::wo shaks kabhi mera thha hi nahi::

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"Talaashi thhi zindgi jiski baahon me maine,
 wo baahein kabhi mere liye thhin hi nahin,

 socha thha jise har pal har khushi apni,
 wo khushi kabhi apni thhi hi nahi,

 kiya jiska intezaar maine itne barson tak,
 wo shaks kabhi mera thha hi nahi,
 
 gaer ko uski baahon me dekhaa jab,
 to ye zindagi kyon thham si gayi,

 main to jaanti thhi wo mera nahi hai,
 phir kyon ankho me ashkon ki bahaar hai,

 ye pyaar hai mera ya dil tootne ka dard,
 zuban se na nikal saka use dekh ek bhi shabd,

 wo buland haunsle,wo pyaar pe ittiyaar mera,
 toote sheeshe sa bikhra hai ye dil mera,

 kyon kisi ko dil itna chah baithta hai,
 kyon kisi ko zindagi maan leta hai,

 ye jaante huye bhi ki wo apna nahi,
 beintehaan use kyon chaahta hai,

 jaanti thhi main ek din toot ke bikhrungi,
 ye na socha kabhi,kaise main sambhlungi,

 kyon main is kadar tumhe chahti rahi,
 khamoshi se pal pal nihaarti rahi,

 zindagi ke har sapne me tumhe jagah di hai,
 par zindagi ko aaj kaise sapna keh doon main."
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«Reply #1 on: June 16, 2005, 02:23:55 PM »
superbbbb sis its a nice combination of  pyar n dard......................................tussi gr8 ho..........................
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«Reply #2 on: June 16, 2005, 02:26:17 PM »
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superbbbb sis.......................................tussi gr8 ho..........................
lolzz nikki sis,thank u thank u :D
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«Reply #3 on: June 16, 2005, 02:31:22 PM »
u r always welcum...

chahton pe apni aitbaar rakho, woh laot ayenge
itna pyar bhara dil tod kar, kahan jayenge
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«Reply #4 on: June 16, 2005, 02:38:31 PM »
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u r always welcum...

chahton pe apni aitbaar rakho, woh laot ayenge
itna pyar bhara dil tod kar, kahan jayenge
wah,kya keh diya,bohat khoob. Usual Smile

"Jaa to kahin na sakenge,pyaar me mere itna to dam hai,
 kyaa karoon main bhi lekin,mere paas waqt zaraa kam hai."
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«Reply #5 on: June 16, 2005, 02:53:44 PM »
wow nidhi...wonderful poem...very niceee...beautiful words...keep writing more...
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«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2005, 02:55:11 PM »
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wow nidhi...wonderful poem...very niceee...beautiful words...keep writing more...
Thank u soo much sanya for reading and appreciating Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: June 16, 2005, 03:22:52 PM »
gud nidhi.....and nikki kudidye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: June 16, 2005, 03:29:45 PM »
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gud nidhi.....and nikki kudidye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank u meena Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: June 16, 2005, 07:42:33 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Talaashi thhi zindgi jiski baahon me maine,
 wo baahein kabhi mere liye thhin hi nahin,

 socha thha jise har pal har khushi apni,
 wo khushi kabhi apni thhi hi nahi,

 kiya jiska intezaar maine itne barson tak,
 wo shaks kabhi mera thha hi nahi,
 
 gaer ko uski baahon me dekhaa jab,
 to ye zindagi kyon thham si gayi,

 main to jaanti thhi wo mera nahi hai,
 phir kyon ankho me ashkon ki bahaar hai,

 ye pyaar hai mera ya dil tootne ka dard,
 zuban se na nikal saka use dekh ek bhi shabd,

 wo buland haunsle,wo pyaar pe ittiyaar mera,
 toote sheeshe sa bikhra hai ye dil mera,

 kyon kisi ko dil itna chah baithta hai,
 kyon kisi ko zindagi maan leta hai,

 ye jaante huye bhi ki wo apna nahi,
 beintehaan use kyon chaahta hai,

 jaanti thhi main ek din toot ke bikhrungi,
 ye na socha kabhi,kaise main sambhlungi,

 kyon main is kadar tumhe chahti rahi,
 khamoshi se pal pal nihaarti rahi,

 zindagi ke har sapne me tumhe jagah di hai,
 par zindagi ko aaj kaise sapna keh doon main."


wow wow  nidhi...............superbbbbbbbbb dost...................too  good  nikki.........dono    ne  bahot  don  baad likha...............

nidhi  main  bhi  4 lines  mein kuch  kah  raha hoon.........

