Ussi Subah:Shayri-E-Dard

palkhi

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Ajj Subah Jab Merai Samnai Ayai Tum,
Meri Sansai Rook Si Gayi,
Meri Dharkaan Kamzoor Si Ho Gayi,

Ussi Waqt Taan Liya Meine Kai Ajj Keh Kai Hi Jao Gi,
Tumse Appni Dil Ki Baat, Ek Kadaam Barha Kai Mein Terai Samnai Ayi Or Keh Diya Tujhse,

Kai Tu Hi Hai Meri Kayalohn Mein,
Tu Hi Hai Meri Sansoon Mein, Tu Hi Hai Meri Dharkaan Mein,

Magar Tum Na Kuch Bolai, Bas Meri Orh Dehkthai Hi Rahain,
Pir Tumhare Peechai Mein Usko Dehka, Or Jab Terai Pass Ayi Woh,
Tho Tuhne Usko Appni Bahoon Mein Leh Liya, Or Mujhse Mooh Pair Liya,
Ussi Subah Koh Toot Kai Bikaar Gayai Merai Sapnai,
Ussi Subah Toot Gaya Mera Dil,
Ussi Subah Koh Mujko Appne Hi Naam Se Nafraat Ho Gayi,
Ussi Subah Meine "Sabah" Koh Hamesha Kai Liyai Appne Athiith Mein Choopa Diya........


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palkhi

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Re: Ussi Subah

«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2008, 09:43:49 PM »

Thank You sooooooo much Shihab Ji............


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Aryaan

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Re: Ussi Subah

«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2008, 01:28:17 AM »

Bohat khoob Palkhi...


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palkhi

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Re: Ussi Subah

«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2008, 02:38:37 PM »

THanks sooooooo much Aryaan!!!!


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Pooja

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Re: Ussi Subah

«Reply #4 on: July 25, 2008, 02:49:39 PM »

wah kaya baat hai Palkhi.. bahoot dard jhalak raha hai ehr ek line se.. Nice creation!


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Re: Ussi Subah

«Reply #5 on: July 25, 2008, 03:11:46 PM »

good creation pari..


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palkhi

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Re: Ussi Subah

«Reply #6 on: July 26, 2008, 02:21:55 AM »

Thank you sooooo much Pooja DI nd Bekarar Bhai...........


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syednaami

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Re: Ussi Subah

«Reply #7 on: July 26, 2008, 02:51:26 PM »

Quote from: palkhi on July 24, 2008, 01:42:48 AM

Well done,,, Sabah...
I am really surrounded by the essence of this work...
Good and move towards best...


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palkhi

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Re: Ussi Subah

«Reply #8 on: July 27, 2008, 01:00:02 AM »

Quote from: syednaami on July 26, 2008, 02:51:26 PM

Well done,,, Sabah...
I am really surrounded by the essence of this work...
Good and move towards best...

Thank you soooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Roja

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Re: Ussi Subah

«Reply #9 on: July 27, 2008, 02:52:42 AM »

Quote from: palkhi on July 24, 2008, 01:42:48 AM

wah wah bahut khoob likha hai tumne Pallu dear


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syednaami

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Re: Ussi Subah

«Reply #10 on: July 27, 2008, 09:19:55 AM »

Kabhi subah ban kar
Kabhi khushboo ban kar
Kabhi rahti thi hamdam ban kar

Ab ho rahi door faasila ban kar
Kaanton pe hum ko chhod kar
Beech rah men dil tod kar

|Syed Naami|


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palkhi

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Re: Ussi Subah

«Reply #11 on: July 27, 2008, 06:49:43 PM »

Teinku Soooooo much Di!!.....

Wow..........too cute a reply syed ji!!!


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syednaami

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Re: Ussi Subah

«Reply #12 on: July 30, 2008, 10:33:04 PM »

So nice of you Sabah... thanks...


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