Viraam ek lag jaayega...!!

by Talat on June 20, 2008, 02:21:05 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 23, 2008, 07:12:27 PM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on June 21, 2008, 06:04:16 AM
bohut acha likha hai celmira ji and good reply sayyid ji

Thanks a lot Bhawna !
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«Reply #16 on: June 23, 2008, 07:13:07 PM »
Quote from: angel4u on June 21, 2008, 06:13:25 AM
Really Too good...

Thank You Angel !
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«Reply #17 on: June 23, 2008, 07:14:22 PM »
Quote from: syednaami on June 23, 2008, 05:07:31 PM
Dukh hai ki dard hai, -
Jo lag gaya so zarb hai, -
Aur zindagi sangharsh hai, -
Par dard hai ki garm hai, -

Ab jeena bhi dobhar hai, -
Thoda jeevan ka guzar hai, -
Aane jaane ki daggar hai, -
Dukhon men karna sabar hai. -

(Syed Naami)

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Celmira,,, really intricate and superb...

Thanks a lot S. Naami .....Aapne bhi khoobsurat lines pesh ki hain
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«Reply #18 on: June 24, 2008, 07:48:51 PM »
Shukriya,,, Celmira... Haosla afzai ke liye...
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Talat
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«Reply #19 on: June 26, 2008, 07:46:23 PM »
Begaano ki basti se, jo hum chal den to achcha hai
Kya dekhen palat ke ab, yahan par kaun sachcha hai

Rang-o-bu, na raunaq hai, na wo pehli si halchal hai
Na leharata hua khushbu main, phaila koi aanchal hai

Yaadon ke sahaare khud ko kab tak rok paayenge
Yahi ummeed thi dil ko, kabhi woh laut aayenge

Paraaye is shahar se jo hum chal den to achcha hai
Kya dekhen palat ke ab, yahan par kaun sachcha hai
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«Reply #20 on: June 26, 2008, 08:03:24 PM »
bahoot khoob Celmira  Applause
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #21 on: June 27, 2008, 02:39:47 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 26, 2008, 07:46:23 PM
Begaano ki basti se, jo hum chal den to achcha hai
Kya dekhen palat ke ab, yahan par kaun sachcha hai

Rang-o-bu, na raunaq hai, na wo pehli si halchal hai
Na leharata hua khushbu main, phaila koi aanchal hai

Yaadon ke sahaare khud ko kab tak rok paayenge
Yahi ummeed thi dil ko, kabhi woh laut aayenge

Paraaye is shahar se jo hum chal den to achcha hai
Kya dekhen palat ke ab, yahan par kaun sachcha hai



Bohot khoob celmira ji umda kawish he.   Applause
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«Reply #22 on: June 27, 2008, 02:55:21 AM »
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«Reply #23 on: June 27, 2008, 04:41:48 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 26, 2008, 07:46:23 PM
Begaano ki basti se, jo hum chal den to achcha hai
Kya dekhen palat ke ab, yahan par kaun sachcha hai

Rang-o-bu, na raunaq hai, na wo pehli si halchal hai
Na leharata hua khushbu main, phaila koi aanchal hai

Yaadon ke sahaare khud ko kab tak rok paayenge
Yahi ummeed thi dil ko, kabhi woh laut aayenge

Paraaye is shahar se jo hum chal den to achcha hai
Kya dekhen palat ke ab, yahan par kaun sachcha hai



bahoot khoob talat ...very nice... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: June 27, 2008, 04:44:44 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause chand alfaz me bahoot kuch kah diya aapne to......
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«Reply #25 on: June 28, 2008, 01:47:50 AM »
Quote from: bekarar on June 27, 2008, 04:44:44 AM
Applause Applause Applause chand alfaz me bahoot kuch kah diya aapne to......

