woh aaj bhi........raha hai!!!!!!

by pritam tripathi on December 13, 2012, 09:30:41 PM
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jo muskurata tha baageechon me phool bankar
woh aaj bhi mera gharonda tod raha hai

hum aandhiyaan mar miti jis chiraag se ladkar
woh aaj bhi roushan dhuwaan chod raha hai

kisne tujhe apna kaha yun paraya bankar
woh aaj bhi kaifiyat dil dhoondh raha hai

koi khuda jeeta nahi uski duaon se ladkar
woh aaj bhi manmauji me ghoom raha hai

kaise kahun usko saga dil pe pathar rakhkar
woh aaj bhi apne baap ko kos raha hai

meelon tak chalta gaya jo paani sa behkar
woh aaj bhi shoratein bator raha hai

maangi dua jo ab talak ek faryaadi bankar
woh aaj bhi meri dua khuda jod raha hai

koi nahi tera mera is duniya me rehbar
woh aaj bhi matlabi sansaar daud raha hai

jo bujh gayi aag aur chingaariyaan sulagkar
woh aaj bhi jalta nishaan chod raha hai

kasmaksh me chalti rahi zindagi yun is kadar
woh aaj bhi ek dard ka mod raha hai

kuch yun dekha jaate hue mujhko palatakar
woh aaj bhi sirf intzaar ho raha hai
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«Reply #1 on: December 14, 2012, 12:40:24 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #2 on: December 14, 2012, 04:02:26 AM »
 Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 14, 2012, 04:38:22 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: December 14, 2012, 05:14:12 AM »
bahut bahut khoob Applause
jo muskurata tha baageechon me phool bankar
woh aaj bhi mera gharonda tod raha hai

hum aandhiyaan mar miti jis chiraag se ladkar
woh aaj bhi roushan dhuwaan chod raha hai

kisne tujhe apna kaha yun paraya bankar
aaj bhi kaifiyat dil dhoondh raha hai

kya baat hai Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2012, 07:18:20 AM »
beautiful
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2012, 11:20:46 AM »
waah waah waah bahut khoob........
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«Reply #7 on: December 14, 2012, 02:14:01 PM »
Quote from: nandbahu on December 14, 2012, 12:40:24 AM
very nice
nandbandhu ji thanks
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«Reply #8 on: December 14, 2012, 02:14:53 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on December 14, 2012, 04:02:26 AM
Applause Applause
mann ji thanks
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«Reply #9 on: December 14, 2012, 02:16:00 PM »
Quote from: prashad on December 14, 2012, 04:38:22 AM
bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2012, 02:16:57 PM »
Quote from: mkv on December 14, 2012, 05:14:12 AM
bahut bahut khoob Applause
jo muskurata tha baageechon me phool bankar
woh aaj bhi mera gharonda tod raha hai

hum aandhiyaan mar miti jis chiraag se ladkar
woh aaj bhi roushan dhuwaan chod raha hai

kisne tujhe apna kaha yun paraya bankar
aaj bhi kaifiyat dil dhoondh raha hai

kya baat hai Applause Applause


mkv ji thanks
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«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2012, 02:18:12 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on December 14, 2012, 07:18:20 AM
beautiful

saini ji thanks
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«Reply #12 on: December 14, 2012, 02:19:33 PM »
Quote from: gaytri gupta on December 14, 2012, 11:20:46 AM
waah waah waah bahut khoob........
gaytri ji thanks
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