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Meena

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«Reply #45 on: July 01, 2005, 02:24:50 PM »

Aryaan ji...bohot bohot shukriya..bas ek koshish rehti ha ihumesha aap sab log ose hi to sikha hai warna mai to kuch bhi nahin :D

Desai ji.... bohot acha likha apne!! :D

Harash ji...bas jo dil me hota hai wohi bhayan karti hoon...tareef ke lyie shukriya...aap bhi to bohot acha likhte ho janab! :D

love ji....shukriya ji shukriya tareef ke lyie :D

Nidhi.... thanx kuddiye!![/b]


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #46 on: July 03, 2005, 12:54:19 PM »

All have done good job and thanks also to all for appreciation ...

Aakhon main hai gham ke aansoo,
Aur hoton pe fariyaad hai,
Aur ab kya hai paas humaare,
Sirf ek teri yaad hai..


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nikki

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«Reply #47 on: July 03, 2005, 01:04:19 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

kuch jazbaat...

Bohot kali thi who raat hume yaad hai aab tak,
Guzar chuki who par aab tak meri zindagi pe chayi hai,

Alag hogaye humare unse raste us raat kuch aise,
Jaise dono ki manzil hi ek doosre se parayi hai,

Ek sunapan sa rehe gaya aab mere dil me, ek dard teher gaya,
Dekho, kismat ne meri zindagi pe apni mohar lagayi hai,

Ek mamuli si raat thi who to, par mera sab kuch lut kar le gayi,
Mili us raat se mujhe umar bhar ki tanhai hai,

Aab tak gabrate hai hum raaton se is kadar,
Ke har raat aab mere ankhon me ek nami si layi hai!

kya baat hai Meena sis, simple se tarike se itna sab kuch keh dena aap hi kar sakte ho...........its just wonderfull


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Talat

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«Reply #48 on: July 03, 2005, 01:07:55 PM »

Quote from: "Meena"

Meena ...you are just superb !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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sanya310

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«Reply #49 on: July 03, 2005, 01:10:46 PM »

excellent write Meena!!!!! baki sab ne bohot khoob likhahai!!!! :D


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #50 on: July 03, 2005, 01:14:39 PM »

Mere kuch dost mujhe yuhi sataane aaye,
Khud mujhe mere hi afsaane sunaane aaye,
Din ke dhalte hue lamhon ki kiran bole ke,
Mere taareek e mukaddar ko sajaane aaye ...


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Meena

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«Reply #51 on: July 03, 2005, 02:37:11 PM »

thank u nikki, talat aur sanya..... bas koshish hoti hai aur aap sab ki duayen milti hai islyie kabhi kabhi kuch likh leti hoon!!

thank u :D


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fakharenaveed

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«Reply #52 on: July 03, 2005, 07:38:46 PM »

Well done ................................................. ....All of you.......................


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #53 on: July 07, 2005, 08:10:43 AM »

Thanks a lot Faree ...

Phulo se achhe to kaante hai,
Jo daaman thaam lete hai,
Bewafa sanam se to dushman achhe,
Jo jal ke bhi naam lete hai ...


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #54 on: July 07, 2005, 08:12:56 AM »

Cheez bewafai se badkar kya hogi,
Gum-e-haalat judai se badkar kya hogi,
Jise deni ho sazaa umar bhar ke liye,
Sazaa tanhaayi se badkar kya hogi ...


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Meena

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«Reply #55 on: July 11, 2005, 05:19:43 PM »

gud one JHL ji...

wafa ke inam me de gaye woh hume tanhayi,
humne usse bhi abad kiya uske yaadon ke saath,
humne to kiya vishwas ek ek kasam pe unki,
unone to khilwad kiya mere waadon ke saath!!!


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sandhaya

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«Reply #56 on: July 12, 2005, 05:05:52 AM »

Uske waddon pe jo hum barosa na bhi karte Hum
humari tuh zindagi vaise bhi katam thi uske bina
uska intezaar na karte tuh phir kya karte hum


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #57 on: July 15, 2005, 05:19:47 PM »

Thanks a lot Meena for appreciation ...
Too good Meena and Sandhaya ...
Wonderful one ...
Keep it up both ...

Humko fasna tha kafaz mein kya gila saiyad ka,
Bas taraste hi rahe hai aab aur daane ko hum,
Baag mein lagta nahi shehra mein ghabrata hai dil,
Ab kahaan le jaake baithe aise deewane ko hum ...(nm)


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«Reply #58 on: July 15, 2005, 05:23:15 PM »

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

very nice JHL,sandhaya and meena.mindblowing.


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #59 on: July 15, 2005, 05:26:38 PM »

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Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

very nice JHL,sandhaya and meena.mindblowing.

Thanks a lot Niddhi for appreciation ...


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