~*~ Woh meri muskurahat legaya ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on February 05, 2011, 01:38:59 PM
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Usse kamzor samajta tha main mager,
Woh bewaffayi kay ilzam tak sehgaya..

Usne dil main apne duniya ko basa lia,
Bas ek main hi tha jo rehgaya..

Usse choo tak na sake ashk uske,
Main najane kaise apnon main behgaya..

Waise toh bachpan se rona seekh liya tha,
Ek wohi tha jo rone ki asli wajah degaya..

Aj puchte hai log kyun udaas ho ‘Khamosh’,
Kaise kahen kay woh meri muskurahat legaya..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2011, 01:52:21 PM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on February 05, 2011, 01:38:59 PM
Usse kamzor samajta tha main mager,
Woh bewaffayi kay ilzam tak sehgaya..

Usne dil main apne duniya ko basa lia,
Bas ek main hi tha jo rehgaya..

Usse choo tak na sake ashk uske,
Main najane kaise apnon main behgaya..

Waise toh bachpan se rona seekh liya tha,
Ek wohi tha jo rone ki asli wajah degaya..

Aj puchte hai log kyun udaas ho ‘Khamosh’,
Kaise kahen kay woh meri muskurahat legaya..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Good One ...... Rahim Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... !
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nirala
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2011, 02:38:10 PM »
kya kahen Rahim ji --
mindblowing creation.
umda aur bahut hi umda
di se daad kyunki dil ki baat hai
"
wo meri muskurahat le gaya apne askon me chupakar
     kabhi jo baat uthi to na muskura sake aur na hi rona aaya bas tadap kar rah gaye
"
thanx
"
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dead heart
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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2011, 03:40:45 PM »
Quote from: Anshumali on February 05, 2011, 01:52:21 PM
Good One ...... Rahim Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... !
SHukriya shukriya Naresh jee..
yunhi saath dete rahiye bas..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2011, 03:41:26 PM »
Quote from: nirala on February 05, 2011, 02:38:10 PM
kya kahen Rahim ji --
mindblowing creation.
umda aur bahut hi umda
di se daad kyunki dil ki baat hai
"
wo meri muskurahat le gaya apne askon me chupakar
     kabhi jo baat uthi to na muskura sake aur na hi rona aaya bas tadap kar rah gaye
"
thanx
"
Teh teh dil se shukriya Nirala dost..
Aur kya kehne..bahaut achi lines..
Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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nirala
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«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2011, 04:07:34 PM »
aapki inayat ki aapko meri kuch lines achhi lagi Usual Smile
warna humari betaqllufi baate kuch ko buri bhi lag jaati hai Dost.
happy rahiye its ma Dua Usual Smile
"
thanx
"
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2011, 06:13:30 PM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on February 05, 2011, 01:38:59 PM
Usse kamzor samajta tha main mager,
Woh bewaffayi kay ilzam tak sehgaya..

Usne dil main apne duniya ko basa lia,
Bas ek main hi tha jo rehgaya..

Usse choo tak na sake ashk uske,
Main najane kaise apnon main behgaya..

Waise toh bachpan se rona seekh liya tha,
Ek wohi tha jo rone ki asli wajah degaya..

Aj puchte hai log kyun udaas ho ‘Khamosh’,
Kaise kahen kay woh meri muskurahat legaya..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~



Usne Dil Mein Apne Duniya Ko Basa Liya
Bass Ek Main Hi Thaa Jo Rehgyaa.......


Behad Dil ko chune laayak Alfaaz hain... Rahim Sahab.... Crying
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2011, 06:25:14 PM »
mastam mast poem rahim ..ye aapki..bht achhca laga padhkar..dard ko bht achche se bayaan kiya hai aapne

nirala ji mastam 2 lines......
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2011, 06:47:55 PM »
bahut hi umda kalaam Rahim ji.
bahut bahut umda.
dili daad dear.
khus rahiye always
sukriya
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«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2011, 07:06:18 PM »
Quote from: nirala on February 05, 2011, 04:07:34 PM
aapki inayat ki aapko meri kuch lines achhi lagi Usual Smile
warna humari betaqllufi baate kuch ko buri bhi lag jaati hai Dost.
happy rahiye its ma Dua Usual Smile
"
thanx
"
Haan yeh toh experience humara bhi hai kay log
aitraaz karte hai humari baaton par..
mager maine toh yehi seekha hai kay jo tumhe na pasand kare,
woh tumhari koi khoobi ka qayal hai..yaad rakhiyega yeh baat..
Khush rahiye mere bhai..!
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«Reply #10 on: February 05, 2011, 07:07:50 PM »
Quote from: Alam Qazi on February 05, 2011, 06:13:30 PM


Usne Dil Mein Apne Duniya Ko Basa Liya
Bass Ek Main Hi Thaa Jo Rehgyaa.......


Behad Dil ko chune laayak Alfaaz hain... Rahim Sahab.... Crying



Alam Sahab..
Dard pe jiss tarha ap likhte ho, humara toh
sapna hai kay uss tarha likhein..
Apko pasand aya, bahaut acha laga hume..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: February 05, 2011, 07:08:29 PM »
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on February 05, 2011, 06:25:14 PM
mastam mast poem rahim ..ye aapki..bht achhca laga padhkar..dard ko bht achche se bayaan kiya hai aapne

nirala ji mastam 2 lines......
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya meri di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: February 05, 2011, 07:09:14 PM »
Quote from: killbill on February 05, 2011, 06:47:55 PM
bahut hi umda kalaam Rahim ji.
bahut bahut umda.
dili daad dear.
khus rahiye always
sukriya
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya Killbill jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: February 06, 2011, 12:21:52 AM »
silsilaa zakhm kaa chale kab tak
dard e dil phir se de gayaa dastak

bahut khoob dard ko lafzoN me piroyaa hai aap ne Rahim jee!dil se daad!
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«Reply #14 on: February 06, 2011, 01:16:56 AM »
Bohat Achhey Rahin Saheb

Khush Rahen
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