WAJAH BETAABEE (4- Liner).......... "MohaN"

by surindarn on September 23, 2015, 02:52:03 PM
Pages: [1]
Print
Author  (Read 1103 times)
surindarn
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 273
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
134 days, 2 hours and 27 minutes.
Posts: 31520
Member Since: Mar 2012


View Profile
WAJAH BETAABEE

Wajah-e-betaabee naa poochiye baarhaa aisaa huaa,
Dil kee dharkan pe meree kuchh khatkaa saa huaa,
Haaye yeh kyaa ke jhooth kaa bol baalaa hai aajkal…  
Sahib kaise theek ho nizaam-e-khuda bigrhaa huaa!!

Surindar. N                              "MohaN"
Logged
Syed Mohd Mahzar
Guest
«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2015, 04:08:54 PM »
Quote from: surindarn on September 23, 2015, 02:52:03 PM
WAJAH BE.TAABEE

Wajaa be.taabee naa poochiye baarhaa aisaa huaa,
Dil kee dharkan pe meree kuchh khatkaa saa huaa,
Haaye yeh kyaa ke jhooth kaa bol baalaa hai aajkal…  
Sahib kaise theek ho nizaam-e-khuda bigrhaa huaa!!

Surindar. N                              "MohaN"


  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Surinder ji,
              bahut hi umdaaaaaaaaaaa. meri daad qubool farmayein "Wajaa e betaabee" ya "wajah betabi ki" nazm hota to aur behtar tha................
Logged
Shikha sanghvi
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 25
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
7 days, 14 hours and 15 minutes.

Shayari likhna or padhna humari hobby hai

Posts: 2266
Member Since: Jan 2015


View Profile WWW
«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2015, 07:13:23 PM »
Very very nice surindarji
Logged
surindarn
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 273
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
134 days, 2 hours and 27 minutes.
Posts: 31520
Member Since: Mar 2012


View Profile
«Reply #3 on: September 24, 2015, 02:46:50 AM »
Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on September 23, 2015, 04:08:54 PM
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Surinder ji,
              bahut hi umdaaaaaaaaaaa. meri daad qubool farmayein "Wajaa e betaabee" ya "wajah betabi ki" nazm hota to aur behtar tha................
Bahut shukria Mahzar Sahib daad aur suggestion ke liye. Aapkee suggestion sar aankhon pe.
Logged
jeet jainam
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 237
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
60 days, 12 hours and 13 minutes.

my rule no type no life and ,i m happy single

Posts: 10150
Member Since: Dec 2012


View Profile WWW
«Reply #4 on: September 25, 2015, 08:04:35 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bohat bohat umda waaaaahhhhhh
Logged
surindarn
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 273
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
134 days, 2 hours and 27 minutes.
Posts: 31520
Member Since: Mar 2012


View Profile
«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2020, 12:28:06 AM »
Quote from: Shikha sanghvi on September 23, 2015, 07:13:23 PM
Very very nice surindarji
Shikhaa aur jeet jee bahut Shukria.
 notworthy notworthy notworthy
Logged
Pages: [1]
Print
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri-E-Dard > Topic: WAJAH BETAABEE (4- Liner).......... "MohaN"
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 08, 2024, 08:54:12 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:08 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Hifazat - a thriller love...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]
INTEQAM - A sequel to "Hi...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.101 seconds with 26 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8505 Real Poets and poetry admirer