Uske Sukhe honth bujhi si aankhe.... manjum

by manjum on February 18, 2011, 09:34:47 AM
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Uske sukhe honth bujhi se aankhen.
kah jati hain jane kitni baaten.

Uski ukhdi sans thami si dhadkan,
Usko aati hain shayad kuchh yaden.

Dil ke kuchh tukde the uske hanthon main,
Usne pai thi bas ye saugaten.

Annkhe uski kuchh yese thi lal,
Jyon ro ro kar katin hain raten.

manju "mann"
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nirala
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2011, 09:53:33 AM »
wah Manju kamaal ka dard bhara nagma.
2,3 aur 4 aashar to superbb hain.
bhot khub dear.
daad hai bahut saari.
aur haan dard kam karo aur khus raho
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manjum
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2011, 09:55:59 AM »
bahut shukriya niralaji.... yun hi sarahte rahie sath rahie.....
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nirala
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2011, 09:57:40 AM »
haanji bilkul Manju ji.
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manjum
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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2011, 09:59:38 AM »
chalo achha hai ki tumhe acha laga...
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #5 on: February 18, 2011, 03:25:55 PM »
Bahut khoob manju mann ji..
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #6 on: February 18, 2011, 08:16:42 PM »
Manjum jee Aadaab!

Kafi achchi bayaani ki hai janab...
Khayaal bhi achche raheN aur adaygi bhi...

Daad kabool kijiye...

Likhati rahiye,
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         

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manjum
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«Reply #7 on: February 19, 2011, 05:48:57 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya BBLji...

shukriya
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manjum
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«Reply #8 on: February 19, 2011, 05:50:39 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya parwazji... aapne padha aur pasand kiya...

yun padhte rahie...
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #9 on: February 19, 2011, 05:54:17 AM »
bht khoob manjum ji...
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manjum
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«Reply #10 on: February 19, 2011, 05:55:18 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya manzilji...
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Anshumali
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«Reply #11 on: February 19, 2011, 06:18:07 AM »
Uske sukhe honth bujhi se aankhen.
kah jati hain jane kitni baaten.

Uski ukhdi sans thami si dhadkan,
Usko aati hain shayad kuchh yaden.

Dil ke kuchh tukde the uske hanthon main,
Usne pai thi bas ye saugaten.

Annkhe uski kuchh yese thi lal,
Jyon ro ro kar katin hain raten.

manju "mann"

Very Nice Poetry ... Manjum Ji !

Very Touching .......... ! dil se daad !!!!!!
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #12 on: February 19, 2011, 07:20:37 AM »
bahut badhiya manjum ji ..

dher sari daad~
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manjum
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«Reply #13 on: February 19, 2011, 10:51:28 AM »
bahut bahut shikriya... anshuji

yun hi daad dete rahie....
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manjum
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«Reply #14 on: February 19, 2011, 10:56:21 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya abhiji...

padhte rahie daad de dete rahiye
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