who ek shikaayat khaas ho!

by guptaronkini on January 31, 2013, 07:31:10 AM
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Ab tum ek gudgudaata ehsaas nahin,
Tum musalsal chalti saans ho…
Ab tum awaaz ki woh khanak nahin,
Uski kashish uski pyaas ho…
Ab tumsa hone ki koshish nahin,
Jane anjaane tumhi mera andaaz ho…
Ab tumse milna ho gaya hai asaan
Paav tale dharti, sar par aakaash ho…
                                                    Ab zindagi se hazaar gile nahin
                  Tum woh ek shikayat khaas ho…
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2013, 07:47:06 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2013, 07:53:06 AM »

Ab tum ek gudgudaata ehsaas nahin,
Tum musalsal chalti saans ho…
Ab tum awaaz ki woh khanak nahin,
Uski kashish uski pyaas ho…
Ab tumsa hone ki koshish nahin,
Jane anjaane tumhi mera andaaz ho…
Ab tumse milna ho gaya hai asaan
Paav tale dharti, sar par aakaash ho…
                                                    Ab zindagi se hazaar gile nahin
                  Tum woh ek shikayat khaas ho…


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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2013, 09:02:07 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2013, 10:50:18 AM »
bohat khoob,.............
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2013, 11:37:51 AM »
bahut khoob...
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2013, 12:06:19 PM »
wah wah
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2013, 12:25:42 PM »

Ab tum ek gudgudaata ehsaas nahin,
Tum musalsal chalti saans ho…
Ab tum awaaz ki woh khanak nahin,
Uski kashish uski pyaas ho…
Ab tumsa hone ki koshish nahin,
Jane anjaane tumhi mera andaaz ho…
Ab tumse milna ho gaya hai asaan
Paav tale dharti, sar par aakaash ho…
                                                    Ab zindagi se hazaar gile nahin
                  Tum woh ek shikayat khaas ho…


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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2013, 03:57:06 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2013, 08:55:35 PM »
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bhaut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Ronkini ji... bahut sundar.. aapkaa Yoindia me haardik swaagat hai.. aate rahiye, likhte rahiye.....!!!
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