Usi ka asar hai shayad ye

by klaskar on April 11, 2010, 07:15:33 PM
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Aaj har taraf bahut sunapan hai.Bahut khaali khaali sa lagta hai har taraf. Shayad jo mohabbat ka toofan tha wo shaant ho gaya...

Usi ka asar hai shayad ye

aaj mausam mein khamoshi hai,
toofan shant ho gaya,
usi ka asar hai shayad ye,
kahin aag lagi thi,
wo bujh gayi ,
usi ka asar hai shayad ye...

kal tak ek wajah thi mere jeene ki,
wo wajah khatam ho gayi,
usi ka asar hai shayad ye,
kal tak khoya rehta tha khwaab me,
aaj Wo khwaab tut gaya,
usi ka asar hai shayad ye...

saath chalna tha humko safar me,
baantke ghum aur khushiyaan,
kuch pal saath chalen bhi the hum,
aaj wo safar khatam ho gaya,
usi ka asar hai shayad ye...

jab milne jaata tha main usse,
Kehti mujhse, o preetam, o pyare,
tumse mujhe mohabbat hai,
aaj wo mohabbat khatam ho gayi,
usi ka asar hai shayad ye....

aaj mausam mein khamoshi hai,
toofan shant ho gaya,
usi ka asar hai shayad ye...
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neelgold
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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2010, 08:55:49 PM »
Wah KApil Ji ..........
Khoob kahi aap ne........

Usi ka asar hai ki aaj yeh nazam main itna dard hai 
Usi ka asar hai ki aaj yeh Alam itna sard hai 
Voh nahi hai to yeh Aknhain Num kyon hai 
Usi ka asar hai ki aaj b seene main voh dard hai ...............

Is DIl main uthethe hai toofan kai 
Dimag main ulzthe hai sawal kai 
Kya gila aur shikva karin kissi se
Usi ka asar hai jo aaj yeh ban rehe hai Kalam kai...............


Quote from: klaskar on April 11, 2010, 07:15:33 PM
Aaj har taraf bahut sunapan hai.Bahut khaali khaali sa lagta hai har taraf. Shayad jo mohabbat ka toofan tha wo shaant ho gaya...

Usi ka asar hai shayad ye

aaj mausam mein khamoshi hai,
toofan shant ho gaya,
usi ka asar hai shayad ye,
kahin aag lagi thi,
wo bujh gayi ,
usi ka asar hai shayad ye...

kal tak ek wajah thi mere jeene ki,
wo wajah khatam ho gayi,
usi ka asar hai shayad ye,
kal tak khoya rehta tha khwaab me,
aaj Wo khwaab tut gaya,
usi ka asar hai shayad ye...

saath chalna tha humko safar me,
baantke ghum aur khushiyaan,
kuch pal saath chalen bhi the hum,
aaj wo safar khatam ho gaya,
usi ka asar hai shayad ye...

jab milne jaata tha main usse,
Kehti mujhse, o preetam, o pyare,
tumse mujhe mohabbat hai,
aaj wo mohabbat khatam ho gayi,
usi ka asar hai shayad ye....

aaj mausam mein khamoshi hai,
toofan shant ho gaya,
usi ka asar hai shayad ye...
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2010, 09:32:49 PM »
Bahut bahut khoob Kapil ji and Neel ji,aap dono ne bahut hi dard aur khoobsurti se likha.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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riyaz106
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«Reply #3 on: April 12, 2010, 06:43:42 AM »
Bahot khoob Kapil ji. Bahot achhe.
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: April 12, 2010, 07:50:55 AM »
Wah Bahut Khoob Kapil Ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 12, 2010, 07:52:04 AM »
Quote from: neelgold on April 11, 2010, 08:55:49 PM
Wah KApil Ji ..........
Khoob kahi aap ne........

Usi ka asar hai ki aaj yeh nazam main itna dard hai 
Usi ka asar hai ki aaj yeh Alam itna sard hai 
Voh nahi hai to yeh Aknhain Num kyon hai 
Usi ka asar hai ki aaj b seene main voh dard hai ...............

Is DIl main uthethe hai toofan kai 
Dimag main ulzthe hai sawal kai 
Kya gila aur shikva karin kissi se
Usi ka asar hai jo aaj yeh ban rehe hai Kalam kai...............


Nice response Neel Ji
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«Reply #6 on: April 12, 2010, 08:37:02 AM »
Wah kya baat hai          Klaskar ji.....


"Usi ka asar hai shayad ye"....
mera dil kisi aur ko nahi chahta
khahi hai peheli mohabbat mein aesi thookar
ki mohabbat ke naam se hi mera dil gabhrata
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«Reply #7 on: April 12, 2010, 08:58:31 AM »
Quote from: cara on April 12, 2010, 08:37:02 AM
Wah kya baat hai          Klaskar ji.....


