- Woh Raat - -Panna 3:Shayri-E-Dard

harashmahajan

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«Reply #30 on: June 30, 2005, 06:44:02 PM »

khuda ko bhi ik umra se hamse gila raha
ki der badar ghooma kiye yahi sila raha
jab paayee hosh toh murjha chuke the fool,
dard jo seene mein tha wahi khila raha.

harsh


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Aman Sarhadi

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«Reply #31 on: June 30, 2005, 06:54:08 PM »

Meena real good one....ek baat mai.n bhi kehna chaahunga ke
Sapne dekhe hain, toh tootne ka gham na kar,
Jo beete so beeta aankho.n ko nam na kar.


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Meena

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«Reply #32 on: June 30, 2005, 06:54:27 PM »

mind blowing harsh ji!!!!!!! too gud!!!!!!

jane kya soch kar Khuda ne hume diye hai gum,
hum bhi na harenge, karengi uski parwarish,
hum to toot chuke hai, bas yehi dua karta hai aab,
kisi aur ko aisi kisamt na mile, bas yeih hai humari khwaish!!


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Meena

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«Reply #33 on: June 30, 2005, 06:58:24 PM »

Quote from: "Aman Sarhadi"

Meena real good one....ek baat mai.n bhi kehna chaahunga ke
Sapne dekhe hain, toh tootne ka gham na kar,
Jo beete so beeta aankho.n ko nam na kar.

shukriya ji!!!

hum bhi na karte kabhi sapno ke tootne ka gum,
gar sapno ki tukde ankhon me lagte na,
pani khub ba khud aa jata hai tab akhon me,
warna hum bhi anson bahate hue sari raat jaghte na!!


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #34 on: June 30, 2005, 06:59:08 PM »

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

aaj sab josh me hain but main nahi sad5

phir bhi kuch likhne ki koshish karti hoon.

"Yeh hai kisi ke gam ka saaya,
ya meri badkismati ki maaya,
wo mera aaj hai paraaya,
saath jiska har pal nibhaaya,
usne kyun mujhe daaman chudaaya,
kyun pyar me dil aaj phir gaya thukraya."

continue guys.........all r going gr8 today Usual Smile

wow wow wow nidhi..............meena....................super bssssssss .......jawaab nahi tum dono ka.....tumhein aaj kya hua nidhi... main bhi kuch aap logon ke liye arz karta hoon

yeh kis ghum ki wajah se num hue aankhen
kyon jindagi dari dari see lag rahi hai
jo tumhein chod diya hai uske liye ghum na kiya karo
aise haalat mein num na kiya karo apni aankhen.............


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Aman Sarhadi

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«Reply #35 on: June 30, 2005, 07:00:20 PM »

Great Meena u r too good.....bahut kuch seekhne mil raha hai


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Meena

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«Reply #36 on: June 30, 2005, 07:10:33 PM »

shukriya aman ji aur waheed!!!

na chaha kar bhi kuch boondon behe hi jati hai,
chahe kitna bhi bhul jao, par kuch yaadein rehe hi jati hai!!!


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harashmahajan

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«Reply #37 on: June 30, 2005, 07:11:38 PM »

Meena ji dard ki gehraayee aapne bhi khoob naapi hai ....khuda sirf karmo ki basha jaanta hai....main bas yahi kahoonga meena ji....

khijaan aayee jo kismat mein ,bahaaron ka bhi dam nikley,
jahaan doonde ham arma ko wahaan arma bhi kam nikley.
jin rahon se gujarata hoon, woh rahein theher jaati hain
kahin ye raaste aakhir mera madfan na ban nikley.

madfan = murda dafnaane ki jageh

meena ji wrote..

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Meena

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«Reply #38 on: June 30, 2005, 07:43:28 PM »

wow harsh ji wow....what can i say now!!! bohot hi acha likha apne!!

na dafnao mujhe raha me aye duniya walo,
ke koi gir na jaye meri kabr se takra kar,
ek arze se soyi nahin mai, aaj sone do mujhe,
na uthao mujhe neend se, mera nam bula kar!!


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #39 on: June 30, 2005, 07:52:04 PM »

wow wow wonderfull...............work all.............bahot khoob aap logon ne likha......superbsssssssssss meena............... tongue3


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Aryaan

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«Reply #40 on: June 30, 2005, 07:56:04 PM »

Ek mamuli si raat thi who to, par mera sab kuch lut kar le gayi,
Mili us raat se mujhe umar bhar ki tanhai hai,
Wah wah Meena aap ne ek baar phir saabit kar diya keh aap ek mukammal writer hain.... Bohat hi khubsoorat alfaaz hain.....Beautiful...


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Bharat

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«Reply #41 on: July 01, 2005, 01:22:44 AM »

Quote from: "Meena"

"us raat tumari khwahisein pairon tale kisne raundin
maathe per ek sikan tumhare aur badha gaya
apni nakaam hasraton ko bhulaane kahan jaogi "Meena"
kismat mein jo likha usper jor nahi chalta kisi ka................"

wah, waheed kamal ka likha hai!!!

jante hai hum, ke hum kismat ko hara nahin sakhte,
gum pal rahe hai jo seene me, kisi ko bata nahin sakhte,
Toot gayi Khuda se bhi vishwas ki doori,
Kafir ban ke aab Khuda ko sata nahin sakhte!!

Jigar par lagi huyee chot dikhai nahi deti, vo andruni hai
Kisi bewa ki mang ki tarah hamari jindagi bhi suni hai


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harashmahajan

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«Reply #42 on: July 01, 2005, 06:07:03 AM »

Meena ji bahoot andaaz se DARD KU KURED KER teer chalaati ho...her lafz se ahsaas ko bhi dard hota hao wah.....

yuin na kaho ai dost
ki rahein suni ho jaayein
aisa bhi na ho
ki doorian itni bad jaayein..

muzko rahega umra bhar
is toot tey rishtey ka gam
mazboorian jo kutch bhi hain
tuzko bhi hain muzko bhi hain.

utho is neend se ai shaks
mita lo shikwe gile tum aaj
mera ye Dard bulaata hai
mera dil banker ab toh saaj.

meena ji wrote...

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myloveosho

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«Reply #43 on: July 01, 2005, 08:26:43 AM »

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amit ji...
koshish rahegi aage bhi aisa kuch pesh karon!

JHL ji
bohot bohot shukriya dost ji, aap sab se hi sikha hai!

bahut accha likha hai,
kamaal kar diya, u r the best meena ji


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«Reply #44 on: July 01, 2005, 09:30:43 AM »

Thanx meena sis and waheed Usual Smile

Amazing work meena sis,harsh ji and waheed,all r gr8.


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