Uske jane ka dard.........

by poppoetry on July 04, 2009, 12:05:12 PM
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ye alfaaj ek aesi ladki k hai jiska pyar ab is duniya me nahi rha....

Har pal yaadein teri hamko tadpati hai
Aankhe band karu to surat teri najar aati hai
kisse ham dard apna baatein,chubhte hai har pal yaadon k kaante

Sang tere zindagi bitane k khwab jo sjaye the
Dulhan banu mai teri khuch yu armaa jgaye the
Tutte khwab ek pal me,hum phirte yaadon k jangal me

Tere dil ki baaton ka kabhi haal na tune sunaya
Phir bhi hamko yakeen tha milega teri chahat ka saya
Dil ki baat ab rahegi dil me,har pal h mera mushkil me

Aaj kyu ye badnasibi aage mere aayi
Antim darshan bhi tere mai na kar payi
Bin tere mai ji rahi hu, ashqon ko mai pi rahi hu

Tere jaane ka mai kaise karu yakeen
Lagta hai chup gya hai tu jakar kahi
Kaisa hai ye vidhi ka vidhan,ek pal me sab hua viraan
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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2009, 12:46:05 PM »
Behad Umdaah Peshkash Hai Pop Ji, Bohat Gehra Dard Bhara Hai Is Kalaam Mein,.

Yunhi LIkhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2009, 12:50:39 PM »
shukriya Ajeem ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2009, 01:07:54 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khooob Pooja...

Dard Se Bhari Kavita Likhi hai Aapne..

Bahut Ache... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2009, 01:11:49 PM »
shukriya Khwaish ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2009, 01:24:49 PM »
bahut hi achcha likha hai pooja

aaj kucch kehne kii himakat karta hoon
haan main bhi ishq kii aag mein jalta hoon
patthar nahin mera dil kii chot sahe
main ret ka gharonda hoon banta phir bikharta hoon
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2009, 09:18:31 PM »
Bohot khoob likha hai aapne pop ji...
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«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2009, 09:47:33 PM »
Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Pop Ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 05, 2009, 04:52:48 AM »
Wah Pooja Dear.. Waqai Kitna Dard Hota hai Us Dil Me.. Jiska Pyaar Humesha Ke Liye Usse Door chala gaya Ho.. Is Dard Ko Mehsoos Kar, Ise Lafzon Me Behad Khubsoorati se Utaara Hai aapne..! Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Khooooooob..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #9 on: July 05, 2009, 07:34:21 AM »
Wah Pop ji,very nice and beautiful creation, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut dard bhara sachai pesh ki aapne. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: July 05, 2009, 12:03:13 PM »
Quote from: -Saahil- on July 04, 2009, 01:24:49 PM
bahut hi achcha likha hai pooja

aaj kucch kehne kii himakat karta hoon
haan main bhi ishq kii aag mein jalta hoon
patthar nahin mera dil kii chot sahe
main ret ka gharonda hoon banta phir bikharta hoon
bahut bahut shukriya Saahil ji.......bahut khub kha hai aapne....bahut acha lga
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«Reply #11 on: July 05, 2009, 12:05:25 PM »
Quote from: superspawn10 on July 04, 2009, 09:18:31 PM
Bohot khoob likha hai aapne pop ji...
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 04, 2009, 09:47:33 PM
Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Pop Ji
hausla afjai k liye bahut bahut shukriya super ji , Rajesh ji
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«Reply #12 on: July 05, 2009, 12:14:01 PM »
Quote from: Mann on July 05, 2009, 04:52:48 AM
Wah Pooja Dear.. Waqai Kitna Dard Hota hai Us Dil Me.. Jiska Pyaar Humesha Ke Liye Usse Door chala gaya Ho.. Is Dard Ko Mehsoos Kar, Ise Lafzon Me Behad Khubsoorati se Utaara Hai aapne..! Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Khooooooob..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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shukriya Mann ji,aapne hamesha hausla bdhaya hai.....sahi kha aapne bahut dard hota hai us dil me jiske khwab khuch is tarah se tutte hai
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«Reply #13 on: July 05, 2009, 12:15:31 PM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on July 05, 2009, 07:34:21 AM
Wah Pop ji,very nice and beautiful creation, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut dard bhara sachai pesh ki aapne. Thumbs UP
thanxs a lot dear madhu ji
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«Reply #14 on: July 06, 2009, 03:33:50 AM »
bahoot khoob Poppoetry ji
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