Yaad Aati To Hogi

by Meena on March 06, 2005, 03:23:05 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 06, 2005, 06:38:07 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Tume bhi kabhi tanhayi meri yaad aati to hogi,
Ansoon ban kar teri ankhon me woh beheti to hogi,

Dunyia ke liye chahe pattar dil bane tum,
Par judai tere dil pe apna roop jamati to hogi,

Mere saath chalna tume gawara nahin tha,
Par meri duaon ki roshni tume rasta dikhati to hogi,

Lak chupa lo ehesas-e-mohabbat ko tum,
Par tanhai me ek gutan si mehesoos hoti to hogi!


dhuup hai kyaa aur saayaa kyaa hai ab maaluum huaa
ye sab khel tamaashaa kyaa hai ab maaluum huaa

hansate phuul kaa cheharaa dekhuun aur bhar aaii aankh
apane saath ye qissaa kyaa hai ab maaluum huaa

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«Reply #16 on: March 07, 2005, 08:08:29 AM »
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Quote from: "Meena"
Tume bhi kabhi tanhayi meri yaad aati to hogi,
Ansoon ban kar teri ankhon me woh beheti to hogi,

Dunyia ke liye chahe pattar dil bane tum,
Par judai tere dil pe apna roop jamati to hogi,

Mere saath chalna tume gawara nahin tha,
Par meri duaon ki roshni tume rasta dikhati to hogi,

Lak chupa lo ehesas-e-mohabbat ko tum,
Par tanhai me ek gutan si mehesoos hoti to hogi!



wah wah meena bohat khoob


chup rahoon gi jo kahega koi tujh ko bewafa
is se badh kar teri ruswai na hone doon gi
yaad aaoon gi tujhe ache dinoo ki sorat
mein mukamal teri tanahi na hone doon gi


wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   arifa meri  sis................... nice  work  all........... :lol:
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«Reply #17 on: March 07, 2005, 05:14:39 PM »
wah hum tum ji asusuall lajawab hai aap!!

 :D
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«Reply #18 on: March 07, 2005, 06:04:02 PM »
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wah hum tum ji asusuall lajawab hai aap!!

 :D


Thanks Meena ji...:D
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«Reply #19 on: March 07, 2005, 06:08:43 PM »
nice gum ji!

 :D
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«Reply #20 on: March 09, 2005, 12:54:20 PM »
Bahut Achha Likha Hai Sab ne ...
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«Reply #21 on: March 10, 2005, 09:26:53 AM »
wonderful meena and gum,and ofcourse waheed. :D
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«Reply #22 on: March 10, 2005, 09:32:35 AM »
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wonderful meena and gum,and ofcourse waheed. :D


Wht abt me ... :cry:
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«Reply #23 on: March 10, 2005, 10:00:38 AM »
oops.....u r always wonderful,said or unsaid.
i forgot 2 write just by mistake.Sorry,next time no mistakes. Usual Smile

Wonderful POETRY by HUMTUM :D
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«Reply #24 on: March 10, 2005, 10:14:22 AM »
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oops.....you r always wonderful,said or unsaid.
i forgot 2 write just by mistake.Sorry,next time no mistakes. Usual Smile

Wonderful POETRY by HUMTUM :D


 :D  Thanku hai Nidhi ji..... i was just kidding. janta hun yha yoindia mein kalam ke mahiroN ki koi kmi nhi hai. Aap sab doostoN ki likhi kalmoN aur nazmoN ko ped ker aur do char lafz  jod ker ke kuch likh deta hun varna meri yha Aukaat kya hai.... Thanks a lot Nidhi ji....

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«Reply #25 on: March 10, 2005, 02:18:40 PM »
very nice shayri hai Meenajiii....very good work...
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«Reply #26 on: March 10, 2005, 02:23:09 PM »
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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
oops.....you r always wonderful,said or unsaid.
i forgot 2 write just by mistake.Sorry,next time no mistakes. Usual Smile

Wonderful POETRY by HUMTUM :D


 :D  Thanku hai Nidhi ji..... i was just kidding. janta hun yha yoindia mein kalam ke mahiroN ki koi kmi nhi hai. Aap sab doostoN ki likhi kalmoN aur nazmoN ko ped ker aur do char lafz  jod ker ke kuch likh deta hun varna meri yha Aukaat kya hai.... Thanks a lot Nidhi ji....

HumTum


Aisa kyon keh rahe hain,humtum ji,yahan har insaan ka alag wajood hai,dobara aisa mat kahiyega,jis tarah apko lagta hai that u just write like this usi tarah yahan 80% logo ko lagta hai,infact main bhi bas aise hi likh deti hoon Winking

U really write wonderful,and i love 2 read ur poems......aise hi likhte rahiyega. Usual Smile


ye sher apke naam:

"humtum yun milenge socha na thha......,
 thokar lagne par hame aap sambhalenge,
 aisa bhi kabhi socha na thha......,
 par ye zindagi hi tumhari hai,
 ye arzoo bas hamari hai......,
 aise hi chahte rehna hame,
 kyonki ye wafa bhi tumhari hai."
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«Reply #27 on: March 10, 2005, 03:14:21 PM »
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Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
oops.....you r always wonderful,said or unsaid.
i forgot 2 write just by mistake.Sorry,next time no mistakes. Usual Smile

Wonderful POETRY by HUMTUM :D


 :D  Thanku hai Nidhi ji..... i was just kidding. janta hun yha yoindia mein kalam ke mahiroN ki koi kmi nhi hai. Aap sab doostoN ki likhi kalmoN aur nazmoN ko ped ker aur do char lafz  jod ker ke kuch likh deta hun varna meri yha Aukaat kya hai.... Thanks a lot Nidhi ji....

HumTum


Aisa kyon keh rahe hain,humtum ji,yahan har insaan ka alag wajood hai,dobara aisa mat kahiyega,jis tarah apko lagta hai that you just write like this usi tarah yahan 80% logo ko lagta hai,infact main bhi bas aise hi likh deti hoon Winking

you really write wonderful,and i love 2 read ur poems......aise hi likhte rahiyega. Usual Smile


ye sher apke naam:

"humtum yun milenge socha na thha......,
 thokar lagne par hame aap sambhalenge,
 aisa bhi kabhi socha na thha......,
 par ye zindagi hi tumhari hai,
 ye arzoo bas hamari hai......,
 aise hi chahte rehna hame,
 kyonki ye wafa bhi tumhari hai."


Wow very nice sher... thanks very much indeed..... :D
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«Reply #28 on: March 11, 2005, 09:49:34 AM »
nice work all
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«Reply #29 on: March 13, 2005, 07:48:23 AM »
It was a good one Nidhiji ...


Unki tasveero ko seene se laga lete hai,
Is tarah judai ka ghum mitaa dete hai,
Kisi tarah kabhi unka zikr ho jaaye,
To bheegi palko ko jhuka lete hai ......
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