~*Woh Subha Ka Dhoop*~

by honeyrose on March 19, 2008, 06:54:43 AM
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Woh subha ka dhoop ley aaye tere pyaar ka sandesh
Woh mujhe phir na mile uss subha ke baad

Umar guzar jaati hai tere intezar mein uss subha ke baad
Ek mulaqat thi aur tanha ruk gaye hum uss subha ke baad

Ek aisa zakhm mila hai humey uss subha ke baad
Laut aane ki umeed mein zindagi gawa di humey uss subha ke baad

Andher lag rahe hai sare duniya ki takhleeq uss subha ke baad
Mayus hue hai hum har lamha uss subha ke baad
 

 

 
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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2008, 08:52:03 AM »
Woh subha ka dhoop ley aaye tere pyaar ka sandesh
Woh mujhe phir na mile uss subha ke baad

Umar guzar jaati hai tere intezar mein uss subha ke baad
Ek mulaqat thi aur tanha ruk gaye hum uss subha ke baad

Ek aisa zakhm mila hai humey uss subha ke baad
Laut aane ki umeed mein zindagi gawa di humey uss subha ke baad

Andher lag rahe hai sare duniya ki takhleeq uss subha ke baad
Mayus hue hai hum har lamha uss subha ke baad
 

 

 


awesome   honeyrose.............   bahot  umda  poem  aap  ne lilkhi/................ 
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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2008, 08:56:19 AM »
Bohot khoob Honey...yunhi likhte rahiyega Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2008, 09:43:17 AM »
Shukriya Waheed ji
Shukriya Talat sis..Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: March 19, 2008, 10:58:47 AM »
Bahoot KHoob Sis,
Kamaal Ki Hai Ek ek Lines Bhi,.
Waise Kaise Mahol Mein Ye Kalaam Ko Tayyar Kiya Aapne,.
Bahott Badiya Hai,.
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«Reply #5 on: March 19, 2008, 11:12:42 AM »
Subhaa Ki Dhoop Kehar Barsaa Gayi,.
Raat Dekar Yaad Uski, Dil KO Tarsaa Gayi,.

Raat Aur Din Bhi Jaane Kyun Tadpaa Rahein Hain,.
Mere Ansoon Ki Ahaat Barsaat Bhi Sunaa Rahein Hain,.

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«Reply #6 on: March 19, 2008, 11:25:42 AM »
Bohat acha likha hai Azeem bro..

Woh subha ki dhoop tumhe yaad kar rahi hai
Woh mere dil se na jaaye woh haseen khwab hai
Tumse door hue hum jaise sawan ka rimjim mausam hai
Tanhaye se dil pe ek sailab khel rahe hai
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«Reply #7 on: March 21, 2008, 09:24:41 AM »
Shukriya Didi And Nice One,.
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«Reply #8 on: March 27, 2008, 04:48:02 AM »
Woh subha ka doop koi rangon ki khushi hai
Ek  Zakhm-e-kaaree mein uljan thi
Dard main bhi ek awaaz hoti hai
Woh subha ka doop tumare sandesh lati hai


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«Reply #9 on: March 29, 2008, 05:08:51 PM »
Nice One Honey Sis,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,. Applause
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«Reply #10 on: November 09, 2008, 01:14:47 PM »
Shukriya Azeem bhai notworthy
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«Reply #11 on: November 09, 2008, 01:54:39 PM »
Bahoot Badiya Sis,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
Aur Apne Shayariyon Se Nawaazte rahiye,.
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«Reply #12 on: November 09, 2008, 01:56:50 PM »
Subha Ki Dhoop, Ki Rohsni Ab Mere Ghar Se Nikalti Nahi,.
Ghamon Ki Raat Ne, Bakhshein Hain Mujhe, Kuch is Tarah ke Andhere,.

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«Reply #13 on: November 10, 2008, 07:24:33 AM »
Subha Ki Dhoop, Ki Rohsni Ab Mere Ghar Se Nikalti Nahi,.
Ghamon Ki Raat Ne, Bakhshein Hain Mujhe, Kuch is Tarah ke Andhere,.

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Bohat khoob bhai


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Kabhi moudke dekhiye aapne aagan mein hoga ek naya sawera...

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«Reply #14 on: November 10, 2008, 01:51:48 PM »
Shukriya Didi And Nice One,.
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