WaQt-e-Safar Qareeb Hai....

by Aryaan on June 29, 2005, 04:37:44 AM
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Aryaan
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WaQt-e-safar Qareeb hai bister samait loon
Bikhra huwa hayaat ka dafter samait loon

Phir jaane hum milen na milen ik zara ruko
Main dil ke aaine mein yeh manzar samait loon

Ghairon ne jo sulook kiye unn ka kya gilah
Phainke hain doston ne jo pathar samait loon

Kal jaane kaise honge, kahan honge ghar ke log
Ankhon mein ek baar, bhara ghar samait loon

Aryaan bharak rahi hai zamaane mein jitni aag
Ji chahataa hai seene ke andar samait loon...
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sandhaya
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«Reply #1 on: June 29, 2005, 05:19:04 AM »
kya baat hai aryaan ji kaha se late ho itni siddat itna dard apni nazamon main ............too good yaar
tumhe pata hai tumhari tariff ke liye tuh mujhe lafz bhi nahi milte...................ur 3rd and 4th pahra is kamaal yaar .............

hum apni zindagi ko sametate reh gaye
meri khushi ke moti mere ansuon main beh gaye

kossish bahut ki thi dil ne unhe rokne ki
vo meri kismat main nahi hai vo humse keh gaye

dil ne kaha ki abh tu bhul ja uss sandhaya ko
ki tere armaan abh tuh armaan ban ke hi reh gaye

zamana kare sitam humpe humne sab seh liye
teri ek ungali jo uthi mujhpe tuh mere dum nikal gaye
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Aryaan
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«Reply #2 on: June 29, 2005, 05:31:32 AM »
Bohat shurkiya Sandhaya...
Aapki nawazish hai.. aur aap kaun sa kam hain, aap bhi harr baar surprise deti hain itna khubsoorat reply de kar, itni haazir jawaabi.... yeh bhi ek bohat bara talent hai apne aap mein... likhiti rahiye ga!
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sandhaya
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«Reply #3 on: June 29, 2005, 05:52:21 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Bohat shurkiya Sandhaya...
Aapki nawazish hai.. aur aap kaun sa kam hain, aap bhi harr baar surprise deti hain itna khubsoorat reply de kar, itni haazir jawaabi.... yeh bhi ek bohat bara talent hai apne aap mein... likhiti rahiye ga!
ur welcome Aryaan .........aur sukhriya meri itni saari tarif ke liye ......

teri dua mere liye kuch yun kaam kar gai
ki meri zindagi dekhte dekhte hi savar gai ....
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Aryaan
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«Reply #4 on: June 29, 2005, 06:24:22 AM »
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ur welcome Aryaan .........aur sukhriya meri itni saari tarif ke liye ......
teri dua mere liye kuch yun kaam kar gai
ki meri zindagi dekhte dekhte hi savar gai ....

Nice One Sandhaya.....
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sanya310
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«Reply #5 on: June 29, 2005, 08:51:05 AM »
wa wah wahhhh :cool: aryaan aur sandhaya! kya likhaa haiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!                                                                                         :D
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«Reply #6 on: June 29, 2005, 09:45:16 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
WaQt-e-safar Qareeb hai bister samait loon
Bikhra huwa hayaat ka dafter samait loon

Phir jaane hum milen na milen ik zara ruko
Main dil ke aaine mein yeh manzar samait loon

Ghairon ne jo sulook kiye unn ka kya gilah
Phainke hain doston ne jo pathar samait loon

Kal jaane kaise honge, kahan honge ghar ke log
Ankhon mein ek baar, bhara ghar samait loon

Aryaan bharak rahi hai zamaane mein jitni aag
Ji chahataa hai seene ke andar samait loon...


sandhaya ji ne bilkul sahi kaha aryaan,aapki tareef ke liye lafz hi nahi milte,kya khoob likhte ho har baar,ab kya kahoon phir se words nahi mil rahe....bas aise hi likhte rahiyega.Sandhaya ji aapne bhi bohat accha likha hai,superbbb both of u.
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sandhaya
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«Reply #7 on: June 29, 2005, 09:50:35 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Quote from: "Aryaan"
WaQt-e-safar Qareeb hai bister samait loon
Bikhra huwa hayaat ka dafter samait loon