"Usi ka asar hai shayad ye"....
mera dil kisi aur ko nahi chahta
khayee hai peheli mohabbat mein aesi thokar
ki mohabbat ke naam se hi mera dil gabhrata

Good one Cara Ji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #8 on: April 12, 2010, 09:09:44 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Cara ji,lovely lines.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause


USI KI CHAHAT KA ASAR HAI SHAYAD JO MUJHE GAZAL LIKHNE PE MAJBOOR KAR DIYA
MERE ZAKHMI DIL MEIN APNA NAAM LIKH GAYA
USI KI DEEWANAPAN KA ASAR HAI SHAYAD,JO MERE CHAHERE PE MUSKAAN AA GAYE.

EK KOSHISH MERI TARAF SE. Feared. Feared. notworthy
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«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2010, 07:44:34 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 11, 2010, 09:32:49 PM
Bahut bahut khoob Kapil ji and Neel ji,aap dono ne bahut hi dard aur khoobsurti se likha.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #10 on: April 12, 2010, 07:45:35 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz ji...!!!

Quote from: riyaz106 on April 12, 2010, 06:43:42 AM
Bahot khoob Kapil ji. Bahot achhe.
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«Reply #11 on: April 12, 2010, 07:48:43 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 12, 2010, 07:50:55 AM
Wah Bahut Khoob Kapil Ji
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«Reply #12 on: April 12, 2010, 07:49:53 PM »
Thanx Cara ji...!!!

Quote from: cara on April 12, 2010, 08:37:02 AM
Wah kya baat hai          Klaskar ji.....


"Usi ka asar hai shayad ye"....
mera dil kisi aur ko nahi chahta
khahi hai peheli mohabbat mein aesi thookar
ki mohabbat ke naam se hi mera dil gabhrata
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«Reply #13 on: April 12, 2010, 07:59:36 PM »
aapne bahut khoob likha hai Madhu ji....bahut hi khoobsurat koshish ki hai aapne... uski taarif me do line likh raha hoon...!!!

khoobsurti to aapke baaton me bhi hai,
ghazal aap bahut khoobsurat likhte hain,
kabhi kabhi sochte hain kitna khoobsurat dil hoga aapka,
jiske hone se aap itna khoobsurat likhte hain,

na to asar kisi deewane ka hai,
na to zakhmi huye dil ka hai,
ek dil hai apka bahut khoobsurat,
asar to ye bas usi ka hai ...

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 12, 2010, 09:09:44 AM
USI KI CHAHAT KA ASAR HAI SHAYAD JO MUJHE GAZAL LIKHNE PE MAJBOOR KAR DIYA
MERE ZAKHMI DIL MEIN APNA NAAM LIKH GAYA
USI KI DEEWANAPAN KA ASAR HAI SHAYAD,JO MERE CHAHERE PE MUSKAAN AA GAYE.

EK KOSHISH MERI TARAF SE. Feared. Feared. notworthy
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«Reply #14 on: April 12, 2010, 08:33:24 PM »
Shukriya Neel... aur aapne bhi bahut hi pyaara aur dard bhara nagma likha hai.... bahut hi achcha likha hai...

haan sach kaha aapne usi ka asar hai shayad ye,
kuch yaadein jo dil ki dhadkane tez kar jaati hai,
kuch baatein jo khamoshi ko cheer jaati hai,
kuch nagmein hai jo hum tanhaayi me gungunate hain,
kal tak unke saathe gate the har geet,
aaj wo nahi to un geeton me unki kami si hai,
kal tak gaate the mohabbat k taraane,
aaj unhi taraano me sirf dard hai,
aaj mausam mein khamoshi hai,
toofan jo tha pyaar ka wo shaant ho gaya,
jo diya jalaya tha mohabbat ka wo bujh gaya,
usi ka asar hai shayad ye.....

Quote from: neelgold on April 11, 2010, 08:55:49 PM
Wah KApil Ji ..........
Khoob kahi aap ne........

Usi ka asar hai ki aaj yeh nazam main itna dard hai 
Usi ka asar hai ki aaj yeh Alam itna sard hai 
Voh nahi hai to yeh Aknhain Num kyon hai 
Usi ka asar hai ki aaj b seene main voh dard hai ...............

Is DIl main uthethe hai toofan kai 
Dimag main ulzthe hai sawal kai 
Kya gila aur shikva karin kissi se
Usi ka asar hai jo aaj yeh ban rehe hai Kalam kai...............
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