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nirala
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wo shyd mujse kuch sunna chahti he
bikhar chuke kuch khabo ko fir se…
apni aankho me bun-na chahti he!
kese kah du use-
mai b usi se pyar karta hu
dil ki sabhi dhdkane-
sirf usi ke naam karta hu!!
kese kah du ke dil me
ik uske lie hi bepanah pyar he
gar wo kare kabi izhaar e mohbt
fir iqraar hi iqraar he!!
ehsas b hai-
isharo me shayd unhone,
kaha he kai bar kuch
ehsas b he muje unke uss,
khamosi me khamosh izhaar ki
me dikhlata rha khud ko, naadan hamesha
aakhir me b unke hi labo sunna chahta hu
bikhar chuke unke khwabo ko fir se……
unki aankho me aur unko,
apni palko me chupana chahta hu!!!
darta hu me-
ke zakhmo ko uske kahi fir se taaza na kar du
chahat me apni mohbt ke,uske dard ki inteha na kar du
bharose ki neev pr khade dosti ko kalankit na kar du!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2011, 08:46:10 AM » |
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its nice nirala ji.....
apki ye poetry sabse alag he........alag alag tarah ki feel ko khobsurat lafjo me pesh kiya he apne........
kashmkash he puri poetry me......very nice .....
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nirala
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2011, 08:50:46 AM » |
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thanx matrix ji…
ye adhora rah gaya aur muje delete karna he isko.
ye thk nhi…
del karna he yar
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2011, 08:52:24 AM » |
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nirala ji kuch batee puri na ho to hi behtar he........ye poetry bhi adhurepan me complete ehsaas baya kar rahi he.....ise rahne do...chaho to iske badle meri koi poetry delete karwane ko me agree hu...
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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2011, 09:05:59 AM » |
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ab to ye adhuri nahin hai na nirala mastana ji.........
ab ye dlt wali baat na karen aap.....
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nirala
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2011, 09:09:18 AM » |
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del karna jaruri h.…
aap kar do plz
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2011, 09:10:18 AM » |
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2011, 09:20:45 AM » |
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wo shyd mujse kuch sunna chahti he
bikhar chuke kuch khabo ko fir se…
apni aankho me bun-na chahti he!
kese kah du use-
mai b usi se pyar karta hu
dil ki sabhi dhdkane-
sirf usi ke naam karta hu!!
kese kah du ke dil me
ik uske lie hi bepanah pyar he
gar wo kare kabi izhaar e mohbt fir iqraar hi iqraar he!!
darta hu me-
ke zakhmo ko uske kahi fir se taaza na kar du
chahat me apni mohbt ke,uske dard ki inteha na kar du
bharose ki neev pr khade dosti ko kalankit na kar du!!
good one |
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«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2011, 12:11:27 PM » |
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Waah Bahoot Khoob Nirala ji... bahoot Ache !...
par kuch adoori lagi aapki yea kavita jaise abhi aur kuch bhi kehna chahata hai aapka dil aur kalam ruk gai ho kehte kehte.. !!!
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2011, 12:35:22 PM » |
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han sophi ji… aapne sahi socha… ye meri sabse lambi soch aur haqiqat he. lekin me isko thk b nai kar paya or pura likh b nai saka.  monitors isko dlt b nai karte. ab se to post b nai karna kuch mene… del hi nai hota |
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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2011, 12:41:30 PM » |
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Awww.. Aisa kyun bol rahe ho.. Hota hai ... Muskilo ko has kar seh lena hi Zindgai hai.. Chill.. make Friends and keep ur self Busy for while fir dekhna .. sab acha lagega..
Tension lene ka nahi aur na hi dene ka.. samje.. be happy !! and keep Posting.. !!
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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2011, 12:49:09 PM » |
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me nir hu…
means tentions free veer hu…
lekin kabi kabi reqst manna chahiye. …
post to dlt karte nai mera reqst wala cmnt hi dlt kar dia nisthuro ne ……
nt fare na
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«Reply #12 on: April 07, 2011, 12:56:07 PM » |
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haha.. nahi We will Not remove it.. Its really Good.. u can add few more lines on it and make it more impressive... Samje Mr. Nir urf Veer !!
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«Reply #13 on: April 07, 2011, 01:12:49 PM » |
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hmm…… smjhe smjhe… war nd ladai me sb jayaz he   … wese b mera manna he ki…… jab mann changa to katori me ganga fir nahao usme…… ab jo post hua to hua… ab no pherbadal . aapka thanx… aapse bat karke gussa shant ho gaya god bless u ji …be happy |
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«Reply #14 on: April 07, 2011, 01:30:43 PM » |
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badmash nir......aur agar aage isko badhana hai to likhkar mujhe pm kar dena i will add to it okkkkk......
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