~~"WO BEWAFA NAHI"~~

by k.shael on June 28, 2008, 11:52:40 AM
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KYA KAHO USS SHAQS SE WO MUJHE BEWAFA
LAGTA NAHI,
AISA LAGTA HAI JAISE WAFA NIBHANA USKE
BASS MEIN NAHI,

KYA ILJAAM LAGAO USPAR MUJHE CHOD JAANE
KA,
AISA LAGTA HAI JAISE MERE SAATH CHAL PAANA
USKI KISMAT MEIN NAHI,

KYA GUJARISH KARO USSE PYAR KI AISA LAGTA
HAI,
JAISE USKE PASS GAM KE SIWA KUCH BHI NAHI,

HASTA HAI WO BASS JAISE DUNIYA KO DIKHANE
KE LIYE,
PAR SACHHAI YE HAI USKE PAAS AANSOO KE SIWA
KUCH NAHI,

KABHI-KABHI BAANT LETA THA KHUD KO MUJHSE
JABSE CHOD GAYA HAI MUJHKO,
AAB USKE GAMO KA RAAJDAR KOI BHI NAHI,

SABKO KHUSH RAKHNE KI KOSHISH KARTA HAI
HAR PAL,
PAR KHUD KI KHUSHIYO SE JAISE KOI WASTA
NAHI,

JANTA HAI WO HAR KISI KE DIL KI BAAT
PAR KABHI KHUD KE DIL KI BAAT KISI SE
KEHTA NAHI,

DIKHATA HAI JAISE WO MUJHE CHOD KAR KHUSH
HAI BAHUT,
PAR PATA HAI MUJHE MUJHSE CHOOT JAANE KA DARD
AAJ BHI DABA HAI USKE DIL MEIN KAHI,

WO CHAHE KUCH NA KAHE,HAR BAAT USKE DIL KI
MUJHE CHHUPI TO NAHI,
KARLE DIKHAWA WO KHUSH HONE KA PAR MALOOM HAI
MERE DIL KO WO MERE BINA KHUSH NAHI,

AEY KHUDA USE DENA HAR KHUSHI ISS JAHA KI WO
BADLA HAI KISI WAJAH SE,
MALOOM HAI MUJHE WO BEWAFA NAHI....

WO BEWAFA NAHI.....

BY. K.SHAEL
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2008, 12:01:28 PM »
Bohot Khoob K.Shael !!
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2008, 01:57:14 PM »
kya baat hai yaar bahut dard hai aapki shayri me kasam se dost dil me ek kasak si paida ho jati hai........... Applause
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Taasir siddiqui
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«Reply #3 on: June 29, 2008, 08:03:28 AM »
hi you have good thoughts but you are little poor in putting them in words and so you shayari is spoiled by you. like you write iljaam istead of ilzaam similarly you have used gujaarish istead of guzaarish.I am ghazal writer i can understand you have great potential to write good poetry but your pronunciation makes your poetry dull,otherwise your thoughts are excellent. I am sure you wont be hurt by my advice.
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«Reply #4 on: June 29, 2008, 10:05:18 AM »
kabhi mujh ko sath lekar, kabhi mere sath chal kar
vo badal gaye achanak meri zindagi badal kar

huye jis pe meharaban tum koi khushnasib hoga
meri hasraten to nikalin mere ansuon main dhal k

teri zulf-o-ruKh k qurban dil-e-zar dhundta hai
vahi champai ujale vahi surmai dhundalake

koi phul ban gaya hai koi chand koi tara
jo chirag bujh gaye hain teri anjuman main jal k


mere dosto Khudara mere sath tum bhi dhundo
vo yahin kahin chupe hain mere gam ka rukh badal k

teri bejhijhak hansi se na kisi ka dil ho maila
ye nagar hai ainon ka yahan sans le sambhal k
 
__________________________-Ehsaan Daanish-
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«Reply #5 on: June 29, 2008, 10:09:39 AM »
Nice One Shael Ji,.
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«Reply #6 on: June 30, 2008, 07:08:56 AM »
Shally Aapa

