Woh aaye bhi kareeb

by passedaway on November 24, 2004, 02:37:33 AM
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Kuch dard uthe seene se, jinhe labzon mein piro kar pesh kar raha hoo, ummed hai pasand aayenge.


Hum kabse bahane dhoond rahe the muskuraane ke liye
Woh aaye bhi kaareb to dil dukhaane ke liye

Dilon mein jala rahe the ummeed ke diye hum
Zhoka banke aaye woh inhe bujhaane ke liye

Taraste rahe hum uske ik deedar ki khatir
Aur woh mile bhi humse, to bhool jaane ke liye

Poochte hai humse kyu nam hai aakhen
inka wajood hai ashkon mein nahane ke liye

kisi aah, kisi chah, kisi raah mein zinda hai 'Tan.viir'
Nahi to kabke mar chuke hai hum zaamane ke liye


Mayur [urf Tan.viir]
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Aryaan
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«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2004, 03:13:45 AM »
Bohat achey!!!
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Nedura!
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«Reply #2 on: November 24, 2004, 06:48:16 AM »
Quote from: "passedaway"
Kuch dard uthe seene se, jinhe labzon mein piro kar pesh kar raha hoo, ummed hai pasand aayenge.


Hum kabse bahane dhoond rahe the muskuraane ke liye
Woh aaye bhi kaareb to dil dukhaane ke liye

Dilon mein jala rahe the ummeed ke diye hum
Zhoka banke aaye woh inhe bujhaane ke liye

Taraste rahe hum uske ik deedar ki khatir
Aur woh mile bhi humse, to bhool jaane ke liye

Poochte hai humse kyu nam hai aakhen
inka wajood hai ashkon mein nahane ke liye

kisi aah, kisi chah, kisi raah mein zinda hai 'Tan.viir'
Nahi to kabke mar chuke hai hum zaamane ke liye


Mayur [urf Tan.viir]




wahhhhh kya baat hai ....!!!!
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nishita
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«Reply #3 on: November 24, 2004, 07:55:23 AM »
nice passed away..

Mere labon par aj koi duah nehi
Kya iss jahan mein bhi Khuda nehi..?

Jahan dil ko chain mile, rooh ko sukoon
Shayad zamane mein aisi koi jagah nehi.

Tark-e-mahobbat ka ilzam kisse de
Hamari kismat mein hi unki wafa nehi

Ek mehboob ki mehndi na lagi in mein
Warna hamare hathon mein kya kya nehi... (NM)
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: November 24, 2004, 08:00:43 PM »
NICE!!!
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passedaway
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«Reply #5 on: November 24, 2004, 09:03:31 PM »
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Mere labon par aj koi duah nehi
Kya iss jahan mein bhi Khuda nehi


Is pe arz hai

Dil hi har dua ko anjaam nahi milta
khuda ko dhoondne chale the, yaha insaan nahi milta
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: November 24, 2004, 09:51:01 PM »
wah!!!! bahoot khoob passedaway!!!!!!!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #7 on: November 25, 2004, 02:23:09 PM »
Quote from: "nishita"
nice passed away..

Mere labon par aj koi duah nehi
Kya iss jahan mein bhi Khuda nehi..?

Jahan dil ko chain mile, rooh ko sukoon
Shayad zamane mein aisi koi jagah nehi.

Tark-e-mahobbat ka ilzam kisse de
Hamari kismat mein hi unki wafa nehi

Ek mehboob ki mehndi na lagi in mein
Warna hamare hathon mein kya kya nehi... (NM)


wah!!!!!!  excellent nishita........very nice passedaway........
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nishita
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«Reply #8 on: November 25, 2004, 02:42:18 PM »
thanks waheed ... and very nice passed away
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #9 on: November 25, 2004, 03:51:45 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "nishita"
nice passed away..

Mere labon par aj koi duah nehi
Kya iss jahan mein bhi Khuda nehi..?

Jahan dil ko chain mile, rooh ko sukoon
Shayad zamane mein aisi koi jagah nehi.

Tark-e-mahobbat ka ilzam kisse de
Hamari kismat mein hi unki wafa nehi

Ek mehboob ki mehndi na lagi in mein
Warna hamare hathon mein kya kya nehi... (NM)


wah!!!!!!  excellent nishita........very nice passedaway........


for you nishita.........

Aa jaoge halaat ki zid par jo kisi din.....
Ho jayega maloom k khuda hey k nahi hai...............
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rohit30002
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«Reply #10 on: July 01, 2005, 08:14:41 PM »
Quote from: "passedaway"
Kuch dard uthe seene se, jinhe labzon mein piro kar pesh kar raha hoo, ummed hai pasand aayenge.


Hum kabse bahane dhoond rahe the muskuraane ke liye
Woh aaye bhi kaareb to dil dukhaane ke liye

Dilon mein jala rahe the ummeed ke diye hum
Zhoka banke aaye woh inhe bujhaane ke liye

Taraste rahe hum uske ik deedar ki khatir
Aur woh mile bhi humse, to bhool jaane ke liye

Poochte hai humse kyu nam hai aakhen
inka wajood hai ashkon mein nahane ke liye

kisi aah, kisi chah, kisi raah mein zinda hai 'Tan.viir'
Nahi to kabke mar chuke hai hum zaamane ke liye


Mayur [urf Tan.viir]



Nice passedaway
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