Waqt ho chal hai ab mera Sabse door jaane ka -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

deepika_divya

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«Reply #15 on: July 04, 2009, 06:42:22 AM »

Quote from: Mann on July 02, 2009, 03:39:06 PM

Wah kya Baat hai Divya.. Bahut dard Bhara likha hai dear.. Applause

Jab Kabhi Teri Aankhon se Ashqon Ki Barsaat Hogi,
Samajh Lena Yeh Deewana, Tujhe Yaad Kar Raha Hai.....

Subah-o- Shaam "Sahil" Par Likh-Likh Ke Tera Naam,
Tere Aane Ki Upar wale se, Fariyaad Kar Raha hai....!!

**~** Mann **~**

Thank You so Much Vikas for always appreciating me with lovely words.. thank you..

you also written very beautiful.


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Pooja

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Re: Waqt ho chal hai ab mera Sabse door jaane ka

«Reply #16 on: July 04, 2009, 06:44:36 AM »

wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob Sophi...

Man ji acha sath nibha rahe hai app....

Good work by Both of you...


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deepika_divya

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Re: Waqt ho chal hai ab mera Sabse door jaane ka

«Reply #17 on: July 04, 2009, 06:52:27 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on July 02, 2009, 03:43:03 PM

Bahot hi khoob likha hai Sophi ji aapne,har lafz dard ke ehsaas se roobaru kara raha hai,all three posts are so nicely written by u.Mann ji aapne bhi umda likha hai,very nice

Quote from: @kaash on July 02, 2009, 03:53:42 PM

Door na doston se hona,na khud se bhi kabhi door rahna mere dost dosti ko yaad kar na khud ko na use ashq dena Yun to dil nam ho hi jata hai kisi na kisi baat par, doston ki aakhen barsen bhoole se na aisi yaad dena na kabhi aisi baat karna

Thnak You so so Much Kaash Ji...and you also written so touchy lines... thank you so much.


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deepika_divya

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Re: Waqt ho chal hai ab mera Sabse door jaane ka

«Reply #18 on: July 04, 2009, 06:55:07 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on July 03, 2009, 03:53:46 AM

Wah wah Sophi ji,very nice and beautiful creation,kitna dard hai aapke poem mein

Mann ji aur Kaash ji ne bhi bahut khoob likha. Applause

Bahoot Bahoot Sukhriyaan Madhu ji... Itni saari clappings dekh dil khush ho gaya.. thank you


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deepika_divya

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Re: Waqt ho chal hai ab mera Sabse door jaane ka

«Reply #19 on: July 04, 2009, 06:57:35 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on July 02, 2009, 05:04:54 PM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Sophi..

Bahut Hi khooburat Likha hai Sophi,Par Shukar hai Aapne Yeh Kahan Ke Yeh sirf Ek poetry hai Varna Tilte padhkar Main to Sach Darr Gaye Tha

Thank you so Much kaas ji.. waise jab tak Yoindiahai.. Divya yahan se jaane wali nahi... Mar bhi gai tho.. Bhoot ban kar yahan aati rahungi... Usual Smile


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deepika_divya

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Re: Waqt ho chal hai ab mera Sabse door jaane ka

«Reply #20 on: July 04, 2009, 06:59:06 AM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 03, 2009, 05:23:57 AM

Nice one Sophi Ji and equally good response Mann Ji
AAP dono bahut achchha likhte hain
Bahut anand aataa hai aap ke kalaam padhne mein

Thank You so Much Rajesh Ji.. Aur thank you for lovely wordings and always commenting on my poems..

Thank you so much!


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deepika_divya

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Re: Waqt ho chal hai ab mera Sabse door jaane ka

«Reply #21 on: July 04, 2009, 07:00:13 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on July 04, 2009, 06:44:36 AM

wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob Sophi...

Man ji acha sath nibha rahe hai app....

Good work by Both of you...

Thank you so so much Pooja Di.. I really missed you these days.. Thank you so much for always encouraging me .. Usual Smile


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