very very poor poem... mat padho yaar

by myheart_ursonly on March 13, 2005, 11:59:49 AM
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akela
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«Reply #15 on: March 16, 2005, 12:55:07 PM »
nice my......heart Usual Smile
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #16 on: March 19, 2005, 05:22:28 PM »
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Hey Heart it was a good one ...
Kaun kehta hai ki hum aapki post nahi padhte ...
Are auro ko to thik hum to aapki post ka intezar karte hai ...
Hame aapki likhi post bahut achhi lagti hai ...
And dont be angry be jolly in life ...
Wanna see more from you ...


lollzz
(you know, i am really laughing loud, *like a mad*)
mera mood achcha ho gaya! thanks:)

actually tumhein pehle kabhi nahi dekha na apne thread mein maine :-p
aur tum kehte ho meri posts ka intezaar rehta hai!!!
lol

anyways,
thanks  a lot (now i am trying to control my laughter)


Sorry buddy i told you lie ...
But trust me i wanted to make you laugh thats all ...
I sometime read your posts but have not replied you for any...
But trust me which i read were cool ones ...
So keep it up ...


Dost milte hai yaha dil dukhane ke liye,
Unliyaan rakhte hai wo humpe uthane ke liye,
Kya kasoor unka ye to rasm chali aayi hai,
Tohmate hoti hai duniya me lagaane ke liye ...
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«Reply #17 on: March 19, 2005, 05:41:43 PM »
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
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"kaise sanwarti hai jindagi kisi ke aane se,
tumse mil kar aaj maine ye jaana hai.
tumhaare sang apni jindagi bitaane ka,
aankhon mein basaya ek sapna suhana hai.
tumne jo thaama ye haath mera,
maine apni manjil ko pehchaana hai.
tumhaare intezaar mein nazrein bichaye hun,
is jindagi ko ab haseen banaana hai.
berang si is duniya ko rangon se bharna hai,
ek din tumhein apni dulhan banana hai.
jo thaama haath to na chhodunga kabhi,
apne pyar ka wada saari umr nibhana hai.
tumhari tasveer pe aaj sar jhukaya hai maine,
tumhein us khuda se badhkar maana hai..."
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:dance:


wah.......kya baat hai,u need an applause. Usual Smile
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #18 on: March 19, 2005, 05:47:51 PM »
Meri duniya me kya kuchh nahi tha,
Sirf tum the dusra kuchh nahi tha...

Kiska naam le kise iljaaam de,
Tumne to kiya kuchh nahi tha...

Ho koi wajah lekin is tarah,
Dil se pehle tuta kuchh nahi tha...

Mila so mila kho gayaa bhi to kya,
Aks teri kismat likha kuchh nahi tha......
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Neelam
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«Reply #19 on: March 27, 2005, 05:10:48 AM »
bahoooooooooooot touching poem hai my heart urz only...really nice
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #20 on: March 27, 2005, 07:51:58 AM »
wow  excllent  work  all.............
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #21 on: March 27, 2005, 01:00:15 PM »
ZINDAGII ROZ NAYE RANG MEIN DHAL JAATI HAI ,
KABHII DUSHMAN TO KABHI DOST NAZAR AATII HAI,
KABHII CHAA JAYE,BARAS JAYE,GHATA BEIMAUSAM ,
KABHII EK BOOND KO BHII ROOH TARAS JAATII HAI......
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #22 on: April 06, 2005, 04:54:46 PM »
thanks nidhi, and neelam... appreciate it..

good work just_hate_love


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