wo dikhti hai meri aankhon main... manjum

by manjum on February 15, 2011, 05:11:57 AM
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dosto... ye ghazal maine apne ek dost ke dard ko mehsus karte hue likhi hai ummid hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi....

Wo gair ki thi mujhe chahti na thi.
Islie to dil ki baat maine usse kahi na thi.

Main har gham main uske sath raha,
Main chahta hun use wo ye janti na thi.

Sab ye kahte hain wo dikhti hai meri aankhon main,
Par meri aankhon main wo khbhi jhankti na thi.

Wo meri jan haidhadkan main merirahti hai,
Aur wo dost se jyada kuch mujhe manti na thi.

Mujh ko mera na sahi usko uska pyar mile,
Ye chahta hun magar mann ko mere shanti na thi.


manjum "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2011, 05:39:48 AM »
ufffff Manju--
kaise mai sukriya kahun tumhe--
kya kamaal likha hai--
shabdon me poori kahani bayan kar di.
mindblowing.
aur haan ek ek alfaaz sachh hai.
than q so much for dis post.
meri baato ko iss prakaar nagme ka roop dena kamaal hai.
daad kya dun mai bhala--
bas be happy nd god bless u dear.
ek baar fir sukriya.
bilkul wesi hi hai ye post jesa me chahta tha Usual Smile
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thanx
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«Reply #2 on: February 15, 2011, 05:56:57 AM »
good one manjum ji....
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«Reply #3 on: February 15, 2011, 07:00:04 AM »
very nice manjum ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 15, 2011, 10:31:17 AM »
shukriya niralaji... aapki prerna se ye likha hai.... islie daad ke haqdar bhi aap hi hain....  shukriya... bahut bahut ji...
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«Reply #5 on: February 15, 2011, 10:33:30 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya manzil-e-ishqji... shukriya.. aap ko pasand aai meri rachna...
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«Reply #6 on: February 15, 2011, 10:34:39 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya saahilji...

aapne pasand kiya...
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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2011, 10:48:59 AM »
hahaha bahut badhiya jawaab--
lekin likhnewale haat aur alfaaz aapke hain.
so daad bhi aapko hi milegi
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2011, 10:54:16 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya yun hi likhwate rahiye ham likhte rahainge..
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«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2011, 11:03:12 AM »
haanji--bilkul likhwate rahenge.
jo kaam hame aata nhi hum wo dusro se karwane me mahir hain Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: February 15, 2011, 12:26:50 PM »
Quote from: manjum on February 15, 2011, 05:11:57 AM
dosto... ye ghazal maine apne ek dost ke dard ko mehsus karte hue likhi hai ummid hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi....

Wo gair ki thi mujhe chahti na thi.
Islie to dil ki baat maine usse kahi na thi.

Main har gham main uske sath raha,
Main chahta hun use wo ye janti na thi.

Sab ye kahte hain wo dikhti hai meri aankhon main,
Par meri aankhon main wo khbhi jhankti na thi.

Wo meri jan haidhadkan main merirahti hai,
Aur wo dost se jyada kuch mujhe manti na thi.

Mujh ko mera na sahi usko uska pyar mile,
Ye chahta hun magar mann ko mere shanti na thi.


manjum "mann"

bahut achcha manjum ji
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«Reply #11 on: February 16, 2011, 04:10:11 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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manjum
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«Reply #12 on: February 16, 2011, 09:56:01 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya shebaji....

yun hi daad dete haiye....
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manjum
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«Reply #13 on: February 16, 2011, 09:57:15 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya RSRji... padhte rahie daad dete rahie
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«Reply #14 on: February 17, 2011, 08:40:51 AM »
BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA SHIHABJI... YUN HI DAAD DETE RAHIE...
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