Viraam ek lag jaayega...!!

by Talat on June 20, 2008, 02:21:05 PM
Pages: [1] 2 3 4 5
Print
Author  (Read 4318 times)
Talat
Guest
Nahin lagta hai kuch achcha
Kuch ankhon ko nahin jachta
Banawat hai maahol main
Nahin lagta hai kuch sachcha

Dilon par hain syaah baadal
Bhaari khud pe hai har pal
Toot raha hai jaane kya
Dil main hai ajab halchal

Khamoshi se pukaroon main
Yaadon ko sanwaroon main
Kho gaye mere apne
Chup chup si niharoon main

Kho jaaungi ab main bhi
Ji liya yeh jeevan bhi
Viraam ek lag jaayega
Bhula degi phir dunya bhi !
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
kidhar jaayega by majid in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2  All »
kahin koi Viraam nahi hai by Pooja in Shayri-E-Dard
Mehfil ka maahaul badal jaayega... .. . /annu/ by annu_genis in Shairy-e-Dost (Friendship Poetry)
...Mil Jaayega Humshakal Sanam ka... .. . /annu/ by annu_genis in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
maykada rah jaayega.............. by Syed Mohd Mahzar in Miscellaneous Shayri
bekarar
Poetic Patrol
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 4
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
53 days, 9 hours and 51 minutes.

Posts: 3738
Member Since: Oct 2005


View Profile
«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2008, 02:29:08 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
aaj mere dil me kuch aise hi vichar hain, padh-kar laga mere dil ki baat aapke shabdon me dhal gaye hain
Logged
Pooja
Guest
«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2008, 03:01:40 PM »
wah kaya baat hai.. Ajj to ek se bad kar ek shayri padne ko mil rahi hai... bahoot khoob Likha celmira!!

yah lines behad pasand aai:

Khamoshi se pukaroon main
Yaadon ko sanwaroon main
Kho gaye mere apne
Chup chup si niharoon main
Logged
Sayyid Randeri
Guest
«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2008, 10:10:57 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 20, 2008, 02:21:05 PM
Nahin lagta hai kuch achcha
Kuch ankhon ko nahin jachta
Banawat hai maahol main
Nahin lagta hai kuch sachcha

Dilon par hain syaah baadal
Bhaari khud pe hai har pal
Toot raha hai jaane kya
Dil main hai ajab halchal

Khamoshi se pukaroon main
Yaadon ko sanwaroon main
Kho gaye mere apne
Chup chup si niharoon main

Kho jaaungi ab main bhi
Ji liya yeh jeevan bhi
Viraam ek lag jaayega
Bhula degi phir dunya bhi !


Ati sundar!! kamaal ka likha aap ne, apne khyalaat or halaat ki behtareen aqqasi ki.


+++++++++
Logged
baadal102
Guest
«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2008, 05:01:30 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 20, 2008, 02:21:05 PM


Dilon par hain syaah baadal
Bhaari khud pe hai har pal
Toot raha hai jaane kya
Dil main hai ajab halchal


aap ne bahoot aacha ahsaas likha hai
thanx to share with us



Baadal
Logged
harashmahajan
Guest
«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2008, 05:44:05 AM »
Bahoot khoob Celmira..bahoot arse baad tumeh pada achha laga...agar sahi kahooN toh maiN khud hi kaafi arse baad baad yahaN daakhil hua hooN....bahoot hi oomda likha hai aapne....


Harash
Logged
kaushikbhawna008
Guest
«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2008, 06:04:16 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 20, 2008, 02:21:05 PM
Nahin lagta hai kuch achcha
Kuch ankhon ko nahin jachta
Banawat hai maahol main
Nahin lagta hai kuch sachcha

Dilon par hain syaah baadal
Bhaari khud pe hai har pal
Toot raha hai jaane kya
Dil main hai ajab halchal

Khamoshi se pukaroon main
Yaadon ko sanwaroon main
Kho gaye mere apne
Chup chup si niharoon main

Kho jaaungi ab main bhi
Ji liya yeh jeevan bhi
Viraam ek lag jaayega
Bhula degi phir dunya bhi !


bohut acha likha hai celmira ji and good reply sayyid ji
Logged
angel4u
Guest
«Reply #7 on: June 21, 2008, 06:13:25 AM »
Really Too good...
Logged
syednaami
Guest
«Reply #8 on: June 23, 2008, 05:07:31 PM »
Dukh hai ki dard hai, -
Jo lag gaya so zarb hai, -
Aur zindagi sangharsh hai, -
Par dard hai ki garm hai, -

Ab jeena bhi dobhar hai, -
Thoda jeevan ka guzar hai, -
Aane jaane ki daggar hai, -
Dukhon men karna sabar hai. -

(Syed Naami)

=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=
Celmira,,, really intricate and superb...
Logged
Pooja
Guest
«Reply #9 on: June 23, 2008, 05:20:51 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause  bahoot he acha likha hai apne Sayyid jee!!
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #10 on: June 23, 2008, 07:07:33 PM »
Quote from: bekarar on June 20, 2008, 02:29:08 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
aaj mere dil me kuch aise hi vichar hain, padh-kar laga mere dil ki baat aapke shabdon me dhal gaye hain

Bohot bohot shukriya Bekarar, aapne ise dil se mehsoos kiya Usual Smile
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #11 on: June 23, 2008, 07:08:28 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on June 20, 2008, 03:01:40 PM
wah kaya baat hai.. Ajj to ek se bad kar ek shayri padne ko mil rahi hai... bahoot khoob Likha celmira!!

yah lines behad pasand aai:

Khamoshi se pukaroon main
Yaadon ko sanwaroon main
Kho gaye mere apne
Chup chup si niharoon main

Thanks a lot Pooja...aapko ye kavita pasand aayi...
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #12 on: June 23, 2008, 07:09:34 PM »
Bohot bohot shukriya Sayyid....aapne bohot hi khoobsurat jawab diya hai...bohot khoob Applause
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #13 on: June 23, 2008, 07:10:10 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on June 21, 2008, 05:01:30 AM
aap ne bahoot aacha ahsaas likha hai
thanx to share with us



Baadal

Tah-e-dil se shukriya Baadal !
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #14 on: June 23, 2008, 07:11:53 PM »
Quote from: Harash Mahajan on June 21, 2008, 05:44:05 AM
Bahoot khoob Celmira..bahoot arse baad tumeh pada achha laga...agar sahi kahooN toh maiN khud hi kaafi arse baad baad yahaN daakhil hua hooN....bahoot hi oomda likha hai aapne....


Harash

Harash Ji, aaj aapko yahan dekh kar bohot hi khushi hui...shukriya...Please be regular...Ek baar laut ke aaye the itne din baad, ab dobara se kahan chale gaye hain !
Logged
Pages: [1] 2 3 4 5
Print
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri-E-Dard > Topic: Viraam ek lag jaayega...!!
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 08, 2024, 10:19:30 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:08 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Hifazat - a thriller love...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]
INTEQAM - A sequel to "Hi...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.113 seconds with 26 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8505 Real Poets and poetry admirer