"usi ko dard diye ja rha hu.n"

by aaina on June 12, 2009, 10:53:15 PM
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aaina
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Gireh labo.n ki kisi kal wo kholta hi nahi
Bichad rha hu.n mujhko rokta hi nahi

Nazar  na lag jaye kahin wo isi dar se
Nigaah bhar ke meri simt daikhta hi nahi

Zakhmi huway jaate hain mere khyalaat
Wo kirchay aaine ki sametta hi nahi

Khuwahishe.n khudgharz hui jaati hain
Aur wo hai ki mujhko tokta hi nahi

Usi ko dard diye ja rah hu.n mein aslam
Baghair mere jo jeena ka sochta hi nahi
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2009, 02:04:59 AM »
Wah wah Aaina Ji bahut Khoob
SARVESH RASTOGI
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2009, 05:16:35 AM »
Quote from: aaina on June 12, 2009, 10:53:15 PM
Gireh labo.n ki kisi kal wo kholta hi nahi
Bichad rha hu.n mujhko rokta hi nahi

Nazar  na lag jaye kahin wo isi dar se
Nigaah bhar ke meri simt daikhta hi nahi

Zakhmi huway jaate hain mere khyalaat
Wo kirchay aaine ki sametta hi nahi

Khuwahishe.n khudgharz hui jaati hain
Aur wo hai ki mujhko tokta hi nahi

Usi ko dard diye ja rah hu.n mein aslam
Baghair mere jo jeena ka sochta hi nahi


KYAA BAAT HAI AAINA JI....BAHAUT KHOOB
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Alam Qazi
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2009, 06:20:16 AM »

Usi ko Dard diye jaa raha hoon mai aslam
Bagair mere jo jeene ki sochta hi nahi....

Applause Applause bahot hi khoob... ye sher bahot hi umda hai....
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aaina
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2009, 07:14:50 AM »
Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 13, 2009, 02:04:59 AM
Wah wah Aaina Ji bahut Khoob
SARVESH RASTOGI

bhut bhut skhukriya sevesh ji
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salil2002
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2009, 07:16:19 AM »
aslam bhai kya khoob likha hai aapne............allah aapko khush rakhe
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aaina
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2009, 07:17:40 AM »
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 13, 2009, 05:16:35 AM
KYAA BAAT HAI AAINA JI....BAHAUT KHOOB

thnxxxxxx so much K_A
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aaina
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2009, 07:18:47 AM »
Quote from: Alam Qazi on June 13, 2009, 06:20:16 AM

Usi ko Dard diye jaa raha hoon mai aslam
Bagair mere jo jeene ki sochta hi nahi....

Applause Applause bahot hi khoob... ye sher bahot hi umda hai....

bhut shukriya alam qazi sahab
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2009, 07:26:13 AM »
Very nice and beautiful creation Aslam ji, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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aaina
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2009, 07:28:20 AM »
Quote from: -Saahil- on June 13, 2009, 07:16:19 AM
aslam bhai kya khoob likha hai aapne............allah aapko khush rakhe

thnxxxxxx so much bro
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aaina
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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2009, 07:29:37 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on June 13, 2009, 07:26:13 AM
Very nice and beautiful creation Aslam ji, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thnxxxxx madhu
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Talat
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«Reply #11 on: June 16, 2009, 10:36:01 AM »
Quote from: aaina on June 12, 2009, 10:53:15 PM
Gireh labo.n ki kisi kal wo kholta hi nahi
Bichad rha hu.n mujhko rokta hi nahi

Nazar  na lag jaye kahin wo isi dar se
Nigaah bhar ke meri simt daikhta hi nahi

Zakhmi huway jaate hain mere khyalaat
Wo kirchay aaine ki sametta hi nahi

Khuwahishe.n khudgharz hui jaati hain
Aur wo hai ki mujhko tokta hi nahi

Usi ko dard diye ja rah hu.n mein aslam
Baghair mere jo jeena ka sochta hi nahi


Bohot Hi Khoob Aslam Ji.....!!

Khaas taur se Matla aur Maqta dono dil ko chhu jaate hain....Bohot Khoob !!
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