VISH PYALE

by smardia on September 02, 2009, 05:28:22 PM
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VISH PYALE

Katoota k vish pyale, Itne pee dale hain
Ki pyaar k jaam, Bhi ab begane lagte hain.
Amrit ki abhilasha bhi, Kab ki he chhod chuke hain
Madhu ka tou swad bhi hum, Kab ka bhool chuke hain

Par Ab garal (poision) pee jiyenge kaise ?
Chandan tan par bhujango k basere hain
Zakhmo ki dharti par julmo k dere hain
Kismat ki basti mai andhere he andhere hain

Ur mai jalte, fafole hain, Marham par pehre hain
Ghav bahut gehre hain, Har oar saanso k lutere hain
Afsos bhagya ki dhaar par, Beksur, kurbaan ho gye
Mukademe bhut lade jeevan bhar Surendra,
Prabhu Ab teri adalat mai aa baree ho gye hum

Surendra Mardia
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«Reply #1 on: September 02, 2009, 05:34:48 PM »
wah..wah...bahut khub...lajwab.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: September 02, 2009, 06:56:02 PM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Smardia ji,wonderful creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: September 02, 2009, 10:33:26 PM »
Quote from: smardia on September 02, 2009, 05:28:22 PM
VISH PYALE

Katoota k vish pyale, Itne pee dale hain
Ki pyaar k jaam, Bhi ab begane lagte hain.
Amrit ki abhilasha bhi, Kab ki he chhod chuke hain
Madhu ka tou swad bhi hum, Kab ka bhool chuke hain

Par Ab garal (poision) pee jiyenge kaise ?
Chandan tan par bhujango k basere hain
Zakhmo ki dharti par julmo k dere hain
Kismat ki basti mai andhere he andhere hain

Ur mai jalte, fafole hain, Marham par pehre hain
Ghav bahut gehre hain, Har oar saanso k lutere hain
Afsos bhagya ki dhaar par, Beksur, kurbaan ho gye
Mukademe bhut lade jeevan bhar Surendra,
Prabhu Ab teri adalat mai aa baree ho gye hum

Surendra Mardia


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah kaya baat hai smardia ji....bahoot bahoot khoob... apki shudh hindi... meri jaan le jaati hai... Crying kaise jawab du itani shudh hindi ka .... DOH

Koshish karne ja rahi hu... app jitna acha to nahi... magar jo kalam ne likhwaya wo likhne ja rahi hu..

Sitam, sitam aur zakhm itne hridaya (dil) main simat aaye hai
halak mai rehti hai baat, Lub har baar sile he paaye hai

hoti rehti hai baat hansi ki goonj ke saath, har mehfil mai
bin jazbaaton ke magar, har baar shabd he paaye hai

Deta hai koi zakhm ab to, dil kehta hai chalo ek aur sahi
Khushi ke raasto mai bhi, Ghum he sirf haath aaye hai

Vish pyala bani zindagi, boond boond peete he jaati hai Pooja
har baar mandir mai jaa kar kahe, Lo aaj bhi ansoo ki barsaat mai bheeg aaye hai
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #4 on: September 02, 2009, 10:47:49 PM »
Really touching creation Pooja ji bahut khoob,minblowing lines. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2009, 05:33:52 AM »
Surendra jee:

namaskaar!

baRii hi saadagee se aapne apni rachanaa ke Zar'iiYe bahot kuch keh diyaa! saadagee bhari ees  koShiSh ne dil ko chhu liyaa!  daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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smardia
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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2009, 05:06:55 PM »
Umraanji bahut bahut shukriya aapko rachna pasand aayee...
Quote from: umraan on September 02, 2009, 05:34:48 PM
wah..wah...bahut khub...lajwab.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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smardia
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«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2009, 05:09:11 PM »
Madhuji aapne hamari kavita padhi aur use saraha.....aapka dil se dhanyawad....

Quote from: madhuwesh on September 02, 2009, 06:56:02 PM
Wah wah bahut khoob Smardia ji,wonderful creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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smardia
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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2009, 05:18:57 PM »
Poojaji aap saath deti hain tou likhne ka hosla badh jaata hai....

Aapne bahut sunder shabdo main likha hai....meri kavita k dard ko bakhoobi pehchana hai aur usi jajbe ko alag shabdo mai jeevan diya hai kahu tou anuchit nahi hoga..bus yu he saath dete rahiye... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Quote from: Pooja on September 02, 2009, 10:33:26 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah kaya baat hai smardia ji....bahoot bahoot khoob... apki shudh hindi... meri jaan le jaati hai... Crying kaise jawab du itani shudh hindi ka .... DOH

Koshish karne ja rahi hu... app jitna acha to nahi... magar jo kalam ne likhwaya wo likhne ja rahi hu..

