wo ban gaye hai kisi aur ke..........................soudagar

by soudagar on August 22, 2012, 03:29:22 AM
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wo ban gaya hai kisi aur ke dil ki dhadkan
dil ko yeh samjhane mein badi der lagi

kabhi mai ka sahara liya hai kabhi mehfil ka
uski yadon ko bhulane mein badi der lagi

badi shidat se chahta hoon tumhe ae sanam
dil ki baat zuban pr lane mein badi der lagi

muskrate huye karna tha khud se  dur usko
aakhon ke ashko ko chhupane mein badi der lagi

wo khush hai apni dunia mein to kyun udas hai  dil
dil ko uski khushi ka vishwas dilane mein badi der lagi

wada kiya tha usse na rahunga kabhi tanha
khud se tanhai ko dur bhagane mein badi der lagi

uske sang zindgi bitane ke sab arman tut gaye "Soudagar"
dil ke armano ki arthi sazane mein badi der lagi


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«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2012, 03:32:20 AM »
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wo ban gaya hai kisi aur ke dil ki dhadkan
dil ko yeh samjhane mein badi der lagi

kabhi mai ka sahara liya hai kabhi mehfil ka
uski yadon ko bhulane mein badi der lagi

badi shidat se chahta hoon tumhe ae sanam
dil ki baat zuban pr lane mein badi der lagi

muskrate huye karna tha khud se  dur usko
aakhon ke ashko ko chhupane mein badi der lagi

wo khush hai apni dunia mein to kyun udas hai  dil
dil ko uski khushi ka vishwas dilane mein badi der lagi

wada kiya tha usse na rahunga kabhi tanha
khud se tanhai ko dur bhagane mein badi der lagi

uske sang zindgi bitane ke sab arman tut gaye "Soudagar"
dil ke armano ki arthi sazane mein badi der lagi


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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2012, 03:32:26 AM »
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bahut khoob beta  Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2012, 03:35:06 AM »
jara si us tak pahuchane mei.n kya hui der
jindgi mei.n  meri to manoj cha gaya andher
wo ban gaya hai kisi aur ke dil ki dhadkan
dil ko yeh samjhane mein badi der lagi

kabhi mai ka sahara liya hai kabhi mehfil ka
uski yadon ko bhulane mein badi der lagi

badi shidat se chahta hoon tumhe ae sanam
dil ki baat zuban pr lane mein badi der lagi

muskrate huye karna tha khud se  dur usko
aakhon ke ashko ko chhupane mein badi der lagi

wo khush hai apni dunia mein to kyun udas hai  dil
dil ko uski khushi ka vishwas dilane mein badi der lagi

wada kiya tha usse na rahunga kabhi tanha
khud se tanhai ko dur bhagane mein badi der lagi

uske sang zindgi bitane ke sab arman tut gaye "Soudagar"
dil ke armano ki arthi sazane mein badi der lagi


Karan
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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2012, 03:42:09 AM »
bahut khub soudagarji

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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2012, 05:22:40 AM »
bahut khoob saudagar ji, dhero dad
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2012, 08:22:49 AM »
wo ban gaya hai kisi aur ke dil ki dhadkan
dil ko yeh samjhane mein badi der lagi

kabhi mai ka sahara liya hai kabhi mehfil ka
uski yadon ko bhulane mein badi der lagi

badi shidat se chahta hoon tumhe ae sanam
dil ki baat zuban pr lane mein badi der lagi

muskrate huye karna tha khud se  dur usko
aakhon ke ashko ko chhupane mein badi der lagi

wo khush hai apni dunia mein to kyun udas hai  dil
dil ko uski khushi ka vishwas dilane mein badi der lagi

wada kiya tha usse na rahunga kabhi tanha
khud se tanhai ko dur bhagane mein badi der lagi

uske sang zindgi bitane ke sab arman tut gaye "Soudagar"
dil ke armano ki arthi sazane mein badi der lagi


Karan


bahut bahut khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2012, 08:24:56 AM »
wo ban gaya hai kisi aur ke dil ki dhadkan
dil ko yeh samjhane mein badi der lagi

kabhi mai ka sahara liya hai kabhi mehfil ka
uski yadon ko bhulane mein badi der lagi

badi shidat se chahta hoon tumhe ae sanam
dil ki baat zuban pr lane mein badi der lagi

muskrate huye karna tha khud se  dur usko
aakhon ke ashko ko chhupane mein badi der lagi

wo khush hai apni dunia mein to kyun udas hai  dil
dil ko uski khushi ka vishwas dilane mein badi der lagi

wada kiya tha usse na rahunga kabhi tanha
khud se tanhai ko dur bhagane mein badi der lagi

uske sang zindgi bitane ke sab arman tut gaye "Soudagar"
dil ke armano ki arthi sazane mein badi der lagi


Karan


                naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice
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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2012, 10:14:37 AM »
wo ban gaya hai kisi aur ke dil ki dhadkan
dil ko yeh samjhane mein badi der lagi
chal jhoote, tune hi saath choad diya mera to kya karti main bolo. icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
kabhi mai ka sahara liya hai kabhi mehfil ka
uski yadon ko bhulane mein badi der lagi
acha hi hai bhool gaye . per peena chora ke nahin Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!
badi shidat se chahta hoon tumhe ae sanam
dil ki baat zuban pr lane mein badi der lagi
ye to saraa sur tumhaari ghalti hai. ladki kabhi nahin kahti ye baat aur tum to bikul anaadi tahre.kahaa to hota muh se ek baar. manaa hi to kar deti maar nahin daalti. icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
muskrate huye karna tha khud se  dur usko
aakhon ke ashko ko chhupane mein badi der lagi
ab to ye tumhari problem hai. main kya karoo.n Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
wo khush hai apni dunia mein to kyun udas hai  dil
dil ko uski khushi ka vishwas dilane mein badi der lagi
dil kisi ka sunta nahin acha hai tumhaare dil ne sunn li baat tumhari icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
wada kiya tha usse na rahunga kabhi tanha
khud se tanhai ko dur bhagane mein badi der lagi
achi khabar hai. Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
uske sang zindgi bitane ke sab arman tut gaye "Soudagar"
dil ke armano ki arthi sazane mein badi der lagi

maayoos nahin ho zindagi mein aur bhi kayi bahaar aaye gi. dil chota mat karo Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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bahut khoob..........!
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«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2012, 10:50:26 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Soudagar ji... dard me doobi apki daastaan humein bahut pasand aayi...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 22, 2012, 11:14:23 AM »
bohat oomda khayalat....bohat c daad....
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«Reply #11 on: August 22, 2012, 12:59:59 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: August 22, 2012, 04:10:29 PM »
Bahut shandaar likha hai Karan jee
mai thoda late ho gaya.
kuch kahne ko baaki hi nahi choda ..sab ne khoob tareef kee aapki.
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«Reply #13 on: August 22, 2012, 05:35:45 PM »
Shukriya manoj ji
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«Reply #14 on: August 23, 2012, 01:28:20 AM »
bahut khoob wonderful
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