Viraam ek lag jaayega...!!

by Talat on June 20, 2008, 02:21:05 PM
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Talat
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«Reply #30 on: June 28, 2008, 11:42:45 AM »
Bohot bohot shukriya Pooja, Sayyid, Bekarar and Mahiya..My pleasure you liked the creations !!
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Talat
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«Reply #31 on: June 28, 2008, 11:43:19 AM »
Bohot Khoob Sayyid Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #32 on: June 28, 2008, 11:44:56 AM »
Quote from: Mahiya on June 28, 2008, 11:39:44 AM
Bada hi bedil sa mausam hai,
Badi bechain si sargam hai..
Yahan geeton ki mehfil mein,
Udaa harr chehre ka rang hai..

Sab Patthar ki diwaarein hai,
Fakat tanhaaiya pukaarein hai..
Koi sangi hai naa saathi hai,
Jinhe rooh ab tak bulaati hai..

Muhabbat rooth gayi ho jaise,
Dostaane toot gaye ho jaise..
Berang hoke fizaa hui gumsum,
Kitne badal gaye ab Hum Tum..

Magar kahin ek aas zinda hai,
Tu mere hi need ka parinda hai..
Tu mujhe bhool paayega kaise,
Bata akele udd jaayega kaise..

Sajaaya apne haathon se jisko,
Bachaaya sab khatron se jisko..
Yeh ghar saanson ki wajah apni,
Khushi maano ya phir saja apni..

Bohot h khoob Mahiya  Applause Applause Sach kaha hai.....yahi sach hai !
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Talat
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«Reply #33 on: June 28, 2008, 11:54:39 AM »

Kuch yahi soch kar qadam uth na paaye,
Jaate jaate har ek baar laut, hum aaye

Bohot khokli si deewarain hui hain,
Girti hui chhat koi kahan tak bachaaye,

Begaanon main ab hum pukaaren kise,
Har ek shaam yaadon ke diye jalaaye

Ye jhooti kahani mohabbat-wafa ki,
Khud ko suna ke khud ko behlaayen

Saza hai yahi, khushi se ya gham se,
Iss saza se kyunkar khud ko bachayen !!
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syednaami
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«Reply #34 on: June 28, 2008, 02:25:10 PM »
Quote from: Mahiya on June 28, 2008, 11:39:44 AM
Bada hi bedil sa mausam hai,
Badi bechain si sargam hai..
Yahan geeton ki mehfil mein,
Udaa harr chehre ka rang hai..

Sab Patthar ki diwaarein hai,
Fakat tanhaaiya pukaarein hai..
Koi sangi hai naa saathi hai,
Jinhe rooh ab tak bulaati hai..

Muhabbat rooth gayi ho jaise,
Dostaane toot gaye ho jaise..
Berang hoke fizaa hui gumsum,
Kitne badal gaye ab Hum Tum..

Magar kahin ek aas zinda hai,
Tu mere hi need ka parinda hai..
Tu mujhe bhool paayega kaise,
Bata akele udd jaayega kaise..

Sajaaya apne haathon se jisko,
Bachaaya sab khatron se jisko..
Yeh ghar saanson ki wajah apni,
Khushi maano ya phir saja apni..

Aap ka mamnoon hun jo haosla badhaaya...
Mahiya,,, Aap ne to mahfil ko aur bhi muattar kar diya... wah...
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Sonia01
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«Reply #35 on: June 28, 2008, 03:12:46 PM »
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Nahin lagta hai kuch achcha
Kuch ankhon ko nahin jachta
Banawat hai maahol main
Nahin lagta hai kuch sachcha

Celmira bahut accha likhi hai aur sahi bi.  Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #36 on: June 28, 2008, 03:16:48 PM »
Bohot bohot shukriya Sonia !
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #37 on: June 29, 2008, 03:34:01 AM »
Quote from: Mahiya on June 28, 2008, 11:05:04 AM

Excellent Replies Sayyid Randeri ji...  Applause

Mahiya muhtarama mein aap ka mashkoor hun.
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #38 on: June 29, 2008, 03:44:16 AM »
Quote from: Mahiya on June 28, 2008, 11:39:44 AM

Sab Patthar ki diwaarein hai,
Fakat tanhaaiya pukaarein hai..
Koi sangi hai naa saathi hai,
Jinhe rooh ab tak bulaati hai..

Magar kahin ek aas zinda hai,
Tu mere hi need ka parinda hai..
Tu mujhe bhool paayega kaise,
Bata akele udd jaayega kaise..

Sajaaya apne haathon se jisko,
Bachaaya sab khatron se jisko..
Yeh ghar saanson ki wajah apni,
Khushi maano ya phir saja apni..

