Wafa ki Inteha..........(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on March 12, 2009, 07:04:17 AM
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Dosto aaj main Vacation ja raha hu India for 2 weeks, is beech Yo par aana shayed kam hi ho, uske liye advance me mafi ka talabgaar hu.

Par jate jate ek bilkul nayee cheeze aapki nazar karke ja raha hu. Apni wafa ki inteha samjhane ki koshish ki hain, ab is koshish me kitna kamyaab hua GHAYEL yeh faisla aapke hatho me hain.


Tere nam ki hum laj rakhte jaana
Jo tu ek baar kehta, hum khud bevafa ho jate

Na kehta koi tujhe sangdil sanam jaana
Chupa kar apne aasoo, hum har waqt muskurate

Na lagata koi tujhpe tohmat meri barbadiyo ki
Jo tu ek baar kehta, hum roz mehfile sajate

Koi qatil tujhe na kehta meri maut pe jaana
Jo tu ek baar kehta, hum khud hi mar jate

Na koi yeh samajhta Firaaq-e-yaar ne sharabi humko bana diya
Jo tu ek baar kehta, hum mai ko hath na lagate

Meri tariqiyo ka tujhko koi ilzam na deta
Jo tu ek baar kehta, hum chiraag nahi dil apna jalate

Na samjhta koi kalam-e-GHAYEL ko tujhse behtar
Jo tu ek baar kehta, hum kabhi koi sher na sunate

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: March 12, 2009, 09:17:03 AM »
Bohat Achche Sajid Bhaiya Nice One,.

Aur Happy Vaccation, Duaa mein Hume yaad Rakhiyo,.
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«Reply #2 on: March 12, 2009, 09:56:47 AM »
ASAK ,

  GHAYAL SB AAP SUNAATEY JAO.. ITS VERY GOOD

  ADIL BECHAIN
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«Reply #3 on: March 12, 2009, 02:22:54 PM »
Bohat  bohat shukriya chote duao ke liye aur Adil bohat shukriyaan jo mera yeh mamuli kalam tumhe pasand aaya. at the moment i am at the airport sending this msg from mobile.
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«Reply #4 on: March 12, 2009, 02:30:35 PM »
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Happy n safe Journey Sajid ji Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: March 15, 2009, 07:01:34 PM »
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Happy n safe Journey Sajid ji Thumbs UP

Thank You Salma.........
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«Reply #6 on: March 15, 2009, 07:06:39 PM »
Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji...Aapke aane ka intezar rahega....!! Have a nice & safe journey.
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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2009, 01:42:14 PM »
Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji...Aapke aane ka intezar rahega....!! Have a nice & safe journey.

Bohat shukriyaan Talat.........
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«Reply #8 on: March 16, 2009, 05:23:59 PM »
Hmmm nice...
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«Reply #9 on: March 16, 2009, 05:59:44 PM »
Ghayalji bhav aur bhavna sahi hai aapki....
Per samajh nahi aata aap ling bhed kyon nahi karte...
Istriling ko bhul keval puling he likha hai koi karan ?

"Jo tu ek baar kehti, hum khud bevafa ho jate

Na kehta koi tujhe sangdil sanam jaana
Chupa kar apne aasoo, hum har waqt muskurate

Na lagata koi tujhpe tohmat meri barbadiyo ki
Jo tu ek baar kehti, hum roz mehfile sajate"


Dosto aaj main Vacation ja raha hu India for 2 weeks, is beech Yo par aana shayed kam hi ho, uske liye advance me mafi ka talabgaar hu.

Par jate jate ek bilkul nayee cheeze aapki nazar karke ja raha hu. Apni wafa ki inteha samjhane ki koshish ki hain, ab is koshish me kitna kamyaab hua GHAYEL yeh faisla aapke hatho me hain.


Tere nam ki hum laj rakhte jaana
Jo tu ek baar kehta, hum khud bevafa ho jate

Na kehta koi tujhe sangdil sanam jaana
Chupa kar apne aasoo, hum har waqt muskurate

Na lagata koi tujhpe tohmat meri barbadiyo ki
Jo tu ek baar kehta, hum roz mehfile sajate

Koi qatil tujhe na kehta meri maut pe jaana
Jo tu ek baar kehta, hum khud hi mar jate

Na koi yeh samajhta Firaaq-e-yaar ne sharabi humko bana diya
Jo tu ek baar kehta, hum mai ko hath na lagate

Meri tariqiyo ka tujhko koi ilzam na deta
Jo tu ek baar kehta, hum chiraag nahi dil apna jalate

Na samjhta koi kalam-e-GHAYEL ko tujhse behtar
Jo tu ek baar kehta, hum kabhi koi sher na sunate

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2009, 04:15:44 AM »
Ghayalji bhav aur bhavna sahi hai aapki....
Per samajh nahi aata aap ling bhed kyon nahi karte...
Istriling ko bhul keval puling he likha hai koi karan ?

"Jo tu ek baar kehti, hum khud bevafa ho jate

Na kehta koi tujhe sangdil sanam jaana
Chupa kar apne aasoo, hum har waqt muskurate

Na lagata koi tujhpe tohmat meri barbadiyo ki
Jo tu ek baar kehti, hum roz mehfile sajate"


Anamika sabse pehle bohat shukriyaan jo tumne mere likhe ko itni tavajjo di. Waise "kehta" jo lafz hain yaha uska striling ya pulling se koi lena dena nahi hain. Yaha par shayer ek betakalluf andaz me guftugu kar raha hain, isiliye usne tum nahi tu lafz use kiya hain.

Agar aap yeh kalam tarannum me sunegi to muje pura yaqeen hain ke aapki yeh shikayat baki nahi rahegi. "Jo tu ek baar kehta" yeh sirf ek betakalluf andaz hain hope i am able to convince you.





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«Reply #11 on: March 28, 2009, 07:51:25 AM »
Hmmm nice...

Thank You...
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