Aapka Dil Bahot Chanchul Hai,
Jaise Ek Phool hai,
Jaise Hi Hawao Ka Rukh Badalta Hai,
Khusbu Bhi Badal Jaati Hai,
Jis Mod Pe Rukti Hai,
Wahi Dil Ko Sukun Deti hai,
Kabhi Wo Ba-wafaa Nahi,
Kabhi Wo Be-wafaa Nahi,

Khuda Jaane Ye Kaisi Muhabbat hai..?

Jo Zakm Deti Bhi Nahi,
Jo Marham Bhi Nahi,
Kabi Hasti Bhi Nahi
Kabhi Rulati Bhi Nahi,
Kabhi Labo'n Pe Dua,
Kabhi Rab Se Shikayat,
Karam Bhi Uska,
Sitam Bhi Uska,
Uske Saaye Se Bhi Nafrat,
Magar Taswwur Me Wo Har Pal,
Dil Me Sadaa Ye Hasrat,
Mil Jaye Unse ek Pal Muhabbat,
Nahi Uski Aaas,
Rehata Hai Wo Paas,
Dil Me Jagah He Khaas,
Har Pal Karta Hai Wo Udaas,

Khuda jaane Kaisi Muhabbat Hai..?
 
                             -- Raza

 
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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2008, 07:24:37 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on June 29, 2008, 10:05:18 AM
kabhi mujh ko sath lekar, kabhi mere sath chal kar
vo badal gaye achanak meri zindagi badal kar

huye jis pe meharaban tum koi khushnasib hoga
meri hasraten to nikalin mere ansuon main dhal k

teri zulf-o-ruKh k qurban dil-e-zar dhundta hai
vahi champai ujale vahi surmai dhundalake

koi phul ban gaya hai koi chand koi tara
jo chirag bujh gaye hain teri anjuman main jal k


mere dosto Khudara mere sath tum bhi dhundo
vo yahin kahin chupe hain mere gam ka rukh badal k

teri bejhijhak hansi se na kisi ka dil ho maila
ye nagar hai ainon ka yahan sans le sambhal k
 
__________________________-Ehsaan Daanish-


Bhai Azeem Bahot Hi Achchha Kalaam Pesh Kiya Hai,
Matle Se Makte Tak,
Nice Too,
Ehsaan Danish Saab Liye Bhi
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«Reply #8 on: June 30, 2008, 11:55:09 AM »
THANK YOU SO MUCH,
CELMIRA JI,
SAGAR JI,
TAASIR JI,
JAANASHEEN JI,
MUHAMMED JI,
THANX FRIENDS FOR APPRICIATE MY WORK,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #9 on: June 30, 2008, 01:10:52 PM »
Shukriya Shael ji Amd Raza bhai,.
And Nice One Raza Bhai jaan,.
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«Reply #10 on: June 30, 2008, 01:21:11 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on June 29, 2008, 10:05:18 AM
kabhi mujh ko sath lekar, kabhi mere sath chal kar
vo badal gaye achanak meri zindagi badal kar

huye jis pe meharaban tum koi khushnasib hoga
meri hasraten to nikalin mere ansuon main dhal k

teri zulf-o-ruKh k qurban dil-e-zar dhundta hai
vahi champai ujale vahi surmai dhundalake

koi phul ban gaya hai koi chand koi tara
jo chirag bujh gaye hain teri anjuman main jal k


mere dosto Khudara mere sath tum bhi dhundo
vo yahin kahin chupe hain mere gam ka rukh badal k

teri bejhijhak hansi se na kisi ka dil ho maila
ye nagar hai ainon ka yahan sans le sambhal k
 
__________________________-Ehsaan Daanish-

Mujhe bahut accha laga padkar... Applause Good sharing Jaanasheen jee.
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«Reply #11 on: June 30, 2008, 01:23:04 PM »
Quote from: Muhammed on June 30, 2008, 07:08:56 AM
Shally Aapa

