irada chodd diya.
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«Reply #1 on: November 30, 2012, 03:46:09 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 30, 2012, 04:29:22 PM »
Bahut bahut bahut khoob...
Aise hi kalam chalate raho ...mean dil se
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«Reply #3 on: November 30, 2012, 04:37:40 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 01, 2012, 03:14:24 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: December 01, 2012, 09:15:37 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: December 01, 2012, 11:38:57 AM »
bahut bahut bahut hi khoob
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