Phir jaane hum milen na milen ik zara ruko
Main dil ke aaine mein yeh manzar samait loon

Ghairon ne jo sulook kiye unn ka kya gilah
Phainke hain doston ne jo pathar samait loon

Kal jaane kaise honge, kahan honge ghar ke log
Ankhon mein ek baar, bhara ghar samait loon

Aryaan bharak rahi hai zamaane mein jitni aag
Ji chahataa hai seene ke andar samait loon...


sandhaya ji ne bilkul sahi kaha aryaan,aapki tareef ke liye lafz hi nahi milte,kya khoob likhte ho har baar,ab kya kahoon phir se words nahi mil rahe....bas aise hi likhte rahiyega.Sandhaya ji aapne bhi bohat accha likha hai,superbbb both of u.
sukhriya Sanya ji ........aur Nidhi ji .............aapka bhi bahut sukhriya meri itni tariff ke liye aur Aryaan tuh sartaj hai yahan bahut hi khoob likhte hai unki taraf se main tumhe sukhriya keh deti hun .............ok
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Aryaan
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«Reply #8 on: June 29, 2005, 03:42:48 PM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
wa wah wahhhh :cool: aryaan aur sandhaya! kya likhaa haiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!                                                                                         :D

Thank you Sanya........Usual Smile
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Aryaan
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«Reply #9 on: June 29, 2005, 03:47:03 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

sandhaya ji ne bilkul sahi kaha aryaan,aapki tareef ke liye lafz hi nahi milte,kya khoob likhte ho har baar,ab kya kahoon phir se words nahi mil rahe....bas aise hi likhte rahiyega.Sandhaya ji aapne bhi bohat accha likha hai,superbbb both of you.


Shukriya  :oops:  Nidhi aapka bhi... main kya kahoon aur.... im speechless.... mat kiya karein itni tareef, kaheen hawaa mein urna na shuroo ho jaaun....Usual Smile  aap sabki ki mohabbat aur pyar haiyeh  tau, warna main iss qaabil kahan.....
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Aryaan
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«Reply #10 on: June 29, 2005, 03:51:56 PM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
sukhriya Sanya ji ........aur Nidhi ji .............aapka bhi bahut sukhriya meri itni tariff ke liye aur Aryaan tuh sartaj hai yahan bahut hi khoob likhte hai unki taraf se main tumhe sukhriya keh deti hun .............ok


lo innki bhi suno, muhje yoindia ka sartaaj bana diya...arey itne bare bare aur ache shair bathey hain yahan, naraaz ho jayein ge woh...Usual Smile
Thanks agian Sandhaya, yeh aap sabka bara pan hai jo itni izzat detey hain.....
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: June 29, 2005, 04:30:48 PM »
wah wah wah!!!! kaya baat hai Aryaan and Sandhaya ji bahoot hi acha likha hai app dono ne!!!!!! kamal !!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: June 29, 2005, 10:05:24 PM »
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wah wah wah!!!! kaya baat hai Aryaan and Sandhaya ji bahoot hi acha likha hai app dono ne!!!!!! kamal !!!!!

Bohat shukriya Pooja.........
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Aryaan
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«Reply #13 on: June 30, 2005, 11:51:29 AM »

Pathar pe lakeeron ki tahra dil mein tera naam
Aur log kahein mujh se ke ab uss ko bhula do
Tarso na kabhi pyaar ko yeh meri duaa hai
Aye kaash faQat tum bhi mujhe dil se duaa do
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sandhaya
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«Reply #14 on: June 30, 2005, 12:00:38 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"

Pathar pe lakeeron ki tahra dil mein tera naam
Aur log kahein mujh se ke ab uss ko bhula do
Tarso na kabhi pyaar ko yeh meri duaa hai
Aye kaash faQat tum bhi mujhe dil se duaa do
Aryaan ji ..........jo apne dard ka apne ehsaason ka ehsaas karvane ka tarika aa jaye bas vahi shayar kehlata hai aur ..........aap tuh phir kamal hai janab ....

tu dua ki baat karta hai
dil tujhe pujhte hai vo
na samja hai na samjega
ki tujhe kitna chahte hai vo
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