wo din, wo pal, wo baty, wo yaanden

by Pooja on November 04, 2004, 05:43:31 PM

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Pooja

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wo din, wo pal, wo baty, wo yaanden
bas yahi hai ab sath mai.....
Jeevan ki dhara hai.....jisne bahty hi jana hai
iske siwaye nahi hai kisi ke bhi kuch hath mai.......


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sharmaarunkumar

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wo din, wo pal, wo baty, wo yaanden

«Reply #1 on: November 04, 2004, 08:55:53 PM »

Waah! Bahut Khoob!! Lovely lines!! Pooja ji!


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akela

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wo din, wo pal, wo baty, wo yaanden

«Reply #2 on: November 04, 2004, 09:11:27 PM »

wah!!!!!!
ye jivan ki dhara kahi modna tho khuda ka kaam hai,
shayar hai hum sab,hume likhte jaana hai.


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Pooja

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wo din, wo pal, wo baty, wo yaanden

«Reply #3 on: November 04, 2004, 09:36:42 PM »

Shukariyan!!! Mehrbani AKS JI AND Akela ji!!!!

Jeewan hai chalane ka naam
chalna hai zindagi ka kaam
raho mai mille hai jo jakham
ab safar tay karna hai, inke sung!!!!


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akela

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wo din, wo pal, wo baty, wo yaanden

«Reply #4 on: November 04, 2004, 09:45:50 PM »

nice .......
jindil ban gaye hai hum ab yaaro,
ki dard mai khushi ke geet sunate hai,
koi jakhm kya dard dega hume,
jab hum namak ko marhum banate hai.


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Pooja

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wo din, wo pal, wo baty, wo yaanden

«Reply #5 on: November 04, 2004, 10:34:04 PM »

nice one!!


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akela

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wo din, wo pal, wo baty, wo yaanden

«Reply #6 on: November 04, 2004, 11:57:58 PM »

shukariya aapka


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Dewana_Badal

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wo din, wo pal, wo baty, wo yaanden

«Reply #7 on: November 05, 2004, 12:42:34 AM »

nice u all!!!

Mohabbat Karne Waale, Na Jeete Hain Na Marte Hain
Phoolon Ki Chaah Mein, Kaanton Par Se Guzarte Hain

Yoon To Hamesha Hothon Par Hansi Rehti Hai Hamare
Par Shaayari Mein Na Jaane Kyon, Dil Ke Dard Ubharte Hain.


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sharmaarunkumar

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wo din, wo pal, wo baty, wo yaanden

«Reply #8 on: November 05, 2004, 03:34:57 AM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

Shukariyan!!! Mehrbani AKS JI AND Akela ji!!!!

Jeewan hai chalane ka naam
chalna hai zindagi ka kaam
raho mai mille hai jo jakham
ab safar tay karna hai, inke sung!!!!

Wah! Very nicely written!Pooja ji!

Mil to Jate kai Humsafar,HumRaaz, Humdard yahan,
Magar Gham-e-zindagi ko shayad yeh manzoor na Thaa!
Nikli thee Zindagi khud apni hi manzil ki Talaash mein,
Talaash-e-yaar ka silsila shayad use manzoor na Thaa!
Awwal hai Naam apna ab Nakaam ashiqon ki Phehrist mein,
Pahle Kabhi yeh deewanaa is qadar mashoor na thaa!


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Pooja

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wo din, wo pal, wo baty, wo yaanden

«Reply #9 on: November 05, 2004, 10:22:34 PM »

wah bahoot khoob Dewana_badal ji...

Yoon To Hamesha Hothon Par Hansi Rehti Hai Hamare
Par Shaayari Mein Na Jaane Kyon, Dil Ke Dard Ubharte Hain.

Bahoot sahi likha hai apne!!!!!!


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Pooja

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wo din, wo pal, wo baty, wo yaanden

«Reply #10 on: November 05, 2004, 10:25:33 PM »

Wah!!! Bahoot Khoob AKS JI!!!! Bahoot acha likhaty hai app!!!


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sharmaarunkumar

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wo din, wo pal, wo baty, wo yaanden

«Reply #11 on: November 06, 2004, 04:14:41 AM »

zarranawazee aur Hausla afjaai ke liye Shukriya!! Pooja ji!


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akela

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wo din, wo pal, wo baty, wo yaanden

«Reply #12 on: November 06, 2004, 08:31:35 PM »

nice AKS ji.......bahoot hi khob likha hai.


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sharmaarunkumar

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wo din, wo pal, wo baty, wo yaanden

«Reply #13 on: November 06, 2004, 08:59:26 PM »

Shukriya Akela ji!


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waheed_rose2004

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wo din, wo pal, wo baty, wo yaanden

«Reply #14 on: November 07, 2004, 03:50:21 PM »

Good Work All..............

Badi Bedard Hai Duniya !
Har Dard Chupana Padta Hai!
Dil Mein Hazaaron Zakhm Hain!
Phir Bhi Muskurana Padta Hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!