Voh nishan hoon maien !

by shara63 on November 14, 2012, 04:50:18 AM
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Adhoore khwabon ki tabeer dhoonta phirta
dar-badar bhatakta hua insaan hoon maien,

Waqt ke thapedon se jaddo-jeahad karta, tanha
makeen ke deed ko muntazir,ek makaan hoon maien;

Ujad zindagi ki tanhaiyaan jeete huve,
Basere ki chahat chhipae, bayaban hoon maien;

Hazaar zulm-o-sitam, tamam zillat-o-ruswai,
sab sahta raha jo khamosh, voh bezubaan hoon maien;

Na jane kitni aandhiyan, kitni baarishen aaeen,
Mita saka na jise waqt bhi, voh nishaan hoon maien!!

Adhoore khwabon ki tabeer dhoonta phirta
dar-badar bhatakta hua insaan hoon maien !! ........'ainy'

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«Reply #1 on: November 14, 2012, 05:02:36 AM »

Adhoore khwabon ki tabeer dhoonta phirta
dar-badar bhatakta hua insaan hoon maien,

Waqt ke thapedon se jaddo-jeahad karta, tanha
makeen ke deed ko muntazir,ek makaan hoon maien;

Ujad zindagi ki tanhaiyaan jeete huve,
Basere ki chahat chhipae, bayaban hoon maien;

Hazaar zulm-o-sitam, tamam zillat-o-ruswai,
sab sahta raha jo khamosh, voh bezubaan hoon maien;

Na jane kitni aandhiyan, kitni baarishen aaeen,
Mita saka na jise waqt bhi, voh nishaan hoon maien!!

Adhoore khwabon ki tabeer dhoonta phirta
dar-badar bhatakta hua insaan hoon maien !!


kya baat hai shara jee bohut umda peshkash hai, bohut khoobsurti se piroye gaye jazbaat heN.dheerrrrooon daaad qubool kareN
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«Reply #2 on: November 14, 2012, 05:16:40 AM »
Shukria Aarish sb!
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«Reply #3 on: November 14, 2012, 05:27:50 AM »
Adhoore khwabon ki tabeer dhoonta phirta
dar-badar bhatakta hua insaan hoon maien,

Waqt ke thapedon se jaddo-jeahad karta, tanha
makeen ke deed ko muntazir,ek makaan hoon maien;

Ujad zindagi ki tanhaiyaan jeete huve,
Basere ki chahat chhipae, bayaban hoon maien;

Hazaar zulm-o-sitam, tamam zillat-o-ruswai,
sab sahta raha jo khamosh, voh bezubaan hoon maien;

Na jane kitni aandhiyan, kitni baarishen aaeen,
Mita saka na jise waqt bhi, voh nishaan hoon maien!!

Adhoore khwabon ki tabeer dhoonta phirta
dar-badar bhatakta hua insaan hoon maien !! ........'ainy'


janab sarey ashaar khoob wazandaar hai,,bohut achha laga padh kar,
aise hi likhtey rahiye..mubarak  ho apko ..
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«Reply #4 on: November 14, 2012, 05:38:20 AM »
janab sarey ashaar khoob wazandaar hai,,bohut achha laga padh kar,
aise hi likhtey rahiye..mubarak  ho apko ..

Janab, aapke hausla baksh alfaaz mere liye waqai ahmiyat rakhte hain...bahut 2 Shukria janab!!
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«Reply #5 on: November 14, 2012, 05:53:44 AM »
Bahot khoob likha hai Shara ji.
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«Reply #6 on: November 14, 2012, 05:59:57 AM »
Beautiful! Just beautiful , Sharad ji .
Dheron  daad  aur mubarakbaad . Hasan
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«Reply #7 on: November 14, 2012, 06:11:18 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: November 14, 2012, 06:15:34 AM »
Thanks a lot for your encouraging words....aap sab ki daad mere liye masarrat ka baaes hai!    
Shara aka 'ainy'
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«Reply #9 on: November 14, 2012, 06:18:48 AM »
Shukria Riyaz Ashna sb.!
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«Reply #10 on: November 14, 2012, 06:27:48 AM »
Shukria, shukria,sadd shukria huzoor!!
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«Reply #11 on: November 14, 2012, 07:21:26 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: November 14, 2012, 07:29:30 AM »
Thankyou Mr. Bahukhandi !!
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«Reply #13 on: November 14, 2012, 08:42:19 AM »
Adhoore khwabon ki tabeer dhoonta phirta
dar-badar bhatakta hua insaan hoon maien,

Waqt ke thapedon se jaddo-jeahad karta, tanha
makeen ke deed ko muntazir,ek makaan hoon maien;

Ujad zindagi ki tanhaiyaan jeete huve,
Basere ki chahat chhipae, bayaban hoon maien;

Hazaar zulm-o-sitam, tamam zillat-o-ruswai,
sab sahta raha jo khamosh, voh bezubaan hoon maien;

Na jane kitni aandhiyan, kitni baarishen aaeen,
Mita saka na jise waqt bhi, voh nishaan hoon maien!!

Adhoore khwabon ki tabeer dhoonta phirta
dar-badar bhatakta hua insaan hoon maien !! ........'ainy'



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«Reply #14 on: November 14, 2012, 09:45:37 AM »
 shukria, i'm really happy3
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