Waaaaaaahhhh. Bohot khoooooooob.
Tamam nazm hi umda he magar ye 3 to bohot hi umda he.
Isi tarah likhte rahiye.  Applause  Applause  Applause
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #39 on: June 29, 2008, 04:08:04 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 28, 2008, 11:54:39 AM
Kuch yahi soch kar qadam uth na paaye,
Jaate jaate har ek baar laut, hum aaye

Bohot khokli si deewarain hui hain,
Girti hui chhat koi kahan tak bachaaye,

Begaanon main ab hum pukaaren kise,
Har ek shaam yaadon ke diye jalaaye

Ye jhooti kahani mohabbat-wafa ki,
Khud ko suna ke khud ko behlaayen

Saza hai yahi, khushi se ya gham se,
Iss saza se kyunkar khud ko bachayen !!




kya kehne.  Applause  Applause  Applause
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Shikha12
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«Reply #40 on: June 29, 2008, 10:10:53 AM »
Bahut Bahut Shukriya.. Celmira, Syed ji and Sayyid ji
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Shikha12
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«Reply #41 on: June 29, 2008, 10:53:40 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 28, 2008, 11:54:39 AM
Kuch yahi soch kar qadam uth na paaye,
Jaate jaate har ek baar laut, hum aaye

Bohot khokli si deewarain hui hain,
Girti hui chhat koi kahan tak bachaaye,

Begaanon main ab hum pukaaren kise,
Har ek shaam yaadon ke diye jalaaye

Ye jhooti kahani mohabbat-wafa ki,
Khud ko suna ke khud ko behlaayen

Saza hai yahi, khushi se ya gham se,
Iss saza se kyunkar khud ko bachayen !!

Nice Reply Celmira..  Applause


Chhat yeh kabhi gir naa paayegi,
Is chaman ki buniyaad pakki hai..
Wo Begaane jo lag rahe hai aaj,
Unhi mein kahin preet sachhi hai..

Har shaksh muntazir tumhara hai,
Kyon bhala inhe yun nakaara hai..
Tanhaai ko apna marz banaao naa,
Fakat ek baar aawaaz lagaao naa..

Yeh diye jo tumne ab tak jalaaye hai,
Angaar hatheliyon par uthaaye hai..
Inhe ab yahin chaukhat pe dhar do,
Roshan ho diwaali sa mahaul kar do..

Chalo Yun ab gumsum se baitho naa,
Muskura ke ab kuch toh keh do naa..
Naa maano in khushion ko saza apni,
Aur  Giggle
Chuppaao naa..
Phoolon si muskaan ko bewajah apni..   NaNaNa
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Talat
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«Reply #42 on: June 30, 2008, 09:51:26 AM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 29, 2008, 04:08:04 AM
kya kehne.  Applause  Applause  Applause

Shukriya Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #43 on: June 30, 2008, 09:56:40 AM »
Quote from: Mahiya on June 29, 2008, 10:53:40 AM
Nice Reply Celmira..  Applause


Chhat yeh kabhi gir naa paayegi,
Is chaman ki buniyaad pakki hai..
Wo Begaane jo lag rahe hai aaj,
Unhi mein kahin preet sachhi hai..

Har shaksh muntazir tumhara hai,
Kyon bhala inhe yun nakaara hai..
Tanhaai ko apna marz banaao naa,
Fakat ek baar aawaaz lagaao naa..

Yeh diye jo tumne ab tak jalaaye hai,
Angaar hatheliyon par uthaaye hai..
Inhe ab yahin chaukhat pe dhar do,
Roshan ho diwaali sa mahaul kar do..

Chalo Yun ab gumsum se baitho naa,
Muskura ke ab kuch toh keh do naa..
Naa maano in khushion ko saza apni,
Aur  Giggle
Chuppaao naa..
Phoolon si muskaan ko bewajah apni..   NaNaNa
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Thanks Mahiya Usual Smile Bohot hi achcha aur sukoon dene waala reply hai....

Begaanon main hain apne bhi
Unki khatir hi ruk paaye hain

Muntazir hain jo unke liye hi
Udaasi bhool, muskuraye hain

Chalo milkar hum roshan karen
Andhere jo chale aaye hain

Muddat baad humko achcha laga,
Aap jo saath humare aaye hain  NaNaNa

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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #44 on: June 30, 2008, 11:47:20 PM »
Quote from: Mahiya on June 29, 2008, 10:53:40 AM
Nice Reply Celmira..  Applause


Chhat yeh kabhi gir naa paayegi,
Is chaman ki buniyaad pakki hai..
Wo Begaane jo lag rahe hai aaj,
Unhi mein kahin preet sachhi hai..

Har shaksh muntazir tumhara hai,
Kyon bhala inhe yun nakaara hai..
Tanhaai ko apna marz banaao naa,
Fakat ek baar aawaaz lagaao naa..

Yeh diye jo tumne ab tak jalaaye hai,
Angaar hatheliyon par uthaaye hai..
Inhe ab yahin chaukhat pe dhar do,
Roshan ho diwaali sa mahaul kar do..

Chalo Yun ab gumsum se baitho naa,
Muskura ke ab kuch toh keh do naa..
Naa maano in khushion ko saza apni,
Aur  Giggle
Chuppaao naa..
Phoolon si muskaan ko bewajah apni..   NaNaNa
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Khoob kaha mahiya ji.
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