VANCHITA

by ANAAMIKA on February 04, 2009, 01:00:14 PM
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ANAAMIKA
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«Reply #15 on: February 19, 2009, 05:08:30 PM »
shukriya aakashji....rachna aapko pasand aai....
Quote from: @kaash on February 18, 2009, 01:52:02 PM
waah Anamika ji....bahut hi achhi kavita ...
very touchy....
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ANAAMIKA
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«Reply #16 on: February 19, 2009, 05:23:15 PM »
Haqikat to haqikat he rahti he...
Aasha- nirasha vidhi ka vidhan hai.....
Meri rachna ne aap ko prabhavit kiya....
meri koshis safal ho gai..
Aapne bahut he sunder shabdo me pratikriya vyact ki hai.....
Lagta hai Jindagi ka khasa achha anubhav hai aapko....
Tahe dil se aapka shukriya...
aapne itni gehrahi se is per soch kar likha...
Wakai aapki kavita me salaah kabile taariff hai... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Anaamika
Quote from: smardia on February 19, 2009, 11:37:37 AM
Anamikaji aapne fir se bahut sunder gehre soch wali
per nirashavadi kavita likhi hai.... Applause Clapping Smiley
Padh ker kuchh kehne ka man ho raha he....
Ye kuchh panktiyen saadar samarpit hain....


वंचीते...
न कोसो जीवन को अपने
अभी तो कई बसंत बाकी हैं
भीड़ में मिलता नहीं प्यार
कलियाँ तो हमेशा ही
घिरी रहती हैं आलियों से
जो चूस मधु उड़ जाते
नहीं प्यार कभी कर पाते
प्रेम तो वरदान है
जो कभी मिलता अनायास
कभी बहुत इंतेजार के बाद
प्यार को बीज डाल उगाओ तुम
सिंचो उसे अपने स्नेह से
त्याग-तपस्या की डालो खाद
सखा तुम्हारा नीला आकाश
देगा पानी और प्रकाश
बस तुम रखो विश्वास
न रहोगी तुम वंचीता
मिलेगा तुम्हें अवश्य
तुम्हारा.....प्यार....
 
सुरेंद्र मर्डिया


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ANAAM
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«Reply #17 on: February 20, 2009, 12:59:58 PM »
Hindi lipi me aapki kavita vanchita padhne ka mazaa aagya...
Jeevan ki sachaii ko shabdo me dhalna koi aap se seekhe...
Kaise sunder saral shabdo me kitni gehri baat kahdi hai.. Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khuda k ghar derr hai per andher nahi..
Milegi tujhe bhi teri manzil mat ghabra
Bus liye prem ki lagan tu kadam badha
Doobo is ras me,milega saathi sagar se gehra

Quote from: ANAAMIKA on February 04, 2009, 01:00:14 PM
वंचीता
 
शापित है यह मेरा जीवन 
किसी अपराध के बिना
क्या मुझे नही है कोई क्षमा
याचना के बिना ?
घिरी रहती हूँ बहुतों से पर
हूँ किसी के प्रेम के बिना
है मेरे सखा विशाल नीला आकाश
लेकिन मैं किसी छाया के बिना
मिले हमसफ़र गहरे सागर सा
ईसी इंतज़ार मेँ
आँखें रोती हैं
आसुओं के बिना

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ANAAM
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«Reply #18 on: February 20, 2009, 01:08:29 PM »
 WAH WAH Surendraji aap ne bhi hindi lipi me
bahut khoobsurat javaab likha hai...
Sach kahu hindi me padhna mazaa dugna kar deta hai
Har shabd ka sahi arth samajh aata hai....
Hinglish me kai baar kuchh ka kuchh padha jaata hai
Shayri ka arth he badal jaata hai...
DAAAAAD KABOOOOOOOOL KIJEEEYE.....  Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Quote from: smardia on February 19, 2009, 11:37:37 AM
Anamikaji aapne fir se bahut sunder gehre soch wali
per nirashavadi kavita likhi hai.... Applause Clapping Smiley
Padh ker kuchh kehne ka man ho raha he....
Ye kuchh panktiyen saadar samarpit hain....


वंचीते...
न कोसो जीवन को अपने
अभी तो कई बसंत बाकी हैं
भीड़ में मिलता नहीं प्यार
कलियाँ तो हमेशा ही
घिरी रहती हैं आलियों से
जो चूस मधु उड़ जाते
नहीं प्यार कभी कर पाते
प्रेम तो वरदान है
जो कभी मिलता अनायास
कभी बहुत इंतेजार के बाद
प्यार को बीज डाल उगाओ तुम
सिंचो उसे अपने स्नेह से
त्याग-तपस्या की डालो खाद
सखा तुम्हारा नीला आकाश
देगा पानी और प्रकाश
बस तुम रखो विश्वास
न रहोगी तुम वंचीता
मिलेगा तुम्हें अवश्य
तुम्हारा.....प्यार....
 
सुरेंद्र मर्डिया


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ANAAMIKA
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«Reply #19 on: September 20, 2009, 08:10:51 AM »
Anaamji aapka dil se dhanyawaad..shukriya...AAPNE meri kavita ko padha aur saraha.rachna gaurawantit hui....

Aapne bhi bahut achhi lines likhi hain.... Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: ANAAM on February 20, 2009, 12:59:58 PM
Hindi lipi me aapki kavita vanchita padhne ka mazaa aagya...
Jeevan ki sachaii ko shabdo me dhalna koi aap se seekhe...
Kaise sunder saral shabdo me kitni gehri baat kahdi hai.. Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khuda k ghar derr hai per andher nahi..
Milegi tujhe bhi teri manzil mat ghabra
Bus liye prem ki lagan tu kadam badha
Doobo is ras me,milega saathi sagar se gehra
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #20 on: September 20, 2009, 08:20:59 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Anamika ji,bahut gaheri baat kahi hai aapne iss kavita mein,
mindblowing creation n beautiful lines by Rawat ji. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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ANAAMIKA
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«Reply #21 on: September 20, 2009, 08:30:41 AM »
Madhuweshji Thanks a lot for such encourageing words....

Quote from: madhuwesh on September 20, 2009, 08:20:59 AM
Wah bahut khoob Anamika ji,bahut gaheri baat kahi hai aapne iss kavita mein,
mindblowing creation n beautiful lines by Rawat ji. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #22 on: September 20, 2009, 11:01:08 AM »
Anamika jee:

namaste!

saadagee bhari yeh aapki rachanaa bahot hi umdaah rahiiN.. liKhate raheN yuuNhi!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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ANAAMIKA
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«Reply #23 on: September 21, 2009, 06:31:33 AM »
Kavita ki sarahna karne k liye bahut bahut dhanyawaad...Dhavalbhai....aap logo se pratikriya jaan kar he aur likhne ka man hota hai.....


Quote from: Dhaval on September 20, 2009, 11:01:08 AM
Anamika jee:

namaste!

saadagee bhari yeh aapki rachanaa bahot hi umdaah rahiiN.. liKhate raheN yuuNhi!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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