Wo chala!!!.................(sahal)

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                               Wo chala!!!.........(Sahal)
Wo chala , wo chala,
Dil mera le chala,
Dil ki veeraniyon mein hai khamoshi ab to ,
Dhadkanein meri wo chura le chala.

Na  manzil-e-maqsood ki hai aas,
Na hi saahil -e-matloob ki hai pyaas,
Safar to youn guzra apni zindagi ka,
Jaise koi chhodke musafir,karvan le chala.

Dil mein jo tasvir basi thi,
Ek arsay se maine nahi dekhi thi,
Deedar-e-yaar karna tha magar,
Aainay se mere wo chehra oda le chala.

Maikadey se ab talluq qayam raha,
Madhoshi ka aisa aalam raha,
Jaam-e-bekhudi  mein “Sahal” duba raha,
Saaqi nashay mein is qadar  bahaa le chala.
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«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2012, 08:19:44 AM »
Sahal khoob likha hai. Dili daad.
Sheel didi
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«Reply #2 on: October 06, 2012, 08:23:06 AM »
than Q sushil ji ....
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«Reply #3 on: October 06, 2012, 08:25:17 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2012, 08:28:01 AM »
shukriya anmol ji
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2012, 08:35:24 AM »
Sahal Jee Aadaab!


bahut khoob janab.. bade pyaare khayaal kahe haiN..
Aur behad khoob andaaz e bayaaN raha..

Humari daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2012, 08:48:10 AM »
Quote from: sahal on October 06, 2012, 08:00:44 AM

                               Wo chala!!!.........(Sahal)
Wo chala , wo chala,
Dil mera le chala,
Dil ki veeraniyon mein hai khamoshi ab to ,
Dhadkanein meri wo chura le chala.

Na  manzil-e-maqsood ki hai aas,
Na hi saahil -e-matloob ki hai pyaas,
Safar to youn guzra apni zindagi ka,
Jaise koi chhodke musafir,karvan le chala.

Dil mein jo tasvir basi thi,
Ek arsay se maine nahi dekhi thi,
Deedar-e-yaar karna tha magar,
Aainay se mere wo chehra oda le chala.

Maikadey se ab talluq qayam raha,
Madhoshi ka aisa aalam raha,
Jaam-e-bekhudi  mein “Sahal” duba raha,
Saaqi nashay mein is qadar  bahaa le chala.



bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2012, 09:15:05 AM »
bahut sunder
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«Reply #8 on: October 06, 2012, 09:19:28 AM »
shukriya aap sab ka
                parwaaz ji ,adil bechain ji and dr sahab...
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«Reply #9 on: October 06, 2012, 10:20:50 AM »
very good
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«Reply #10 on: October 06, 2012, 10:25:45 AM »
thanx
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«Reply #11 on: October 06, 2012, 04:54:58 PM »
Jabardast bayaanee.
 wah wah wah wah
Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: October 07, 2012, 09:40:57 AM »
shukriya mkv ji ...
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«Reply #13 on: October 07, 2012, 01:17:56 PM »
bahtu khoooob...
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