Woh samjhate rahe........(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on April 03, 2009, 05:08:25 PM
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Woh samjhate rahe humko wafa ka matlab
Jab baat samajh aayee, humne jana woh bevafaa tha

Is ada se kiya sheikh ne  bayaan-e-khuda
Masoom samajh bhaithe, woh sheikh hi khuda tha

Sab poochte hain humse mere carvaan ka haal
Hum kya jawab dete, tanha mera safar tha tanha  rasta tha

Ab itna bhi na satao, ke sharmindgi ho khudse
Main ab jo bhi ban gaya hu, kabhi aadmi bhala tha

Jo hasta hain meri maut pe, use janta hu main
Kabhi mehboob tha woh mera, woh mera dilruba tha

Itni hasrat thi uske dil me, na rahe mera nishaa.N baki
Dubo kar kashti meri sath woh mere duba, jo mera na_khuda* tha

Mujhse nafrat karne walo me ek baat aam hain
Kabhi pyaar un sabko, GHAYEL se bepanaah tha


* Boat-man
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2009, 05:16:33 PM »
Waah.....Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji  icon_thumleft
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fairy2633
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«Reply #2 on: April 04, 2009, 02:16:25 AM »
nice lines...bahut khoob sajid ji... Clapping Smiley
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: April 04, 2009, 09:33:19 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on April 03, 2009, 05:16:33 PM
Waah.....Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji  icon_thumleft

Nawazish Karam Dost.....
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k.shael
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«Reply #4 on: April 04, 2009, 09:38:09 AM »
 Clapping Smiley   Clapping Smiley

Bahut Khoob Sajid Ji,

Shally.
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diya786
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«Reply #5 on: April 04, 2009, 10:35:24 AM »
bahut accha likha hai Sajid sahab Applause Applause
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #6 on: April 04, 2009, 12:08:39 PM »
Quote from: fairy2633 on April 04, 2009, 02:16:25 AM
nice lines...bahut khoob sajid ji... Clapping Smiley

Thanks for your appreciation Fairy...
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«Reply #7 on: April 05, 2009, 09:01:08 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on April 04, 2009, 09:38:09 AM
Clapping Smiley   Clapping Smiley

Bahut Khoob Sajid Ji,

Shally.



Thank You Shally for giving your time.......
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«Reply #8 on: April 05, 2009, 09:50:06 AM »
Quote from: diya786 on April 04, 2009, 10:35:24 AM
bahut accha likha hai Sajid sahab Applause Applause

Thank You Diya...
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«Reply #9 on: April 05, 2009, 10:02:25 AM »
bahoot khoob ghayel ji....
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«Reply #10 on: April 06, 2009, 09:02:24 AM »
Quote from: bekarar on April 05, 2009, 10:02:25 AM
bahoot khoob ghayel ji....

Thank You Sanjeev for always encouraging me...
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raahgir
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«Reply #11 on: April 06, 2009, 10:17:07 AM »
Ghayal ji
aapne jo bhi likha dil ko lag gayi, har sabd me apne hi halaat najar aa rahe hain. aaj dil nahi kar raha ki kuchh alag likhon aaj dil kar raha hai aap logo ke sabdo me kho jaoon. aapki rachna wakayi kabile taarif hai

wo aaj bhari mehfil bewafa keh gaya humko
jo khud nahi jaanta wafa kya cheej hoti hai
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #12 on: April 06, 2009, 10:49:45 AM »
Nice one Ghayel Ji
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #13 on: April 06, 2009, 12:35:02 PM »
Quote from: raahgir on April 06, 2009, 10:17:07 AM
Ghayal ji
aapne jo bhi likha dil ko lag gayi, har sabd me apne hi halaat najar aa rahe hain. aaj dil nahi kar raha ki kuchh alag likhon aaj dil kar raha hai aap logo ke sabdo me kho jaoon. aapki rachna wakayi kabile taarif hai

wo aaj bhari mehfil bewafa keh gaya humko
jo khud nahi jaanta wafa kya cheej hoti hai

Oh yaar kya ho gaya agar kuch hua bhi to likh diya kar yaar, yeh dard hi to hamari syahi hain iske bina kalem kis kam ki......kuch samjhe ke nahi.

Tareef ke liye bohat shukriyaa.....
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«Reply #14 on: April 07, 2009, 09:17:41 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 06, 2009, 10:49:45 AM
Nice one Ghayel Ji

Nawazish karam mere dost....
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