Viraam ek lag jaayega...!!

by Talat on June 20, 2008, 02:21:05 PM
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #45 on: June 30, 2008, 11:51:56 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 30, 2008, 09:56:40 AM
Thanks Mahiya Usual Smile Bohot hi achcha aur sukoon dene waala reply hai....

Begaanon main hain apne bhi
Unki khatir hi ruk paaye hain

Muntazir hain jo unke liye hi
Udaasi bhool, muskuraye hain

Chalo milkar hum roshan karen
Andhere jo chale aaye hain

Muddat baad humko achcha laga,
Aap jo saath humare aaye hain  NaNaNa

 icon_flower

Kem chho? icon_salut
Bahu'n majaanu lakho chho tame. Giggle lage raho.... Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #46 on: July 01, 2008, 01:58:56 PM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 30, 2008, 11:51:56 PM
Kem chho? icon_salut
Hun Sari chhu  Giggle

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 30, 2008, 11:51:56 PM
Bahu'n majaanu lakho chho tame. Giggle
Manne samaj nathi padtee  DOH


Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 30, 2008, 11:51:56 PM
lage raho.... Applause

Tamaro Abhaar  happy3
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #47 on: July 01, 2008, 10:03:05 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on July 01, 2008, 01:58:56 PM
Manne samaj nathi padtee  DOH


Bohut umda likhte hen aap. hawe samajh padi?   tongue3
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Talat
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«Reply #48 on: July 02, 2008, 04:09:53 PM »
Ji, haa, kem nai.  Thumbs UP
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #49 on: July 10, 2008, 06:19:31 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 20, 2008, 02:21:05 PM
Nahin lagta hai kuch achcha
Kuch ankhon ko nahin jachta
Banawat hai maahol main
Nahin lagta hai kuch sachcha

Dilon par hain syaah baadal
Bhaari khud pe hai har pal
Toot raha hai jaane kya
Dil main hai ajab halchal

Khamoshi se pukaroon main
Yaadon ko sanwaroon main
Kho gaye mere apne
Chup chup si niharoon main

Kho jaaungi ab main bhi
Ji liya yeh jeevan bhi
Viraam ek lag jaayega
Bhula degi phir dunya bhi !


talat ji...laout ker aya toh tha...par jo regular likhne waale nazer nahiN aaye so gap ho gaya....Achha padne ko milta hai toh undaliyaaN apne aap raastaa doondne lagti hain.....ek laazwaab tehreer likhi hai aapne aaj bhi ...daad kabool kareiN is kavita ke saath

tumhaare in ahsasoN ko dekh ker
Dil ko ik Hook si aati hai...
Kyu?......Kyu...
Kyu nahi lagta kutchh achha
Jab yahaaN hai sab kutchh hai sachha....

Dundalka

Ek dhundalka
YahoN Ki chaader maiN
Lipta hua
Har silwatoN maiN
Dard ka Ahsaas
Har saans Hai
Girvee rakhi
kab tak_______
Riste GhaavoN ko....
Sanjoye rakhoge
andere maiN
_____So jaane do
SapnoN maiN hi sahi
Moti palkoN maiN
Pal jaane do
YadoN ki Dhundalke maiN
Kho jaane do.......


Harash
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syednaami
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«Reply #50 on: July 10, 2008, 07:19:50 PM »
Harash Saahib buhat umda likha hai aapne,,, bade dinon baad nazar aaye hain...
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #51 on: July 12, 2008, 08:42:58 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 20, 2008, 02:21:05 PM
Nahin lagta hai kuch achcha
Kuch ankhon ko nahin jachta
Banawat hai maahol main
Nahin lagta hai kuch sachcha

Dilon par hain syaah baadal
Bhaari khud pe hai har pal
Toot raha hai jaane kya
Dil main hai ajab halchal

Khamoshi se pukaroon main
Yaadon ko sanwaroon main
Kho gaye mere apne
Chup chup si niharoon main

Kho jaaungi ab main bhi
Ji liya yeh jeevan bhi
Viraam ek lag jaayega
Bhula degi phir dunya bhi !


Wah Kya Baat hai Celmira ji.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob..!!
Dard Ko Bakhoobi Pesh Kiya hai aapne..!!
Last 4 line to Bahut Pyari likhi Hain..!! Great..!!
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Talat
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«Reply #52 on: July 17, 2008, 06:30:41 PM »
Quote from: Harash Mahajan on July 10, 2008, 06:19:31 AM
talat ji...laout ker aya toh tha...par jo regular likhne waale nazer nahiN aaye so gap ho gaya....Achha padne ko milta hai toh undaliyaaN apne aap raastaa doondne lagti hain.....ek laazwaab tehreer likhi hai aapne aaj bhi ...daad kabool kareiN is kavita ke saath

tumhaare in ahsasoN ko dekh ker
Dil ko ik Hook si aati hai...
Kyu?......Kyu...
Kyu nahi lagta kutchh achha
Jab yahaaN hai sab kutchh hai sachha....

