very very poor poem... mat padho yaar:Shayri-E-Dard

myheart_ursonly

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"kaise sanwarti hai jindagi kisi ke aane se,
tumse mil kar aaj maine ye jaana hai.
tumhaare sang apni jindagi bitaane ka,
aankhon mein basaya ek sapna suhana hai.
tumne jo thaama ye haath mera,
maine apni manjil ko pehchaana hai.
tumhaare intezaar mein nazrein bichaye hun,
is jindagi ko ab haseen banaana hai.
berang si is duniya ko rangon se bharna hai,
ek din tumhein apni dulhan banana hai.
jo thaama haath to na chhodunga kabhi,
apne pyar ka wada saari umr nibhana hai.
tumhari tasveer pe aaj sar jhukaya hai maine,
tumhein us khuda se badhkar maana hai..."
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pandit

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very very poor poem... mat padho yaar

«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2005, 12:11:13 PM »

aye my h urs only,
ye title q diya hai u ne,
itna emotional nahi hote life me,
kuch nahoi milne wala,
sop be practicle.


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Meena

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very very poor poem... mat padho yaar

«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2005, 03:08:28 PM »

very nice hearty but ishq wale section me post karni thi na !

:D


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myheart_ursonly

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very very poor poem... mat padho yaar

«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2005, 04:20:07 PM »

pandit,

let me quote you on that.

Quote

aye my h urs only,
ye title q diya hai you ne,
itna emotional nahi hote life me,
kuch nahoi milne wala,
sop be practicle.

i personally think,
it would be nice if you'd comment on my poem,
rather than me or my personal life.
kuch milne wala hai ya nahi,
wo tumse behtar main jaanta hun.

thank you anyways, for your comment.

meena,

you are not in my place.
otherwise tumhein shayad ahesaas hota,
how painful these hopes and dreams can be,
sometimes.

by the way, thanks for saying its nice.


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pandit

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very very poor poem... mat padho yaar

«Reply #4 on: March 13, 2005, 04:24:30 PM »

MHUo it seems u r very much motional,
if u r feeling any sort of uneasyness then
sorry for that,


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Meena

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very very poor poem... mat padho yaar

«Reply #5 on: March 13, 2005, 04:26:40 PM »

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

pandit,

let me quote you on that.

Quote

aye my h urs only,
ye title q diya hai you ne,
itna emotional nahi hote life me,
kuch nahoi milne wala,
sop be practicle.

well tume bura laga ho im sorry!


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nikki

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very very poor poem... mat padho yaar

«Reply #6 on: March 13, 2005, 04:27:27 PM »

are are...tum to gusse mein lagte ho...ho kya?

bahut acha likha hai....

apne pyar ka wada saari umr nibhana hai.
tumhari tasveer pe aaj sar jhukaya hai maine,
tumhein us khuda se badhkar maana hai...

bahut achi lines hain...keep the good work comming..


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sanya310

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very very poor poem... mat padho yaar

«Reply #7 on: March 13, 2005, 05:14:13 PM »

bohot acha likha hai bro....par title aisa kyu
im glad maine tumhari nahi suni...coz this is very beautiful and heartfelt...keeptup bro


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myheart_ursonly

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very very poor poem... mat padho yaar

«Reply #8 on: March 13, 2005, 05:34:24 PM »

lol, sanya. waise to koi padhta nahi meri poems,
title dekh ke kam se kam click to karega!

thnks nikki, sanya.

meena, pandit. aisi koi baat nahi hai... cheer up:)


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Just_Hate_Love

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very very poor poem... mat padho yaar

«Reply #9 on: March 13, 2005, 05:41:32 PM »

Hey Heart it was a good one ...
Kaun kehta hai ki hum aapki post nahi padhte ...
Are auro ko to thik hum to aapki post ka intezar karte hai ...
Hame aapki likhi post bahut achhi lagti hai ...
And dont be angry be jolly in life ...
Wanna see more from you ...


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myheart_ursonly

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very very poor poem... mat padho yaar

«Reply #10 on: March 14, 2005, 07:49:33 AM »

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

lollzz
(you know, i am really laughing loud, *like a mad*)
mera mood achcha ho gaya! thanks:)

actually tumhein pehle kabhi nahi dekha na apne thread mein maine :-p
aur tum kehte ho meri posts ka intezaar rehta hai!!!
lol

anyways,
thanks a lot (now i am trying to control my laughter)


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sandhaya

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very very poor poem... mat padho yaar

«Reply #11 on: March 14, 2005, 08:20:12 AM »

wow.........myheart_ursonly very nice poem really its very good
keep it up aur apni hassi ko control mat karo kyunki

hasne se zindagi khil uthti hai
ansuon ki ghata piche chuti hai
hasi hi hai jo sabko milati hai
hasi hi hai jo roto ko bhi hasit hai


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myheart_ursonly

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very very poor poem... mat padho yaar

«Reply #12 on: March 14, 2005, 08:36:17 AM »

Quote from: "sandhaya"

thanks...


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Meena

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very very poor poem... mat padho yaar

«Reply #13 on: March 14, 2005, 06:26:07 PM »

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

lol, sanya. waise to koi padhta nahi meri poems,
title dekh ke kam se kam click to karega!

thnks nikki, sanya.

meena, pandit. aisi koi baat nahi hai... cheer up:)

hmm u cud say it in a nice way also! shayar ke apne feelings hote hai ek poem likhne waqt aur padne wale ke apni, mujhe waisa laga to issliye maine kaha, agar galatthi to ache tareeke se bhi kehe sakhte hai. there is no need to be rude!

khair take care!


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nishita

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very very poor poem... mat padho yaar

«Reply #14 on: March 16, 2005, 11:07:22 AM »

gud work hearty Usual Smile


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