khud ko  teri  chaah  mein   maine  mita daala
ab kahan  tere ghar mein  churakar  bahaaar  karoon
khirchiya apni khusiyon ki  teri main tere aangan mein saza deta
ab  roshni  bhi  nahi  hai  kahan se  tere ghar  mein  ujaala  karoon.......
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«Reply #10 on: June 17, 2005, 01:24:59 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Talaashi thhi zindgi jiski baahon me maine,
 wo baahein kabhi mere liye thhin hi nahin,

 socha thha jise har pal har khushi apni,
 wo khushi kabhi apni thhi hi nahi,

 kiya jiska intezaar maine itne barson tak,
 wo shaks kabhi mera thha hi nahi,
 
 gaer ko uski baahon me dekhaa jab,
 to ye zindagi kyon thham si gayi,

 main to jaanti thhi wo mera nahi hai,
 phir kyon ankho me ashkon ki bahaar hai,

 ye pyaar hai mera ya dil tootne ka dard,
 zuban se na nikal saka use dekh ek bhi shabd,

 wo buland haunsle,wo pyaar pe ittiyaar mera,
 toote sheeshe sa bikhra hai ye dil mera,

 kyon kisi ko dil itna chah baithta hai,
 kyon kisi ko zindagi maan leta hai,

 ye jaante huye bhi ki wo apna nahi,
 beintehaan use kyon chaahta hai,

 jaanti thhi main ek din toot ke bikhrungi,
 ye na socha kabhi,kaise main sambhlungi,

 kyon main is kadar tumhe chahti rahi,
 khamoshi se pal pal nihaarti rahi,

 zindagi ke har sapne me tumhe jagah di hai,
 par zindagi ko aaj kaise sapna keh doon main."

Bohat khoob Nidhi....Kya baat hai...
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«Reply #11 on: June 17, 2005, 06:44:43 AM »
Bahut bahut achha likha hai Nidhi...pada kal tha............lol.....post aaj kar rahi hoon.............bt wakeyi ...bahut khoob likha hai.......
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«Reply #12 on: June 17, 2005, 06:50:52 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Talaashi thhi zindgi jiski baahon me maine,
 wo baahein kabhi mere liye thhin hi nahin,

 socha thha jise har pal har khushi apni,
 wo khushi kabhi apni thhi hi nahi,

 kiya jiska intezaar maine itne barson tak,
 wo shaks kabhi mera thha hi nahi,
 
 gaer ko uski baahon me dekhaa jab,
 to ye zindagi kyon thham si gayi,

 main to jaanti thhi wo mera nahi hai,
 phir kyon ankho me ashkon ki bahaar hai,

 ye pyaar hai mera ya dil tootne ka dard,
 zuban se na nikal saka use dekh ek bhi shabd,

 wo buland haunsle,wo pyaar pe ittiyaar mera,
 toote sheeshe sa bikhra hai ye dil mera,

 kyon kisi ko dil itna chah baithta hai,
 kyon kisi ko zindagi maan leta hai,

 ye jaante huye bhi ki wo apna nahi,
 beintehaan use kyon chaahta hai,

 jaanti thhi main ek din toot ke bikhrungi,
 ye na socha kabhi,kaise main sambhlungi,

 kyon main is kadar tumhe chahti rahi,
 khamoshi se pal pal nihaarti rahi,

 zindagi ke har sapne me tumhe jagah di hai,
 par zindagi ko aaj kaise sapna keh doon main."


wow wow  nidhi...............superbbbbbbbbb dost...................too  good  nikki.........dono    ne  bahot  don  baad likha...............

nidhi  main  bhi  4 lines  mein kuch  kah  raha hoon.........

khud ko  teri  chaah  mein   maine  mita daala
ab kahan  tere ghar mein  churakar  bahaaar  karoon
khirchiya apni khusiyon ki  teri main tere aangan mein saza deta
ab  roshni  bhi  nahi  hai  kahan se  tere ghar  mein  ujaala  karoon.......


Thanx waheed,bohat khoob arz kiya hai tumne bhi. tongue3

"Mitaa daala maine khud ko uski chahat mein,
 phir bhi khud k mitne ka gam nahi mujhe,
 gam hai mujhe to bas ek hi baat kaa hai,
 jise itna chaha,wo kyun na samajh sakaa mujhe."
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«Reply #13 on: June 17, 2005, 06:54:37 AM »
Quote from: "dolly"
Bahut bahut achha likha hai Nidhi...pada kal tha............lol.....post aaj kar rahi hoon.............bt wakeyi ...bahut khoob likha hai.......


lol...thank god,aaj to reply kar diya  glasses2  Winking

Thanx a lot dolly and thank u aryaan Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: June 17, 2005, 07:42:40 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Talaashi thhi zindgi jiski baahon me maine,
 wo baahein kabhi mere liye thhin hi nahin,

 socha thha jise har pal har khushi apni,
 wo khushi kabhi apni thhi hi nahi,

 kiya jiska intezaar maine itne barson tak,
 wo shaks kabhi mera thha hi nahi,
 
 gaer ko uski baahon me dekhaa jab,
 to ye zindagi kyon thham si gayi,

 main to jaanti thhi wo mera nahi hai,
 phir kyon ankho me ashkon ki bahaar hai,

 ye pyaar hai mera ya dil tootne ka dard,
 zuban se na nikal saka use dekh ek bhi shabd,

 wo buland haunsle,wo pyaar pe ittiyaar mera,
 toote sheeshe sa bikhra hai ye dil mera,

 kyon kisi ko dil itna chah baithta hai,
 kyon kisi ko zindagi maan leta hai,

 ye jaante huye bhi ki wo apna nahi,
 beintehaan use kyon chaahta hai,

 jaanti thhi main ek din toot ke bikhrungi,
 ye na socha kabhi,kaise main sambhlungi,

 kyon main is kadar tumhe chahti rahi,
 khamoshi se pal pal nihaarti rahi,

 zindagi ke har sapne me tumhe jagah di hai,
 par zindagi ko aaj kaise sapna keh doon main."


amazing nidhi
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