WAJAH BETAABEE (4- Liner).......... "MohaN"

by surindarn on September 23, 2015, 02:52:03 PM

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WAJAH BETAABEE

Wajah-e-betaabee naa poochiye baarhaa aisaa huaa,
Dil kee dharkan pe meree kuchh khatkaa saa huaa,
Haaye yeh kyaa ke jhooth kaa bol baalaa hai aajkal…
Sahib kaise theek ho nizaam-e-khuda bigrhaa huaa!!

Surindar. N "MohaN"


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Re: WAJAH BE.BETAABEE (4- Liner).......... "MohaN"

«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2015, 04:08:54 PM »

Quote from: surindarn on September 23, 2015, 02:52:03 PM

WAJAH BE.TAABEE

Wajaa be.taabee naa poochiye baarhaa aisaa huaa,
Dil kee dharkan pe meree kuchh khatkaa saa huaa,
Haaye yeh kyaa ke jhooth kaa bol baalaa hai aajkal…
Sahib kaise theek ho nizaam-e-khuda bigrhaa huaa!!

Surindar. N "MohaN"

Surinder ji,
bahut hi umdaaaaaaaaaaa. meri daad qubool farmayein "Wajaa e betaabee" ya "wajah betabi ki" nazm hota to aur behtar tha................


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Re: WAJAH BETAABEE (4- Liner).......... "MohaN"

«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2015, 07:13:23 PM »

Very very nice surindarji


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Re: WAJAH BETAABEE (4- Liner).......... "MohaN"

«Reply #3 on: September 24, 2015, 02:46:50 AM »

Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on September 23, 2015, 04:08:54 PM

Surinder ji,
bahut hi umdaaaaaaaaaaa. meri daad qubool farmayein "Wajaa e betaabee" ya "wajah betabi ki" nazm hota to aur behtar tha................

Bahut shukria Mahzar Sahib daad aur suggestion ke liye. Aapkee suggestion sar aankhon pe.


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Re: WAJAH BETAABEE (4- Liner).......... "MohaN"

«Reply #4 on: September 25, 2015, 08:04:35 AM »

Bohat bohat umda waaaaahhhhhh


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Re: WAJAH BETAABEE (4- Liner).......... "MohaN"

«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2020, 12:28:06 AM »

Quote from: Shikha sanghvi on September 23, 2015, 07:13:23 PM

Very very nice surindarji

Shikhaa aur jeet jee bahut Shukria.
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