- Vida Karo Hume -

by Meena is back on March 29, 2007, 12:45:44 PM
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instantly phir se kuch ban gaya... socha yaha post kar don. hope u will like it dosto!! Usual Smile

Zindagi ki kitab haath me, zindagi ko padne lage,
Jee rahe te phir se is zindagi ko, panno ko ultate hue,

Har ek panne pe dafan ti purani purani kahaniya,
Hare k lafz ro raha tha, gum ka afsana sunate hue,

Kuch dard, kuch zakhm, kuch apno ke kuch gairo ke,
Phir se mehesoos kiye who sab kuch, ashkon ko bahate hue,

Kuch paya hi nahin humne to zindagi se, bas khoya hi hai,
Phir bhi har raha pe chalte rahe hum muskurate hue,

Aab tak gayi “Meena”, aab aur nahin chala jata,
Vida karon hume oh dosto, arthi pe sajate hue!!!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: March 29, 2007, 02:03:05 PM »
Meena

Vey nice but sad :cry:
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*~*Pakeezah Aanchal*~*
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«Reply #2 on: March 29, 2007, 02:10:26 PM »
accha likkha hai aapne meena saahiba
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: March 29, 2007, 10:45:04 PM »
Wow Meenu...wonderful Usual Smile
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Meena is back
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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2007, 12:19:03 PM »
shukriya bhaiya ji (dard section me dardwali hi poems milengi :wink: )

thank u Pakeezah ji Usual Smile

dhanyewad talat kuddiye!! Usual Smile
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Shikha12
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«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2007, 12:49:05 PM »
That's Really Beautiful.... Meena... =D>
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ranjana
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«Reply #6 on: March 30, 2007, 01:38:58 PM »
too good meena ....

dil ko chu liya aapke lafzo ne sad5
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«Reply #7 on: March 30, 2007, 01:52:05 PM »
behtarin likha meena ji.........really nice..........

dard ke saayo mai palti rahi hai zindagi meri
kaanto ki chav mai khilti rahi hai zindagi meri

rasta mila kahi na koi manzil mili ise kabhi
gumnaam raaho pe sada chalti rahi hai zindagi meri

na sholo ki tapish se na kisi mehfil-e-chirag se
ashko ki baroshi se  jalti rahi hai zindagi meri

subha ki hai khabar ab na hai shaam ka pata
 karke vida roshniyo ko dhalti rahi hai zindagi meri


...........................@fahi@...........................
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«Reply #8 on: March 30, 2007, 06:00:19 PM »
bohat khoob meena sis...last two lines to ekdam :cry: .nice one Purani jeans.

"Itne jaldi duniya se abhi tum vidaai na maango,
 raahein anginat hain,kab kahan zindgi badal jaye,
 maana zindagi me khoya hai bohat kuch tumne,
 rakho bharosa khudpe,kab kiski nazar tumpe pad jaye."
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«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2007, 11:12:24 AM »
thanks Shika, Ranjana ji, Fahi ji and Nidhi sis

bohot khoob Fahi ji...very touching!! first two lines are very gud!!

nice oen as well nidhi!!

zindagi me kya rakha hai hume jane do,
rote rahe humesha, aab kushi hume pane do,
jab rooh hi bejaan hai to jism ka kya karna,
duniya walo ko humare jism ko bhi aab jalane do!
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angel4u
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2007, 06:03:17 PM »
Bahut achhe Meena ji, and all Usual Smile
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Meena is back
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«Reply #11 on: August 30, 2007, 09:26:25 AM »
shukriya ji shukriya!!!

 :D
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: August 30, 2007, 02:17:25 PM »
Quote from: "Meena is back"
thanks Shika, Ranjana ji, Fahi ji and Nidhi sis

bohot khoob Fahi ji...very touching!! first two lines are very gud!!

nice oen as well nidhi!!

zindagi me kya rakha hai hume jane do,
rote rahe humesha, aab kushi hume pane do,
jab rooh hi bejaan hai to jism ka kya karna,
duniya walo ko humare jism ko bhi aab jalane do!


Too Good Meena....

Rooh se bichre jamana hua
Is zisam ko bhi ab jaane do
Bahoot jee liya zindagi ko
Chain ki nind ab so jaane do
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