Aapka Dil Bahot Chanchul Hai,
Jaise Ek Phool hai,
Jaise Hi Hawao Ka Rukh Badalta Hai,
Khusbu Bhi Badal Jaati Hai,
Jis Mod Pe Rukti Hai,
Wahi Dil Ko Sukun Deti hai,
Kabhi Wo Ba-wafaa Nahi,
Kabhi Wo Be-wafaa Nahi,

Khuda Jaane Ye Kaisi Muhabbat hai..?

Jo Zakm Deti Bhi Nahi,
Jo Marham Bhi Nahi,
Kabi Hasti Bhi Nahi
Kabhi Rulati Bhi Nahi,
Kabhi Labo'n Pe Dua,
Kabhi Rab Se Shikayat,
Karam Bhi Uska,
Sitam Bhi Uska,
Uske Saaye Se Bhi Nafrat,
Magar Taswwur Me Wo Har Pal,
Dil Me Sadaa Ye Hasrat,
Mil Jaye Unse ek Pal Muhabbat,
Nahi Uski Aaas,
Rehata Hai Wo Paas,
Dil Me Jagah He Khaas,
Har Pal Karta Hai Wo Udaas,

Khuda jaane Kaisi Muhabbat Hai..?
 
                             -- Raza

Superb .... bahut khoob  Raza jee  Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 30, 2008, 01:27:29 PM »
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WO CHAHE KUCH NA KAHE,HAR BAAT USKE DIL KI
MUJHE CHHUPI TO NAHI,
KARLE DIKHAWA WO KHUSH HONE KA PAR MALOOM HAI
MERE DIL KO WO MERE BINA KHUSH NAHI,

AEY KHUDA USE DENA HAR KHUSHI ISS JAHA KI WO
BADLA HAI KISI WAJAH SE,
MALOOM HAI MUJHE WO BEWAFA NAHI....

WO BEWAFA NAHI.....

Bahut accha likha hai aapne Shael siso  Applause
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«Reply #13 on: June 30, 2008, 08:59:50 PM »
wah kaya baat hai shally.. bahoot khoob: yah lines sabse kamal ki lagi apki kavita main:
KYA KAHO USS SHAQS SE WO MUJHE BEWAFA
LAGTA NAHI,
AISA LAGTA HAI JAISE WAFA NIBHANA USKE
BASS MEIN NAHI,
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«Reply #14 on: June 30, 2008, 09:00:40 PM »
Quote from: Muhammed on June 30, 2008, 07:08:56 AM
Shally Aapa

Aapka Dil Bahot Chanchul Hai,
Jaise Ek Phool hai,
Jaise Hi Hawao Ka Rukh Badalta Hai,
Khusbu Bhi Badal Jaati Hai,
Jis Mod Pe Rukti Hai,
Wahi Dil Ko Sukun Deti hai,
Kabhi Wo Ba-wafaa Nahi,
Kabhi Wo Be-wafaa Nahi,

Khuda Jaane Ye Kaisi Muhabbat hai..?

Jo Zakm Deti Bhi Nahi,
Jo Marham Bhi Nahi,
Kabi Hasti Bhi Nahi
Kabhi Rulati Bhi Nahi,
Kabhi Labo'n Pe Dua,
Kabhi Rab Se Shikayat,
Karam Bhi Uska,
Sitam Bhi Uska,
Uske Saaye Se Bhi Nafrat,
Magar Taswwur Me Wo Har Pal,
Dil Me Sadaa Ye Hasrat,
Mil Jaye Unse ek Pal Muhabbat,
Nahi Uski Aaas,
Rehata Hai Wo Paas,
Dil Me Jagah He Khaas,
Har Pal Karta Hai Wo Udaas,

Khuda jaane Kaisi Muhabbat Hai..?
 
                             -- Raza


Bahoot khoob Raza!!
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