Dundalka

Ek dhundalka
YahoN Ki chaader maiN
Lipta hua
Har silwatoN maiN
Dard ka Ahsaas
Har saans Hai
Girvee rakhi
kab tak_______
Riste GhaavoN ko....
Sanjoye rakhoge
andere maiN
_____So jaane do
SapnoN maiN hi sahi
Moti palkoN maiN
Pal jaane do
YadoN ki Dhundalke maiN
Kho jaane do.......


Harash

Harash Ji...Maaf kijiyega...main khud kai din baad aayi hoon kal....aapka jawab aaj dekha maine .

Purane din kyun kho gaye hain
Manzar dhundle ho gaye hain
Wo tadap nahin ab dil main
Armaan saare so gaye hain

Lekin,

Ye ghar hai mera apna
sajaya jise ek chah se
kyun maanu ise begaana
dil bhi kitna deewana
Naye musafir aayenge
nayi reet banayenge
naye rang main bhi lekin
bhoole doston ko hum
har pal yaad kiye jaayenge
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Talat
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«Reply #53 on: July 17, 2008, 06:31:34 PM »
Quote from: Mann on July 12, 2008, 08:42:58 AM
Wah Kya Baat hai Celmira ji.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob..!!
Dard Ko Bakhoobi Pesh Kiya hai aapne..!!
Last 4 line to Bahut Pyari likhi Hain..!! Great..!!

Thankyou ! Mann Usual Smile
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syednaami
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«Reply #54 on: July 17, 2008, 06:57:34 PM »
Quote from: Celmira
Ye ghar hai mera apna
sajaya jise ek chah se
kyun maanu ise begaana
dil bhi kitna deewana
Naye musafir aayenge
nayi reet banayenge
naye rang main bhi lekin
bhoole doston ko hum
har pal yaad kiye jaayenge

Wah jee wah... kya javaab hai... good
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Talat
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«Reply #55 on: July 17, 2008, 07:20:35 PM »
Shukriya janab
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #56 on: July 21, 2008, 04:22:51 PM »
haaN talat maine tumeh bhi bahoot kam hi ab aate dekha hai.....aisa kya hua hai...maloom toh nahiN.....par itna bhi insaan busy nahin hota ke aisi jagah ko insaan bhool jaaye jahaaN ke  plants ko itne mehnat see paani de de ker pala ho....par aaj phir tumeh dekh ker achha laga....


Ek bahoot hi sunder tehreer likhi hai talat....



Khoon ke rishte talak bad-haal our bad-tar lage
Hum jinhe apna samajhte they wahi deegar lage.

hai toh ander se mukammil pathhroN jaisa mizaazz
Dekhne bhar ko Fakat wey Ek sheesha-ghar lage.

Jo bhatak jata hai pal-pal amal ki raah se
Sathh us rehbar ke chalne maiN toh behad dar lage. :D


Quote from: Celmira on July 17, 2008, 06:30:41 PM
Harash Ji...Maaf kijiyega...main khud kai din baad aayi hoon kal....aapka jawab aaj dekha maine .

Purane din kyun kho gaye hain
Manzar dhundle ho gaye hain
Wo tadap nahin ab dil main
Armaan saare so gaye hain

Lekin,

Ye ghar hai mera apna
sajaya jise ek chah se
kyun maanu ise begaana
dil bhi kitna deewana
Naye musafir aayenge
nayi reet banayenge
naye rang main bhi lekin
bhoole doston ko hum
har pal yaad kiye jaayenge
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«Reply #57 on: July 22, 2008, 01:20:04 AM »
Excellent Talat & All.. Applause
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«Reply #58 on: August 05, 2008, 04:10:30 PM »
Quote from: Harash Mahajan on July 21, 2008, 04:22:51 PM
haaN talat maine tumeh bhi bahoot kam hi ab aate dekha hai.....aisa kya hua hai...maloom toh nahiN.....par itna bhi insaan busy nahin hota ke aisi jagah ko insaan bhool jaaye jahaaN ke  plants ko itne mehnat see paani de de ker pala ho....par aaj phir tumeh dekh ker achha laga....


Ek bahoot hi sunder tehreer likhi hai talat....



Khoon ke rishte talak bad-haal our bad-tar lage
Hum jinhe apna samajhte they wahi deegar lage.

hai toh ander se mukammil pathhroN jaisa mizaazz
Dekhne bhar ko Fakat wey Ek sheesha-ghar lage.

Jo bhatak jata hai pal-pal amal ki raah se
Sathh us rehbar ke chalne maiN toh behad dar lage. :D


bahoot khoob harsh ji......
har ashar behad umda aur sadha hua....kamal likhte hain aap.......badhai
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«Reply #59 on: August 20, 2008, 02:16:43 PM »
Quote from: Aryaan on July 22, 2008, 01:20:04 AM
Excellent Talat & All.. Applause

Shukriya Aryaan Usual Smile
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