Banda to kisi qabil nahi sab aap ki zarrah nawazi he huzuur.
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«Reply #26 on: June 28, 2008, 11:03:12 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 20, 2008, 02:21:05 PM
Nahin lagta hai kuch achcha
Kuch ankhon ko nahin jachta
Banawat hai maahol main
Nahin lagta hai kuch sachcha

Dilon par hain syaah baadal
Bhaari khud pe hai har pal
Toot raha hai jaane kya
Dil main hai ajab halchal

Khamoshi se pukaroon main
Yaadon ko sanwaroon main
Kho gaye mere apne
Chup chup si niharoon main

Kho jaaungi ab main bhi
Ji liya yeh jeevan bhi
Viraam ek lag jaayega
Bhula degi phir dunya bhi !


Quote from: Celmira on June 26, 2008, 07:46:23 PM
Begaano ki basti se, jo hum chal den to achcha hai
Kya dekhen palat ke ab, yahan par kaun sachcha hai

Rang-o-bu, na raunaq hai, na wo pehli si halchal hai
Na leharata hua khushbu main, phaila koi aanchal hai

Yaadon ke sahaare khud ko kab tak rok paayenge
Yahi ummeed thi dil ko, kabhi woh laut aayenge

Paraaye is shahar se jo hum chal den to achcha hai
Kya dekhen palat ke ab, yahan par kaun sachcha hai


Too Good... Celmira.. Applause
Nice to read you after long gap..
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«Reply #27 on: June 28, 2008, 11:05:04 AM »

Excellent Replies Sayyid Randeri ji...  Applause
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«Reply #28 on: June 28, 2008, 11:07:07 AM »
Quote from: syednaami on June 23, 2008, 05:07:31 PM
Dukh hai ki dard hai, -
Jo lag gaya so zarb hai, -
Aur zindagi sangharsh hai, -
Par dard hai ki garm hai, -

Ab jeena bhi dobhar hai, -
Thoda jeevan ka guzar hai, -
Aane jaane ki daggar hai, -
Dukhon men karna sabar hai. -

(Syed Naami)

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Celmira,,, really intricate and superb...

Superb Writing.. Syed Ji.. Applause
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«Reply #29 on: June 28, 2008, 11:39:44 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 20, 2008, 02:21:05 PM
Nahin lagta hai kuch achcha
Kuch ankhon ko nahin jachta
Banawat hai maahol main
Nahin lagta hai kuch sachcha

Dilon par hain syaah baadal
Bhaari khud pe hai har pal
Toot raha hai jaane kya
Dil main hai ajab halchal

Khamoshi se pukaroon main
Yaadon ko sanwaroon main
Kho gaye mere apne
Chup chup si niharoon main

Kho jaaungi ab main bhi
Ji liya yeh jeevan bhi
Viraam ek lag jaayega
Bhula degi phir dunya bhi !

Quote from: Celmira on June 26, 2008, 07:46:23 PM
Begaano ki basti se, jo hum chal den to achcha hai
Kya dekhen palat ke ab, yahan par kaun sachcha hai

Rang-o-bu, na raunaq hai, na wo pehli si halchal hai
Na leharata hua khushbu main, phaila koi aanchal hai

Yaadon ke sahaare khud ko kab tak rok paayenge
Yahi ummeed thi dil ko, kabhi woh laut aayenge

Paraaye is shahar se jo hum chal den to achcha hai
Kya dekhen palat ke ab, yahan par kaun sachcha hai

Bada hi bedil sa mausam hai,
Badi bechain si sargam hai..
Yahan geeton ki mehfil mein,
Udaa harr chehre ka rang hai..

Sab Patthar ki diwaarein hai,
Fakat tanhaaiya pukaarein hai..
Koi sangi hai naa saathi hai,
Jinhe rooh ab tak bulaati hai..

Muhabbat rooth gayi ho jaise,
Dostaane toot gaye ho jaise..
Berang hoke fizaa hui gumsum,
Kitne badal gaye ab Hum Tum..

Magar kahin ek aas zinda hai,
Tu mere hi need ka parinda hai..
Tu mujhe bhool paayega kaise,
Bata akele udd jaayega kaise..

Sajaaya apne haathon se jisko,
Bachaaya sab khatron se jisko..
Yeh ghar saanson ki wajah apni,
Khushi maano ya phir saja apni..
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