WOH KHAMOSHI SE SAHH GAYA SAB KUCHH ....................HASAN

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Woh    khamoshi   se    sahh   gaya   sab   kuchh ,
Kuchh  na  kahh  kar  bhi  kahh  gaya  sab   kuchh


Sabr   kay   baandh   saath   day   na   sakay  ,
Aaj   AshkoN   meiN   bahh   gaya   sab   kuchh


Pukhta     buniyaad   ,     pakki    deewaareiN  ,
Eik   jhatkay   meiN   dha'hh    gaya  sab  kuchh


Zah'n   meiN   thhee  misaal - e - Sabr - e - Rasool (saw)
Mard - e - Momin   thha  ,  sahh  gaya  sab  kuchh


Lakh   dhoye   ghamoN   ke   daagh   ,  'Hasan'  ,
Likkha   chehray   pe   rahh   gaya   sab   kuchh
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«Reply #1 on: January 07, 2013, 01:56:05 PM »

Woh    khamoshi   se    sahh   gaya   sab   kuchh ,
Kuchh  na  kahh  kar  bhi  kahh  gaya  sab   kuchh


Sabr   kay   baandh   saath   day   na   sakay  ,
Aaj   AshkoN   meiN   bahh   gaya   sab   kuchh



Pukhta     buniyaad   ,     pakki    deewaareiN  ,
Eik   jhatkay   meiN   dha'hh    gaya  sab  kuchh


Zah'n   meiN   thhee  misaal - e - Sabr - e - Rasool (saw)
Mard - e - Momin   thha  ,  sahh  gaya  sab  kuchh


Lakh   dhoye   ghamoN   ke   daagh   ,  'Hasan'  ,
Likkha   chehray   pe   rahh   gaya   sab   kuchh[/size][/color]


wah wah bahut bahut umda peshkash  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 07, 2013, 03:08:00 PM »
just superb bhaijaan pesh hai ek
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«Reply #3 on: January 07, 2013, 03:27:26 PM »

Woh    khamoshi   se    sahh   gaya   sab   kuchh ,
Kuchh  na  kahh  kar  bhi  kahh  gaya  sab   kuchh


Sabr   kay   baandh   saath   day   na   sakay  ,
Aaj   AshkoN   meiN   bahh   gaya   sab   kuchh


Pukhta     buniyaad   ,     pakki    deewaareiN  ,
Eik   jhatkay   meiN   dha'hh    gaya  sab  kuchh


Zah'n   meiN   thhee  misaal - e - Sabr - e - Rasool (saw)
Mard - e - Momin   thha  ,  sahh  gaya  sab  kuchh


Lakh   dhoye   ghamoN   ke   daagh   ,  'Hasan'  ,
Likkha   chehray   pe   rahh   gaya   sab   kuchh


just gr8888888888888888888888888888888888888 sir,plz accept one rau
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«Reply #4 on: January 07, 2013, 03:29:36 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
terific hasan jee bahut hi umda hamari taraf se ek rau qubool kijiye
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«Reply #5 on: January 07, 2013, 03:39:42 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Sirji.....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: January 07, 2013, 03:50:17 PM »
wah wah
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«Reply #7 on: January 07, 2013, 04:08:44 PM »

Woh    khamoshi   se    sahh   gaya   sab   kuchh ,
Kuchh  na  kahh  kar  bhi  kahh  gaya  sab   kuchh


Sabr   kay   baandh   saath   day   na   sakay  , Applause Applause Applause
Aaj   AshkoN   meiN   bahh   gaya   sab   kuchh


Pukhta     buniyaad   ,     pakki    deewaareiN  ,
Eik   jhatkay   meiN   dha'hh    gaya  sab  kuchh


Zah'n   meiN   thhee  misaal - e - Sabr - e - Rasool (saw)
Mard - e - Momin   thha  ,  sahh  gaya  sab  kuchh


Lakh   dhoye   ghamoN   ke   daagh   ,  'Hasan'  ,
Likkha   chehray   pe   rahh   gaya   sab   kuchh Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob. dheron daad
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«Reply #8 on: January 07, 2013, 06:26:34 PM »
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, great, superb, sabhi she'r ek se badh kar ek. Lekin 4th she'r sab se achha laga.
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«Reply #9 on: January 07, 2013, 06:59:32 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: January 08, 2013, 01:38:03 AM »

Woh    khamoshi   se    sahh   gaya   sab   kuchh ,
Kuchh  na  kahh  kar  bhi  kahh  gaya  sab   kuchh


Sabr   kay   baandh   saath   day   na   sakay  ,
Aaj   AshkoN   meiN   bahh   gaya   sab   kuchh


Pukhta     buniyaad   ,     pakki    deewaareiN  ,
Eik   jhatkay   meiN   dha'hh    gaya  sab  kuchh


Zah'n   meiN   thhee  misaal - e - Sabr - e - Rasool (saw)
Mard - e - Momin   thha  ,  sahh  gaya  sab  kuchh


Lakh   dhoye   ghamoN   ke   daagh   ,  'Hasan'  ,
Likkha   chehray   pe   rahh   gaya   sab   kuchh

Bohut Khoob sir hamesha ki tarha ek aur beshqeemti ghazal , sabhi ashaar lajwab rahe khas taur se 4th aur 5th ashaar behad khoob rahe. daaaad qubool kareN aur ek rao saheb bhi....
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«Reply #11 on: January 08, 2013, 03:39:13 AM »
bahut bahut khub hasanji....... daad daaad daaad

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«Reply #12 on: January 08, 2013, 05:47:33 AM »
wah wah
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«Reply #13 on: January 08, 2013, 08:09:32 AM »
wah wah bahut bahut umda peshkash  Applause Applause Applause Applause
thanks , sumanji .khush rahye.
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«Reply #14 on: January 08, 2013, 08:26:42 AM »
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Woh    khamoshi   se    sahh   gaya   sab   kuchh ,
Kuchh  na  kahh  kar  bhi  kahh  gaya  sab   kuchh


Sabr   kay   baandh   saath   day   na   sakay  ,
Aaj   AshkoN   meiN   bahh   gaya   sab   kuchh


Pukhta     buniyaad   ,     pakki    deewaareiN  ,
Eik   jhatkay   meiN   dha'hh    gaya  sab  kuchh


Zah'n   meiN   thhee  misaal - e - Sabr - e - Rasool (saw)
Mard - e - Momin   thha  ,  sahh  gaya  sab  kuchh


Lakh   dhoye   ghamoN   ke   daagh   ,  'Hasan'  ,
Likkha   chehray   pe   rahh   gaya   sab   kuchh

bahoot bahoot khoob sir koi bhi tareef kam apki nazmo se bahoot kuch sikhne ko milta hai
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