vachan saath chalne ka .............MKV

by mkv on June 25, 2012, 10:29:23 AM
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armanje
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«Reply #15 on: June 26, 2012, 06:48:22 AM »
Badee masoom ghajal hai jee.

Dard hee peete ho kya aap

badhaai meri taraf se
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akashsharma1990
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«Reply #16 on: June 27, 2012, 04:16:56 AM »
bohot acche mukesh ji....
har baar ki tarah is bar bhi bohot achhi lines likhi hai apne...
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livingbytheday
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«Reply #17 on: June 28, 2012, 04:12:36 AM »


bahut khoob
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mkv
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«Reply #18 on: June 30, 2012, 06:28:20 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut  bahut he khoob dheron daad
thanks Sir
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mkv
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«Reply #19 on: July 01, 2012, 02:09:04 AM »
Bade  dard  bhare  ash'aar  kahe  hain  Mukesh  ji . Bahut  achhi ghazal hai . Dhron  Daad .
shukriya hasan sir
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mkv
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«Reply #20 on: July 01, 2012, 06:12:04 AM »
beautiful
Thanks Kamlesh jee
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mkv
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«Reply #21 on: July 01, 2012, 10:57:21 AM »
Waah Waah Waah.....

Kya Kehne Mukeshji...Umda Peshkash...

Bahut Bahut Khooob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thanks khwaish jee
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mkv
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«Reply #22 on: July 01, 2012, 04:00:27 PM »
great sir
Thanks Himanshu jee
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mkv
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«Reply #23 on: July 02, 2012, 05:39:56 AM »
Applause Applause Applause bahut ache bahut ache jee

किसी की यादों की रोशनी में, कभी अँधेरे नहीं होते
कहता बहुत है दिल मगर, लफ्ज़ चंद बयाँ नहीं होते

जिंदगी जीना सीखा देती है मगर,दर्द के किस्से कम नहीं होते.
जैसे सपनों के आशियाने दिलों के बसेरे नहीं होते....!!

Shukriya Suman jee
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janumanu
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«Reply #24 on: July 02, 2012, 11:00:41 AM »
Meree zindgee meN andheraa na hotaa
Jo muh mujhse tumne pheraa na hotaa

Bhar jaate ghaao shayad barsoN ke mere
Agar jakhmoN ko yuuN  ukeraa na hotaa

Chala jaata duniyaa mai chod kar key
Jo laachaar apnoN ka gheraa na hotaa

Hata deta daaloN ko dar pe jhukee haiN
gar chidiyoN ka inpe basera na hotaa

Laga detaa mai aag paanee meN shayad
Vachan saath chalney ka meraa na hotaa

Luta hai ‘Mukesh’ muhabbat kee khaatir
Kaash tum jaisa koee luteraa na hotaa









very nice ............... achi gahzal hai
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mkv
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«Reply #25 on: July 02, 2012, 04:11:58 PM »
Waah waah bhut pyaaree see gazal.
Duwaa karta hooN jo dard aapkee poetry me hai wo aapkee life me na hoo.
Aapka bhai masoom
Thanks Masoom bhai
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mkv
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«Reply #26 on: July 03, 2012, 09:29:06 AM »
i am fan of ur writng specily likeone......ye bhut achi lines hai...
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thanks pawan
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mkv
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«Reply #27 on: July 03, 2012, 12:49:03 PM »
very nyc,,,  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks a lot
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mkv
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«Reply #28 on: July 03, 2012, 03:53:38 PM »
mkv ji aapko koi shikayat hai kya humse jo aapne hamare comment hata diya...... par hum phir se kar rahe hai agar aapko koi shikayat ho to pm mein bata dijiye hum koshish kareinge humse jo galti hui wo dobara nahi karenge........


aapki yeh rachna  bahut umda hai aur bahut hi besqeemti ......isliye dobara tareef kiye bina nahi reh sak.....

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut bahut shukriya saudagar jee
Accha hua aapse baat ho gayee nahi to galatfahmi aapke dimaag me rah jaatee.
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mkv
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«Reply #29 on: July 05, 2012, 02:24:11 AM »
BAHUT KHOOB  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Shukriya Bansi ji
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