Wo mujhko gungunata hai....@

by aahnaa on February 15, 2013, 07:56:52 PM
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bhale hi samne dunia ke muskurata hai
maiN janti hun tujhe mera ghum satata hai

tu baat baat pe har baar aazmata hai
maiN kaise man lun rasme wafa nibhata hai

hamare ishq ka manzar haseen manzar tha
maiN tujse kaise kahuN ab bhi yaad aata hai

hamare khwab bhi aate nahiN haiN ab tujhko
bhala kisi ko koi is qadar bhulata hai

hazar baar ye socha hai ishq me doobuN
magar ye dil mera ghum ki ghazal hi gata hai

karu N to kaise karuN aitbaar ab uska
koi to kaam hai jo aake phir manata hai

maiN uske lab pe huN khushbu ki tarha 'aah'
ghazal ke sher meN wo mujhko gungunata hai…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2013, 10:29:37 PM »
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Nice
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2013, 01:45:44 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2013, 02:40:03 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2013, 04:49:43 AM »
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Bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2013, 08:38:01 AM »
 Applause
 beautiful !
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2013, 02:08:30 PM »
Aahnaa Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne aapke in khoob aur gehre khayaaloN ke behad
khoobsurat aur umdaa ashaaroN bhari kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile


Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe jee.. Is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam
par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahye... aate rahye...
Shaad O aabaad rahye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile


bhale hi samne dunia ke muskurata hai
maiN janti hun tujhe mera ghum satata hai

Achcha Matla kaha hai jee, par kuch tarmeem nazar aa rahi hai
so aik surat de dete haiN...


Bhale hi saamne duniaa ke muskuraata hai
magar MaiN jaanu tujko kis ka gham sataata hai


tu baat baat pe har baar aazmata hai
maiN kaise maan lun rasme wafa nibhata hai

achcha hai jee

hamare ishq ka manzar haseen manzar tha
maiN tujse kaise kahuN ab bhi yaad aata hai

WaaH jee achcha sher hai ...

hamare khwab bhi aate nahiN haiN ab tujhko
bhala kisi ko koi is qadar bhulata hai

Kia baat hai jee kia baat hai bada achcha sher hai daad..

hazar baar ye socha hai ishq me doobuN
magar ye dil mera ghum ki ghazal hi gata hai

Sher behad khoob hai jee daad... par aapko ishqiyaaN gazal
yaa geet gaane ke liye kisi tomantic shayar se sikhna paedNga naa..  icon_geek


karu N to kaise karuN aitbaar ab uska
koi to kaam hai jo aake phir manata hai

WaaH waaH waaH kia baat hai jee, Badi samjhdaar haiN aap toH..  icon_geek

"AaH " maiN uske lab pe huN aik dard O gham ki
ghazal ke sher meN wo mujhko gungunata hai…!!!

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Achcha Maqta hua hai Aahnaa jee, par rabte meiN behad kami hai... .



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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2013, 04:43:20 PM »
Kya baat hai.
bahut khoob likha hai..
behatreen ashaar..
aur maqta..laajavaab ehsaas bayaan kiya hai aapne.

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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2013, 04:49:34 PM »
Just superb...... Bht bht bht hi umda kalaam....... Lakhon daad aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2013, 03:47:05 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: February 17, 2013, 08:22:45 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Aahnaa ji....!!!
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«Reply #12 on: February 18, 2013, 04:51:23 AM »
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