Wo Nazar Aaj Bhi Dhondti hogi ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on April 30, 2010, 06:13:53 AM
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Wo nazar aaj bhi mujhe dhondti hogi !!
wo hont aaj bhi khuch kahene ko betab honge !!
Wo raaste aaj bhi mera intezaar karte honge !!
Wo galiyan wo nukkad mujhe yaad karte honge !!

mai badnaseeb unhe chud aya !!
maazi se har rishta tood aya !!
ye kab howa , kyun howa , kaise howa !!
meri hasraton ka qoon kaise howa !!

kaun hai iska gunhagaar , mai hon ya waqath , ya meri gurbath !!

aksar khud se yahi sawal kiya karta hon !!
jawab ka muntazir hon to jiya karta hon !!

magar afsos ke ab tak koi jawab nahi mila !!
in ankhon ko fir wo haseen qaub nahi mila !!

ab kissi se shikwa - shikayat kya karen !!
haqeeqth yahi hai to haqeeqth se gila kya karen !!

chalo jo howa acha howa !!
maazi ki qurbani sahi mustaqbil to acha howa !!

ab wo saari yaden wo manzar dil ke pitare me qaid hain !!

mai hon meri tanha-e- hai .. aur mustaqbil o maazi ke khuch dhundle dhundle se qaub bikhre pade hain .. shayad inhe simet ne me hi zindagi shaam ho jaye .. aur in bechain ankhon ko kabhi na jaagne wali neendh me mubtila kar den !!



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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2010, 06:59:04 AM »
Wah wah Qadeer ji.kamaal ke likha aapne.heart touching poem.excellent. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause :icon_thumleft:keep up the good work
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2010, 11:28:41 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khooob Qadeer bhai..

Bahut Gehre Jazbaat!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2010, 11:37:26 AM »
wah wah Qadir ji. bahut khoob likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2010, 12:29:21 PM »
bahut khoob likha hai aapne Qadeer ji... bahut hi khoobsurti se apne ehsaason ko shabton ki maala me piroya hai... bahut khoob likha hai.. yunhi likhte rahiye taaki hum aapke lekh ka aanand le saken ... bahut khoob Qadeer ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2010, 04:08:52 PM »
  Bahut khoobsurat qadeer sb. kya kahein lafz nahin hain hamare paas,aap to bas bemisaal hue ja rahe hai. 10-20 quntal daad hai aapko or aise hi lajawaab likhte rahe to aap to hamara daad ka godaam hi khali kara denge. Giggle
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2010, 04:15:21 PM »
buhat khoob...
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2010, 07:10:57 PM »
Quote from: tamanna.pt on April 30, 2010, 04:08:52 PM
  Bahut khoobsurat qadeer sb. kya kahein lafz nahin hain hamare paas,aap to bas bemisaal hue ja rahe hai. 10-20 quntal daad hai aapko or aise hi lajawaab likhte rahe to aap to hamara daad ka godaam hi khali kara denge. Giggle


bahoth bahoth shukriya .. quntano ki dad ke liye quntano bhar shukriya apka ,, aur ye gudaam kabhi qaali nahi hoga fikar na karen .. allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2010, 09:23:04 PM »
Wah! Wah!  Qadeer Ji.Kamaal ke likha aapne.
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«Reply #9 on: April 30, 2010, 11:06:58 PM »
bahoot khoob janab,wah

ab kissi se shikwa - shikayat kya karen !!
haqeeqth yahi hai to haqeeqth se gila kya karen !!
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«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2010, 02:37:33 PM »
wah! wah! bohat khoob likha hai aapne qadeer ji......
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«Reply #11 on: May 06, 2010, 02:42:30 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on April 30, 2010, 11:28:41 AM
Bahut Bahut Khooob Qadeer bhai..

Bahut Gehre Jazbaat!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bhai inayath ke liye shukriya .. allah apko khush rakhe..


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«Reply #12 on: May 06, 2010, 02:47:27 PM »
Quote from: nazar ghouri on April 30, 2010, 11:06:58 PM
bahoot khoob janab,wah

ab kissi se shikwa - shikayat kya karen !!
haqeeqth yahi hai to haqeeqth se gila kya karen !!




bhai nazar sahab apki dad mere liye tabaruk se kamm nahi .. hausla afzai aur is mahubbath ke liye behad mashkoor o mamno hon .. inayath banaye rakhen .. khush rahen hamesha ..


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«Reply #13 on: May 06, 2010, 02:48:38 PM »
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 30, 2010, 11:37:26 AM
wah wah Qadir ji. bahut khoob likha hai aapne.
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bahoth bahoth shukriya suresh sahab ...khush rahen hamesha ..


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«Reply #14 on: May 06, 2010, 02:50:00 PM »
Quote from: klaskar on April 30, 2010, 12:29:21 PM
bahut khoob likha hai aapne Qadeer ji... bahut hi khoobsurti se apne ehsaason ko shabton ki maala me piroya hai... bahut khoob likha hai.. yunhi likhte rahiye taaki hum aapke lekh ka aanand le saken ... bahut khoob Qadeer ji... bahut khoob...!!!

bhai kapil sahab ,, apki nazron ka kamal hai baaqi to khush nahi .. sub apki mahubbath hai jo is tarhan se nawazte ho .. allah apko khush rakhe..


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