Uski chaukhat mera shivala hai.....mann

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Uski chaukhat mera shivala hai.
Aansuon ki banayi mala hai.

Ladkhadaye gire fir uthake chale,
Uske hanthon ne kab sambhala hai.

Kabhi itna bhara ki chhalak gaya,
Kabhi ulta pada ye pyala hai.

Unki har roz hoti diwali,
Apna to aaj bhi diwala hai.

Uski mahfil main jo pilaya gaya,
Lagta amrit sa wahi hala hai.

Hal-e-dil unko sunate kaise,
Apne hontho pe laga taala hai.

Baat dil ki thi dil main rakhni thi,
Kyon sare aam ise uchhala hai.

Toone palkon se raah jhadi ”mann”
Unke pairon main fir bhi chhala hai.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: March 24, 2012, 04:57:46 AM »
bahut sunder bahut sunder ati sunder dheron daad
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«Reply #3 on: March 24, 2012, 05:28:59 AM »
bahut bahut aur bahut dhanyawad aapka saini saheb...
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«Reply #4 on: March 24, 2012, 05:29:12 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: March 24, 2012, 05:30:50 AM »
BAHUT BAHUT DHANYAWAD AATISHJI
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«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2012, 05:33:09 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad pramodji..
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«Reply #7 on: March 24, 2012, 08:46:36 AM »
Uski chaukhat mera shivala hai.
Aansuon ki banayi mala hai.

Ladkhadaye gire fir uthake chale,
Uske hanthon ne kab sambhala hai.

Kabhi itna bhara ki chhalak gaya,
Kabhi ulta pada ye pyala hai.

Unki har roz hoti diwali,
Apna to aaj bhi diwala hai.

Uski mahfil main jo pilaya gaya,
Lagta amrit sa wahi hala hai.

Hal-e-dil unko sunate kaise,
Apne hontho pe laga taala hai.

Baat dil ki thi dil main rakhni thi,
Kyon sare aam ise uchhala hai.

Toone palkon se raah jhadi ”mann”
Unke pairon main fir bhi chhala hai.

Mann


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«Reply #8 on: March 24, 2012, 08:49:11 AM »
bahot khoob Mann sahab
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«Reply #9 on: March 24, 2012, 09:04:13 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad ushaji..
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«Reply #10 on: March 24, 2012, 09:05:05 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya janab sarfiraji..
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«Reply #11 on: March 24, 2012, 04:55:15 PM »
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne mann ji.
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«Reply #12 on: March 26, 2012, 03:15:42 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad mkvji
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«Reply #13 on: March 26, 2012, 04:18:18 AM »
bahut ahut shukriya shihabji
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