yaad rakhna

by Sonu on July 12, 2004, 03:55:57 AM
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Yaad Rakhna tumsey bichad kar jeena mera mushkil hai aashan nahi dard to tune dey diya aab muskarana meyra aashan nahi magar haroongi na himmat,ladaugi takdeer sey mein ek din to kaam aayega, sanam ye jeena mera ye wada hai mera, eshe bhool na jana yaad aayega ek din to tujhe,mohabhat ka fasana mera
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«Reply #1 on: July 12, 2004, 04:29:21 AM »
Hey Sonu. That is Nazm is good..

Naa samajh ke befawa hai hum,
arey in  befafaion ne bhi toh hamsey wafa naa ki....
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«Reply #2 on: July 12, 2004, 08:26:19 AM »
its gud just dont typr in paragraph
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«Reply #3 on: July 12, 2004, 12:06:05 PM »
sabas
bahut khoob ary yaar ab to lagata hain sayaron ki mahfil hi baith gayi bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: July 12, 2004, 12:11:46 PM »
Yes ..

We are now having good people to appreciate , encourage each other !!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 12, 2004, 05:35:16 PM »
Sonu Ji..
Ricky ji sahi keh rahe hain. mein bhi aapki aur post dekhi hain .. maine wahan bhi kaha ki agar aap pragraph ki tarah naa likhkar sher ki tarah likhenge toh yeh nazm aur bhi khoobsoorat lagegi..

Shukriya
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«Reply #6 on: July 13, 2004, 05:29:43 AM »
thanks guys shukerya app sabka. saima ji thik hia mey ab pragraph mey nahi lekhungi Usual Smile
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