Wo mere haal par muskraya......... Soudagar

by soudagar on July 23, 2012, 01:55:02 PM
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wo mere haal par muskraya der takk
phir ruswa karke mujhe pachhtaya der tak

bata rahein hain uski khamoshi ke nishan
usne aawaz dekar mujhe bulaya der tak

wo chala gya jane wale kabhi louta nahi karte
na loutega wo logo ne use samjhaya der tak

paraya bhi kehti thi aur milti bhi thi mujhse
kaha maine milne se rahta nahi  koi paraya der tak

apne gurrur mein usne kitni bar toda mere dil ko
wo meri sach hi  chahat ko nahi samjh paya der tak

khokr mujhe ab wo deewaro se sar patkata hai
aaj phir meri yadon ne use bahut rulaya der tak
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«Reply #1 on: July 23, 2012, 01:59:03 PM »
bahut khoob bahut sunder dheron shubhkaamnaayen

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«Reply #2 on: July 23, 2012, 02:09:23 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: July 23, 2012, 02:35:48 PM »
bahut acha likha hai...wah..
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«Reply #4 on: July 23, 2012, 02:42:57 PM »
Saudagar jee
sundar ghazal.
badi sundarta se piroyee gayee maala..har koi pahanna chahega..matlab padhna.
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«Reply #5 on: July 23, 2012, 05:35:58 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya saini sir
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«Reply #6 on: July 23, 2012, 05:52:15 PM »
shukriya kash ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 23, 2012, 09:07:43 PM »
wo mere haal par muskraya der takk
phir ruswa karke mujhe pachhtaya der tak

bata rahein hain uski khamoshi ke nishan
usne aawaz dekar mujhe bulaya der tak

wo chala gya jane wale kabhi louta nahi karte
na loutega wo logo ne use samjhaya der tak

paraya bhi kehti thi aur milti bhi thi mujhse
kaha maine milne se rahta koi paraya der tak

apne gurrur mein usne kitni bar toda mere dil ko
wo meri sach hi  chahat ko nahi samjh paya der tak

khokr mujhe ab wo deewaro se sar patkata hai
aaj phir meri yadon ne use bahut rulaya der tak


Bohat Achcha Kalaam Hai,.

Wo Chalaa Bhi Gaya Mujhe Chordke Tanha,.
Uski Majboori Main Samajh Na Paaya Dair Tak,.
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«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2012, 09:12:53 PM »
wo mere haal par muskraya der takk
phir ruswa karke mujhe pachhtaya der tak

bata rahein hain uski khamoshi ke nishan
usne aawaz dekar mujhe bulaya der tak

wo chala gya jane wale kabhi louta nahi karte
na loutega wo logo ne use samjhaya der tak

paraya bhi kehti thi aur milti bhi thi mujhse
kaha maine milne se rahta koi paraya der tak

apne gurrur mein usne kitni bar toda mere dil ko
wo meri sach hi  chahat ko nahi samjh paya der tak

khokr mujhe ab wo deewaro se sar patkata hai
aaj phir meri yadon ne use bahut rulaya der tak


naaice
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«Reply #9 on: July 24, 2012, 01:19:59 AM »
Bohut Khoob Saudagar jee, achchi ghazal hai, dherron Daad qubool kijiye ,


Ghazal padhte Padhte achanak Dr Nawaz Devbandi Ki ghazal yaad aa gai yahi radeef istemal ki hai unhone bhi,

Wo rulakar haNs Na paya der tak

jab maiN ro kar muskuraya der tak

bhooke BachchoN Ki tasalli Ke liye

Maa ne phir Bartan pakaya der tak

Gungunata jaa raha tha ek faqeer ,

dhoop rehti hai na saya der tak
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«Reply #10 on: July 24, 2012, 03:00:26 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya gayatri ji
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«Reply #11 on: July 24, 2012, 01:05:18 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Soudagar ji....!!!
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«Reply #12 on: July 24, 2012, 05:26:01 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya mkv ji
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«Reply #13 on: July 25, 2012, 02:56:43 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya azeem ji......
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«Reply #14 on: July 29, 2012, 03:02:42 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khamosh aawaj ji.....
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