Wo Raat

by Manish_Friend on April 12, 2005, 03:08:50 AM
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Meena
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«Reply #15 on: April 29, 2005, 02:56:23 PM »
hogaya ek arza teri bewafai ko mane hue,
par zindagi me tere hone ka ehesas aaj bhi hai
sukha diya un ashkon ko jo chale ate te teri yaad ke saath,
par ankhon me samundar aaj bhi hai!!!
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HumTum
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«Reply #16 on: April 29, 2005, 02:58:31 PM »
apni to anhein shukh chuki hai kab se "HumTum"
kyunna ker roye hai shab-o-roz hijr mein
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Meena
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«Reply #17 on: April 29, 2005, 02:59:24 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
apni to anhein shukh chuki hai kab se "HumTum"
kyunna ker roye hai shab-o-roz hijr mein


didnt get it  sad5
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HumTum
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«Reply #18 on: April 29, 2005, 03:01:22 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "HumTum"
apni to anhein shukh chuki hai kab se "HumTum"
kyunna ker roye hai shab-o-roz hijr mein


didnt get it  sad5


:thumb:
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Manish_Friend
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«Reply #19 on: April 30, 2005, 03:52:44 AM »
thelostworld...
"Kabhi unke hum bhi dost the..
Aajakl unhe yaad dilana padta hai.. "

really touching... well written
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Manish_Friend
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«Reply #20 on: April 30, 2005, 03:54:33 AM »
Very well written vikas2210, both good ones:) bahaut khoob.
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Manish_Friend
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«Reply #21 on: April 30, 2005, 03:56:05 AM »
Wah.. SAndhya ji and meena ji.. kya khoob, wonderfully expressed emotions...
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thelostworld
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«Reply #22 on: April 30, 2005, 05:56:59 AM »
Quote from: "vikas2210"
bahut hi khub

askq to aate ab bhi tumhari aanko se
shukar hai mere to ab sukh gaye hai
annkhe pathar ban gai hai
saanse bhi aate nahi
nice vikas,meena and manish.. good jobb
bahut hi accha hai ..
i want moreeeeeeeeeeeeee
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vikas2210
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«Reply #23 on: April 30, 2005, 06:09:18 AM »
pesh hai ek aur ................

raat ka in tezaar that us din
aaj bhi intezaar hai
tum nahi aaye us din bhi
aaj bhi mahaul yahe hai
jale the diye us din
aaj jalta dil hai.
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Meena
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«Reply #24 on: April 30, 2005, 07:42:21 AM »
shukirya....ji shukriya...........................

 :D
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Manish_Friend
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«Reply #25 on: April 30, 2005, 08:51:59 AM »
Humne tumhari rahon mein phool bichaya thae hamesha..
Tum hamare raaston par kaante rakh kar khush hote ho...

Humne tumhare aankhon mein saapne sajaye thae hamesha...
Tum hamari aankhon mein asshk dekar khush hote ho...

Humne tumhari zindagi mein khushi ke sabhi rang bhare hamesha...
Tum hamari zindagi be-rang karke khush hote ho....

Humne tumhare ghar se doli laani chahi hamesha....
Tum hamara janaza dekhar kar khush hote ho...
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vikas2210
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«Reply #26 on: May 02, 2005, 11:40:12 AM »
kanhi kante na chubh jayeen
isilye palken bichayee hai rahoon me teri.
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«Reply #27 on: May 02, 2005, 04:52:24 PM »
Quote from: "Manish_Friend"
HI Friends, this is my first post on this forum. Hope you would like it!!

Ho Jaati hai aankhen num, kho jaate kahin aaur hum
Khud se hi hote begane hum, jab bhi wo raat yaad aati hai...

Kuch aisa bhi ho jayega,kabhi socha bhi na tha khwabon mein...
Ho jayega sanam bewafa,aaya na ye kyoon khalayon mein..
Khoon ke katron se, likhtaa hoon tera naam diwaron mein..
Raat raat jaag kar, dhoondhta hoon tujhe sitaron mein

Kya Wo raat hi thi, ya thi wo qayamat ki raat...
Kaise mein bhool jaon,wo aakhri mulaqat ki raat...
Har gayi Zindagi jeet gayi maut,wo Quatil thi raat..
Hamari zindagi ki khushiyon ki, shayad aakhri thi raat

Dard kyun ye na hota kum, ashkon ko kaise roke hum
Khud se hi hote begane hum, jab bhi wo raat yaad aati hai...


bohat khoobsurat likha hai manish,sach me dil ko choo gayi,plz. do keep writing.
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Manish_Friend
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«Reply #28 on: May 03, 2005, 01:51:43 AM »
Thank you very much nidhi ji for your appreciation.
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apnaa_koi
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«Reply #29 on: May 03, 2005, 02:08:27 AM »
Achaa Lagaa Sher Manish ji...

Always Anjli
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