WaQt-e-Safar Qareeb Hai....

by Aryaan on June 29, 2005, 04:37:44 AM
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #30 on: July 02, 2005, 05:52:52 PM »
wah wah  aryan .................thy.............nice  work/.......
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thycreator
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«Reply #31 on: July 02, 2005, 05:59:49 PM »
Thanx a lot waheed bhai.........aap aajkal kuch likhte nahi......kya hua kalam strike hai kya ya naraz ho kissi se..............;-)
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nikki
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«Reply #32 on: July 02, 2005, 06:06:42 PM »
gud job Thy.................................

woh jise kehte hain sabhi kismat
wohi to sabka naseeb hai

jiski talaash mein firte hain sabhi
nahi jaante ke woh dil ke kareeb hai

khud par sabhi ko itna yakin hai
ke kissi par bharosa hi nahi karte

tod dete hain chahat se bhara kissi ka bhi dil
zara si bhi der nahi karte

kaise samjhaon in dil ke darindon ko
kya milega inhe nafrat se
kyun yeh bhi pyar par yakin nahi karte

mil jata hai pyar se to khuda bhi
yeh insaan se pyar karne ki khata hi nahi karte
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thycreator
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«Reply #33 on: July 02, 2005, 06:11:45 PM »
Wah nikki.........nice.......socha tha abhi nahi likhunga par apne majbur kar diya.........

Kab samjhe hum ye bat ki kaun apna kaun paraya hai,
Wahi humdard mera jisne waqt rehte sath nibhaya hai,
Kya kahe unse hum jo apne hokar dur rahe baithe,
Hath kya thamte wo jinhone har waqt bas giraya hai...
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nikki
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«Reply #34 on: July 02, 2005, 06:15:47 PM »
wao......wonderfull Thy....its very nice....

galti to hamari thi jo unse saath nibhane ki umeed kar baithe
woh to sach kehte the rah mein chod jayenge

tab samjha hamne unki baaton ko mazaak
magar aaj khud ko hi duniya ki nazar mein mazaak bana paya
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thycreator
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«Reply #35 on: July 02, 2005, 06:20:55 PM »
Nikki ji..........nice one dear...

Wo din bhi aaj kitne ajeeb lagte hai,
Jo the dil ke kareeb,aaj dur baste hai,
Kaise dil ko samjhaye wo hamare nahi,
Gum chupaye hum aaj din rat hanste hai...
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nikki
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«Reply #36 on: July 02, 2005, 06:35:41 PM »
hey too gud Thy.................

woh juda hai to kya hai
uske dil mein bhi yaadon ka dariya hai

woh labon ko siye hue rehta hai
karta hai tum se pyar muh se nahi kehta

padh sako to padho aankhein uski
dekho wahan tumhare siwa koi doosra nahi rehta
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #37 on: July 02, 2005, 06:38:26 PM »
Quote from: "thycreator"
Thanx a lot waheed bhai.........aap aajkal kuch likhte nahi......kya hua kalam strike hai kya ya naraz ho kissi se..............;-)


hahahahah   thy...........  ur  welcome .........  aisi  koi  baat  nahi hai ....aaj kal  koi  meri  sher ko  padhne waala nahi  hai :wink:

good  job  nikki..............thy..............

chalo kuch  likh  hi deta hoon.............
 tongue3

meri  kalam  mein  aaj  bhi  wahi  shokhiyan  bhari hai
mere lafzon mein  wahi  khusboo aaj  bhi bhare  hai
kuch  haalat  ne mere rooh  tak aisa asar  kiya
phir  bhi  aaj  bhi aaakar  dekh "Waheed" wahi ka wahi hai..................
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thycreator
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«Reply #38 on: July 02, 2005, 06:44:25 PM »
Thanx a lot nikki aur waheed bhai........and very nicely written by both of you.........

Kahan jaye ab toh soch bhi hum nahi pate,
Badhte badhte se kadam khud hi ruk jate,
Khud ko chod diya humne apne haal par lekin,
Ye kadam mujhe aaj bhi unki gali mein le aate...
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nikki
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«Reply #39 on: July 02, 2005, 06:57:54 PM »
too gud Waheed n Thy...

aapse kisne kaha koi aapki nazmein nahi padhta. Waheed.....hum sabhi log to padhte hain.....waise main to padhti hi hun..bahut hi acha likhte hain aap
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Aryaan
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«Reply #40 on: July 02, 2005, 11:57:24 PM »
Quote from: "thycreator"
Thanx a lot dear.........aap se hi sikhne ki koshish hai.........

Insaan ne insaan ka kya haal kiya hai,
Har shaks yahan par mar mar ke jiya hai,
Har taraf hai aag nafrat ki hi lagi hui,
Har shaks ne apno se hi jeher ka ghoont piya hai,
Kab tak chalega yahan jajjbaton ka sauda,
Sab kuch toh yahan paise ke bhav bika hai....

Khuda bhi sochta hoga jamee par dekh doston,
Kya yahi hai wo insaa jo usne paida kiya hai....

Good One thycreator.....
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thycreator
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«Reply #41 on: July 03, 2005, 08:35:54 AM »
Thanx a lot aryaan.............

Ek dard ki leher phir iss dil mein machalti hai,
Dil mein base har jajjbat ki ummeed pighalti hai,
Koi asha nahi,na aas koi tumse milne ki,
Ab toh bachi hui saansein bhi hathon se fisalti hai...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #42 on: July 03, 2005, 09:07:37 AM »
Quote from: "thycreator"
Thanx a lot aryaan.............

Ek dard ki leher phir iss dil mein machalti hai,
Dil mein base har jajjbat ki ummeed pighalti hai,
Koi asha nahi,na aas koi tumse milne ki,
Ab toh bachi hui saansein bhi hathon se fisalti hai...


wah wah  thy...................very  touching  words..............  

khaamosh  seene  mein  bekaraar  lahren  hain
inki  khamosiyon mein  kuch  sawaal  aur  gahre  hain
meri  saason  ki  dor  toot  bhi jaaye  uske intizaar mein to kya
hum  to  ek  muddat  uski  chaah  mein  tadapte  hain...............
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pyarikudi1983
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«Reply #43 on: July 03, 2005, 09:41:37 AM »
Quote from: "thycreator"
Thanx a lot pyarikudi ji............aapne kuch likha hi nahi?Huh?................aisa kyu?Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh?


Mujhe Zada kuch likhna nahi aata sad5 bas i love reading stuffs like dis.....I hope mein bhi kabhi aap jese shayaro jesi shayeri karne lagun.....par khuda kare us Waqt Tak mein Zindagi aur Pyaar ke naam se nafrat na karne lagun.......................... :wink:
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nikki
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«Reply #44 on: July 03, 2005, 10:13:37 AM »
too gud Thy n wao Waheed bahut hi acha likha hai aapne............

dil mein aaj koi halchal si maine payi hai
na jaane yeh dard mohabbat ka hai
ya unki di hui ruswai hai

chahti hun bhool jaon unhein
magar kya karun, is dil ka jo shaudayi hai

waqt aa gaya hai jaane ka
magar unhone abhi bhi mujhe yaad nahi kiya

shikwa karun to kaise karun
unhone to pyar kabhi bhi mujhe nahi kiya

yeh to main hun aur mera dil hai
jo raat din dhadakta hai us katil ke liye
jise pyar hum to karte hain
magar uska pyar kabhi pa na sake
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