Sitam, sitam aur zakhm itne hridaya (dil) main simat aaye hai
halak mai rehti hai baat, Lub har baar sile he paaye hai

hoti rehti hai baat hansi ki goonj ke saath, har mehfil mai
bin jazbaaton ke magar, har baar shabd he paaye hai

Deta hai koi zakhm ab to, dil kehta hai chalo ek aur sahi
Khushi ke raasto mai bhi, Ghum he sirf haath aaye hai

Vish pyala bani zindagi, boond boond peete he jaati hai Pooja
har baar mandir mai jaa kar kahe, Lo aaj bhi ansoo ki barsaat mai bheeg aaye hai
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2009, 05:19:23 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on September 02, 2009, 10:33:26 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah kaya baat hai smardia ji....bahoot bahoot khoob... apki shudh hindi... meri jaan le jaati hai... Crying kaise jawab du itani shudh hindi ka .... DOH

Koshish karne ja rahi hu... app jitna acha to nahi... magar jo kalam ne likhwaya wo likhne ja rahi hu..

Sitam, sitam aur zakhm itne hridaya (dil) main simat aaye hai
halak mai rehti hai baat, Lub har baar sile he paaye hai

hoti rehti hai baat hansi ki goonj ke saath, har mehfil mai
bin jazbaaton ke magar, har baar shabd he paaye hai

Deta hai koi zakhm ab to, dil kehta hai chalo ek aur sahi
Khushi ke raasto mai bhi, Ghum he sirf haath aaye hai

Vish pyala bani zindagi, boond boond peete he jaati hai Pooja
har baar mandir mai jaa kar kahe, Lo aaj bhi ansoo ki barsaat mai bheeg aaye hai

Poojaa jee:

aapne bhee bahot Khuub liKhaa hai! daad!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhen..

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #10 on: September 03, 2009, 05:23:10 PM »
Quote from: smardia on September 02, 2009, 05:28:22 PM
VISH PYALE

Katoota k vish pyale, Itne pee dale hain
Ki pyaar k jaam, Bhi ab begane lagte hain.
Amrit ki abhilasha bhi, Kab ki he chhod chuke hain
Madhu ka tou swad bhi hum, Kab ka bhool chuke hain

Par Ab garal (poision) pee jiyenge kaise ?
Chandan tan par bhujango k basere hain
Zakhmo ki dharti par julmo k dere hain
Kismat ki basti mai andhere he andhere hain

Ur mai jalte, fafole hain, Marham par pehre hain
Ghav bahut gehre hain, Har oar saanso k lutere hain
Afsos bhagya ki dhaar par, Beksur, kurbaan ho gye
Mukademe bhut lade jeevan bhar Surendra,
Prabhu Ab teri adalat mai aa baree ho gye hum

Surendra Mardia


wah sam ji wah...

jasbir singh
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smardia
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«Reply #11 on: September 03, 2009, 05:25:02 PM »
Dhavaljee aapka tahedil se shukriya..dhanyawad...Aapne is rachna ko bariki se padha aur pasand kiya....mai aabhari hu....

Quote from: Dhaval on September 03, 2009, 05:33:52 AM
Surendra jee:

namaskaar!

baRii hi saadagee se aapne apni rachanaa ke Zar'iiYe bahot kuch keh diyaa! saadagee bhari ees  koShiSh ne dil ko chhu liyaa!  daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #12 on: September 03, 2009, 05:25:39 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on September 02, 2009, 10:33:26 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah kaya baat hai smardia ji....bahoot bahoot khoob... apki shudh hindi... meri jaan le jaati hai... Crying kaise jawab du itani shudh hindi ka .... DOH

Koshish karne ja rahi hu... app jitna acha to nahi... magar jo kalam ne likhwaya wo likhne ja rahi hu..

Sitam, sitam aur zakhm itne hridaya (dil) main simat aaye hai
halak mai rehti hai baat, Lub har baar sile he paaye hai

hoti rehti hai baat hansi ki goonj ke saath, har mehfil mai
bin jazbaaton ke magar, har baar shabd he paaye hai

Deta hai koi zakhm ab to, dil kehta hai chalo ek aur sahi
Khushi ke raasto mai bhi, Ghum he sirf haath aaye hai

Vish pyala bani zindagi, boond boond peete he jaati hai Pooja
har baar mandir mai jaa kar kahe, Lo aaj bhi ansoo ki barsaat mai bheeg aaye hai


wah wah pooja ji... bahut hi khoob

jasbir singh
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smardia
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«Reply #13 on: September 03, 2009, 05:29:13 PM »
Jasbirji aap tou hamesha he hamari kavita ki tarriff karte hain...
Aap ka support milne se jayada likhne ka man karta hai...aapka tahedilse aabhar....
Quote from: jasbirsingh on September 03, 2009, 05:23:10 PM
wah sam ji wah...

jasbir singh
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #14 on: September 03, 2009, 05:30:16 PM »
Quote from: smardia on September 03, 2009, 05:29:13 PM
Jasbirji aap tou hamesha he hamari kavita ki tarriff karte hain...
Aap ka support milne se jayada likhne ka man karta hai...aapka tahedilse aabhar....

yaar aap likhtey hi itney kamaal ka ho .... keep it up dost ...

jasbir singh
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