- Woh Raat -

by Meena on June 30, 2005, 04:32:52 PM
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kuch jazbaat...

Bohot kali thi who raat hume yaad hai aab tak,
Guzar chuki who par aab tak meri zindagi pe chayi hai,

Alag hogaye humare unse raste us raat kuch aise,
Jaise dono ki manzil hi ek doosre se parayi hai,

Ek sunapan sa rehe gaya aab mere dil me, ek dard teher gaya,
Dekho, kismat ne meri zindagi pe apni mohar lagayi hai,

Ek mamuli si raat thi who to, par mera sab kuch lut kar le gayi,
Mili us raat se mujhe umar bhar ki tanhai hai,

Aab tak gabrate hai hum raaton se is kadar,
Ke har raat aab mere ankhon me ek nami si layi hai!
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«Reply #1 on: June 30, 2005, 04:35:40 PM »
WAH WAH WAH.........just GR8 as usual and these lines just WOW "Aab tak gabrate hai hum raaton se is kadar, Ke har raat aab mere ankhon me ek nami si layi hai!"
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«Reply #2 on: June 30, 2005, 04:37:53 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
kuch jazbaat...

Bohot kali thi who raat hume yaad hai aab tak,
Guzar chuki who par aab tak meri zindagi pe chayi hai,

Alag hogaye humare unse raste us raat kuch aise,
Jaise dono ki manzil hi ek doosre se parayi hai,

Ek sunapan sa rehe gaya aab mere dil me, ek dard teher gaya,
Dekho, kismat ne meri zindagi pe apni mohar lagayi hai,

Ek mamuli si raat thi who to, par mera sab kuch lut kar le gayi,
Mili us raat se mujhe umar bhar ki tanhai hai,

Aab tak gabrate hai hum raaton se is kadar,
Ke har raat aab mere ankhon me ek nami si layi hai!


wah meena sis,kya khoob likha hai  Usual Smile  ,excellent .
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: June 30, 2005, 04:40:46 PM »
shukriya ishu and nidhi seety!!!  :D  mera honsla aur barta hai likhne ke liye!  :D
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amit_is_always_cool
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«Reply #4 on: June 30, 2005, 04:52:25 PM »
wah..............bohut.......................acha a likha aapnai meena ji very nice
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2005, 05:20:25 PM »
Quote from: "amit_is_always_cool"
wah..............bohut.......................acha a likha aapnai meena ji very nice


shukriya amit ji
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amit_is_always_cool
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«Reply #6 on: June 30, 2005, 05:22:02 PM »
kepp on writing u write very good............................................. ....
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2005, 05:32:42 PM »
It was fantastic one Meena ...
You have strike once again ...
Keep it up ...
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: June 30, 2005, 05:34:33 PM »
amit ji...
koshish  rahegi aage bhi aisa kuch pesh karon!

JHL ji
bohot bohot shukriya dost ji, aap sab  se hi sikha hai!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #9 on: June 30, 2005, 05:36:48 PM »
Hamne to sikha hai suraj se muskuraana,
Badal se garajna, hawaao se lehraana,
Hum to aaye the is duniya mein rote hue,
Aur aap kehti hai aapne humse paaya hai ye andaaz shairaana Huh?
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«Reply #10 on: June 30, 2005, 05:39:18 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
kuch jazbaat...

Bohot kali thi who raat hume yaad hai aab tak,
Guzar chuki who par aab tak meri zindagi pe chayi hai,

Alag hogaye humare unse raste us raat kuch aise,
Jaise dono ki manzil hi ek doosre se parayi hai,

Ek sunapan sa rehe gaya aab mere dil me, ek dard teher gaya,
Dekho, kismat ne meri zindagi pe apni mohar lagayi hai,

Ek mamuli si raat thi who to, par mera sab kuch lut kar le gayi,
Mili us raat se mujhe umar bhar ki tanhai hai,

Aab tak gabrate hai hum raaton se is kadar,
Ke har raat aab mere ankhon me ek nami si layi hai!


wow wow meena  wonderfull...................

us  raat  tumari  khwahisein  pairon  tale kisne raundin
maathe  per ek  sikan tumhare  aur  badha  gaya
apni  nakaam  hasraton  ko  bhulaane  kahan  jaogi "Meena"
kismat  mein jo  likha  usper  jor  nahi  chalta  kisi  ka................
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #11 on: June 30, 2005, 05:40:37 PM »
Very well written Waheed bhai ...
Good going ...
Keep it up ...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #12 on: June 30, 2005, 05:43:53 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Very well written Waheed bhai ...
Good going ...
Keep it up ...


thanxxxxxxxxx   alot..............  jhl..............  tongue3
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Meena
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«Reply #13 on: June 30, 2005, 05:44:02 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Hamne to sikha hai suraj se muskuraana,
Badal se garajna, hawaao se lehraana,
Hum to aaye the is duniya mein rote hue,
Aur aap kehti hai aapne humse paaya hai ye andaaz shairaana Huh?


hmmmm..... gud one

arre hum kaha is kabil, ke kuch pesh kare kuch shayari me,
jab jazbaaton ka kalam lekar doobo dete hai gum ki shahi me!!
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Meena
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«Reply #14 on: June 30, 2005, 05:46:52 PM »
"us raat tumari khwahisein pairon tale kisne raundin
maathe per ek sikan tumhare aur badha gaya
apni nakaam hasraton ko bhulaane kahan jaogi "Meena"
kismat mein jo likha usper jor nahi chalta kisi ka................"

wah, waheed kamal ka likha hai!!!

jante hai hum, ke hum kismat ko hara nahin sakhte,
gum pal rahe hai jo seene me, kisi ko bata nahin sakhte,
Toot gayi Khuda se bhi vishwas ki doori,
Kafir ban ke aab Khuda ko sata nahin sakhte!!
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