- Vishwas Ka Daaga -

by Meena on June 04, 2005, 05:40:05 PM
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pandit
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«Reply #30 on: June 08, 2005, 03:17:48 PM »
bahut accha meena ji..............
kahe to kiss se kahe haal e dil,
lekar jaye to kaha jaye ye barbaad e dil,
pooja tha jis moorat ko humne,
usse ne hi kiya hai tabbah e dil.
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Meena
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«Reply #31 on: June 08, 2005, 03:36:34 PM »
thanx pandit and gud one!!

roshni ke liye jalane lage ek diye ko,
haath jal gaya aag se to kyu kosne lage us diye ko!!
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«Reply #32 on: June 08, 2005, 05:17:21 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
dosto...phir se kuch jazbaat pesh karna chahati hoon:

Kasme khayi thi unone saath nibane ki,
Gum ki doop me pyar ki chaon dikhane ki,
Kyu gum hai “Meena” unke jane ka tujhe,
Woh tood gaya jo…woh ek Wada hi to hai!

Vishwas ki door woh toodta chala gaya,
Badaya tha jo haath, who maud ke chala gaya,
Kyu gum karti ho “Meena” ek door ke tootne ki,
Woh tood gaya jo…who ek nazuk daaga hi to hai!


excellent work meena sis,bohat khoob.
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Meena
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«Reply #33 on: June 08, 2005, 05:25:10 PM »
arre thank u...ji....thank u.....nidhi kuddiye!!!!!!1

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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #34 on: June 08, 2005, 07:40:32 PM »
Lamha Lamha waqt gujar jayega,
Chand lamho mein daman chut jayega.
Abhi waqt hai chand bate kar lo hamse,
fir kya pata kal apki zindagi me koi aur shamil ho jayega
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #35 on: June 13, 2005, 06:55:44 PM »
Sitam unke dil par uthaaye hue hai,
Udaasi ki duniya basaaye hue hai,
Jafaao pe unki bahaayenge ek din,
Wo aansu ab tak bachaaye hue hai,
Zamane se kahe di hai har baat apni,
Magar baat unki chhupaaye hue hai,
Na wo tasavvur na wo saamne hai,
Ye sar hum kis liye jhukaaye hue hai,
Wo kehte the humko paraaya na samjho,
Wo hi aaj hame lagte paraaye hue hai ...
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #36 on: June 17, 2005, 05:11:38 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
kasoor hua hai ya rab!! mujh se yeh kasiaa
jis se kiya hai pyaar meiney ussi ka dil dhukaya

nafrat ho rhi hai aaj apney honey pe mujhey
iss gunaah se pehley ya rab!! kyun na mujhey uthaya

kya aisa kru ke phir se aaye usko vishwaas mujh pe
sach rha hoon, koi bta de mujhey,  muhey kuch samj na aaya!!


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bahut khoob humtum........................
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HumTum
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«Reply #37 on: June 24, 2005, 04:22:19 PM »
Quote from: "khushiiiii"
Quote from: "HumTum"
kasoor hua hai ya rab!! mujh se yeh kasiaa
jis se kiya hai pyaar meiney ussi ka dil dhukaya

nafrat ho rhi hai aaj apney honey pe mujhey
iss gunaah se pehley ya rab!! kyun na mujhey uthaya

kya aisa kru ke phir se aaye usko vishwaas mujh pe
sach rha hoon, koi bta de mujhey,  muhey kuch samj na aaya!!


sad5


bahut khoob humtum........................


Shukriya Khushi Usual Smile
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amrita
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«Reply #38 on: June 24, 2005, 06:13:01 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
dosto...phir se kuch jazbaat pesh karna chahati hoon:

Kasme khayi thi unone saath nibane ki,
Gum ki doop me pyar ki chaon dikhane ki,
Kyu gum hai “Meena” unke jane ka tujhe,
Woh tood gaya jo…woh ek Wada hi to hai!

Vishwas ki door woh toodta chala gaya,
Badaya tha jo haath, who maud ke chala gaya,
Kyu gum karti ho “Meena” ek door ke tootne ki,
Woh tood gaya jo…who ek nazuk daaga hi to hai!


bahut acha likha hai aap sab ne and meena mumbai language mein kahu toh your totally jhakaas..!!
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Meena
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«Reply #39 on: June 24, 2005, 06:14:02 PM »
lol thank u amrita....padne ke liye aur pasand karne ke liye!!!!  :D
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